Demon Slayer: Tokito, Your Sister Isn’t Called Yuichiro!

Super pretty! One of my favorite Demon Slayer videos (the other one is Chinatsu-chan ✪ω✪), whether it's character interaction or fighting scenes, it can stir up emotions. The rating will definitely go up, wow, the emotional line with Fugui Yuyu is also very interesting~(￣▽￣~)~

Really pretty, 👩 👚 This novel really surprised me! The storyline is rich and varied, and the characters have distinct and unique personalities that make you want to keep reading. The author's writing style is beautiful and smooth, and the words are filled with a strong artistic flavor, making people immersed in the wonderful story world. In addition, the plot twists in the novel are unexpected and endlessly memorable. Overall, this novel is a great read and I would recommend it to my friends. 👖

A very nice fanfic! I really like Qingying's character! Very female protagonist. There are a lot of fighting scenes in the article and less emotional scenes, but it's so sweet! ! And the writing is not bad, and the moves' names are very nice. Anyway, I love [Love]! ! !

Hmm... This book is quite interesting and interesting. The CP between the heroine and Yiyong is quite sweet. The deputy CP is also very sweet, and there are several couples (Snake Love, etc.) There is a happy ending, the only regret is that the lord and his wife died and did not survive to the end.

First, let's look at the overall structure. The framework of this fanfic is very well built, and the combat description is also very popular with me. It not only fits the style of the original work, but also does not fall into the cliché of "brainless cheating" style cool writing. The character creation is always online. Especially Immortal River, he carried out his energy from beginning to end, hahaha! The interactive description of the emotional line is full of pink bubbles, and the atmosphere is full~ Although the beginning of the relationship between the heroine and Tomioka Giyu is indeed a little abrupt, but other than that, the overall look and feel is very comfortable, and it is a fan work that I personally like very much.

There are so many extras that are very touching. There was just one chapter in the middle that almost scared people to death, but the rest was great. The author's writing style is very good and delicate, and the description of the characters is also very vivid. Don't hesitate to read the comments outside, come and take a look.

Overall it's pretty good, the pace is a little fast, but it's pretty good. Except for the lord and Mrs. Tianyin, everyone basically survives, and no arms or legs are missing. It's great that the author, as a high school freshman, wrote this, but there are still shortcomings. 1. The mix of Chinese and Japanese, and the accent, looks weird. 2. Ignore the full concentration and common use. This is a method that can improve yourself in daily life. Ignoring it is a mistake. 3. Masaki, Giyuu and Qioto should have known each other since they were studying under Mr. Rinlong, and it seems that Masaki was selected in the next session of Giyuu and Qioto (? I can't remember clearly). Zhen Ye was ignored in the early stage, and appeared in a later place, and it appeared as the CP of Qi Rabbit (not really counting, it is ambiguous). This is not quite right. I don't care whether it becomes CP with Qi Rabbit. The main reason is that the time when Zhen Xi appeared was not right (this can be regarded as a small mistake) (? Don't scold me if I'm wrong🙏) 4. Confusing breathing techniques with sword skills. One is basic skills and the other is skills. If you mix them up, it will not work. It will be a big mistake. 5. The relationship between the protagonist and Yiyong develops very quickly. It develops in leaps and bounds, not step by step. It can be improved in the future, but the writing is not bad. 5. The last one is my own feeling. Maybe I feel wrong. I apologize first, don't scold me. It's just that when I read it, I always feel that some sentences are strange, but I can't tell what is strange. It is very similar to what ds would say when I role-played with ds before. It has a faint strange feeling of human-machine, because I chatted with ds quite a lot, and I always feel like I have seen some sentences when I see them. Sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry, maybe I feel wrong, you can ignore this (sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry) So overall I think it's pretty good. You can take a look. Come on, teacher💪

I think this article written by the author is very good. The details, expressions and movements of each character are very well written. What surprised me is that the emotions of Yiyong and Qingying are very well written. So I think this book written by the author is very good, so I gave it five stars. I also ask the author to read it for himself! ! ! ! ! [Love][Love][Love][Love][Love][Laugh][Laugh][Laugh][Laugh][Laugh][Laugh]

Goodgood's writing style is very delicate. It is one of the few demon slayer stories that I can read. It is more funny, but the writing is very exciting during the battle! The emotions are also written very smoothly, not OOC at all. I like the author greatly [like][like][like][love] I finished reading it today, yes. It looks very good

The fighting is well written, and the emotional line is a bit abrupt, but it doesn't hinder the fight. The ending is happy, but the author's description is a bit funny in some places, which is good, and neutralizes the serious and tragic atmosphere.