Demon Slayer Fanfiction: The Untold Story of the Tomioka Family

Wow, it's really well written! The original work was badly damaged by a knife. Although I read the fanfic to make up for my regrets, I didn't expect that I still like being knifed... (No) Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba is more interesting if it has a knife👍

It took me one night to read it, and I felt like it was a good book, with flaws that do not hide its virtues. The emotions of Quanxu and Yiyong are natural and delicate, and they are well grasped. But what I want to say more is Quanxu's positioning in the middle period of this book. I think she is more like a bond, a common family, Giyuu's Bai Yueguang, and the person who inherited Kanae's will, so Giyuu, Izumi and Shinobu seem to have become a family, and their relationship with each other is more similar to family affection. Giyuu and Shinobu are like the kind of brothers and sisters who care about each other and can quarrel. Shinobu and Izumo's relationship is inherited from Kanae, a deep sisterhood. Giyu and Izumi are the purest love. The relationship between these three people is well shaped and great. What I like most is the daily life after the war. It is indeed warm and real. I hope the author can make more efforts to let Yiyong watch his children grow up. Speaking of Quanxu itself, I think there is a slight problem with the character's role design, that is, the ending is set too early. Her premature exit meant that she had basically nothing to do with the Demon Slayer Corps. Even though there was a lot of writing about her, she was indeed marginalized and slightly separated. All in all, this is a good book with a good pace and detailed descriptions. Come on!

I personally think it's pretty good. Next, it's about my love for storytelling and the extent of changes to the original work. If you just want to watch those that make up for regrets and save others, don't watch it. The writing of the whole book is good, but well, the heroine is more likely to provide an emotion, a bond that gives him the hope of living, and the heroine herself will be very weak. The summary is that if you want to read love sadism, you can come in, but if you want to make up for your regrets and see that the heroine is strong, don't read it.

Okay, okay, after the protagonist is seriously injured, a tetanus blade will come over to scrape your skin and cry to death. When the protagonist needs comfort, Yuyu happens to be by his side. It's so terrifying. This is the art of language.

I feel like this book still has a lot of potential. It would be great if the author could write another subplot in which the heroine becomes a style without any damage to her lungs.

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I suddenly discovered that this book has no ratings and is very beautiful! Very nice! It's the type I like. Although it is an original character, it is well integrated into the plot and does not interfere too much with the plot! And the steady stream of water warmed Yiyong! Looking forward to more works from the teacher!

Tied! It's so good that I almost watched it from beginning to end. The original novel was a dead end, but fortunately, life after marriage is super sweet [full] Waiting for the author to make a big show 😳

Beautiful! (*≧M≦*) Big boost to the author!!! ♥(｡￫V￩｡)♥

Wow wow wow, I stayed up late and saw a little bit more, I'm going to die with a knife😭, super beautiful