
Naruto: Black Naruto as Hokage? No, the Great Traitor!
火影,我黑鸣当火影?不!大叛忍
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- 8mo ago
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The writing is very good, especially when it is mentioned in the book that Naruto spent 100 taels of silver to buy rice and 1,000 taels to buy a hairpin for Hinata. And the words "aunt" make me think this is Naruto from the Qing Dynasty era! It smells so much! Full marks, haha
Reasonable, tolerant enough, knowing good and evil, right and wrong. Absolutely top quality.
It must be full marks. Come on, the author. It's so enjoyable to watch. The only drawback is that the protagonist does a lot of big things later and there is no system prompt to add points. However, I can understand that after all, the writing workload will be much greater and I may not be able to focus on content creation. From the time I read this book until now, the author has insisted on updating two chapters every day. From the first chapter to the 380th chapter, the author's writing has always been very exciting, and there is nothing that makes me feel unreasonable. It can be said that the author has a very deep understanding of the Naruto anime. Well-known characters in the anime have appeared in this book. The author can vividly portray the characters in the original book with just a few strokes. I am looking forward to the follow-up plot. I hope the author can Enough to continue creating so that we can see a brand new ninja world, a ninja world without war and pain, without exploitation and domination. I have read more than a dozen Naruto novels on Tomato, and I think this one is the best. Of course, it is just a personal opinion. The specifics still depend on your own preferences. I hope the author can write more chapters to make the novel richer in content and worldview. These are some of my current thoughts.
The rest of the story was unexpectedly exciting. When I looked at the score, I thought it would be about the old routine of contrast and excitement created by Naruto's pure blackening. However, when Naruto, the time-traveler, went from pure revenge for a bad childhood to self-awakening with the goal of overthrowing the sick structure of the ninja world, the plot finally started to become exciting. I look forward to the protagonist's world-changing plan and see if he can attract more fellow travelers with his philosophy, personality, charm and wisdom that transcends the boundaries of the times, instead of relying solely on systematic mechanical deification. With a vision beyond the times, he can obtain more essential power than Otsutsuki based on the plot of the original work. What kind of future world with the characteristics of the ninja world will be shown in the future. (PS: We don't want the old-fashioned pure technological future. What we hope is the ninja world technology that can deduce the characteristics of chakra based on the plot that appears in the original work; the anatomical output of concepts and twisted values in the ninja world hopes to not only impress people in the ninja world, but also give readers who like Naruto a sense of excitement [salute] [salute] [salute])
I think this author writes very decisively, and also has human struggles, unlike other authors who defected, and then all the struggles that day were covered up in one stroke, but it just doesn't have that real taste [laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][smile][laugh][laugh][almost crying] But author, you do seem to have some ink stains.
At least four stars. I saw a few comments saying that procrastination feels like malicious comments. Please, what I wrote is about betrayal and ninja. Some psychological activities are very necessary. Is it necessary to have a pig's foot in the first chapter to cheat on Naruto in the second chapter, and then start fighting in the third chapter, then defect in the fourth chapter, and directly fight the six paths in the fifth chapter. Would you feel comfortable writing it this way? Don't pay attention to individual malicious comments. At least so far, the psychological description of the characters, the characterization of the characters, the plot development, as well as the background and environment are all reasonable. If you want to read mindless stories, look for it. There is always a book that can give you an Olivier.
The plot is somewhat similar to another one, Naruto's Defection, but the treatment is more sophisticated, not light-hearted but very real. There is almost no system in this book, and it is mentioned less than five times. It almost all relies on prophets to act. This is quite in line with my expectations, and there is not much room for action. Although each step is very slow, it is very steady. I think it is a good book.
He kills decisively and without hesitation. Being kind to the enemy means being cruel to yourself. Many of the doubts in the original drama have quite reasonable explanations. The protagonist has a clear goal. From becoming a ninja, he became stronger and more tolerant, and later when Konoha collapsed and rebelled against the village, he traveled around the villages and became stronger until he had his own power. In order to change the pattern of ninjas, he became the enemy of the world...
I really want to fight for this work! I have dug up another treasure that is seriously underestimated. The score of 6 points is simply ridiculously low. In my heart, it is definitely in the echelon of 9 points or above. You see how solid its growth line is, the battle scenes are so exciting, and the confrontation of ideas between the characters is even more exciting. The most rare thing is that the creation of dark characters is completely non-facial, and the logic is self-consistent enough to completely convince me to accept their transformation. Such a conscientious and good work must be given to everyone!
It's very nice to watch. Each character's personality is very detailed. It's normal for them to kill each other even if they have different stances.