A Mortal's Quest for Immortality

It describes another aspect of ordinary people cultivating immortality, which is difficult. There are no sudden opportunities, it's all a struggle between life and death. Opportunities and risks are interdependent. If you can seize opportunities, you must face corresponding risks. Very well written. The author is very willing to understand readers' writing suggestions, while ensuring the independence of his own writing. He does not accept them all, but selects useful suggestions, which is very good.

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The pace of this novel is quite slow, at least that's how I feel so far. But it's quite interesting. Every time the protagonist grows up, the details are described a lot, which is also what I like. However, there is one complaint. The protagonist is a soul traveler, but he doesn't look like a modern person at all.

The writing is ok. It is a rare masterpiece of Tomato. It is not a bad person cultivating immortality, and it is also more realistic. The balance of interests in the relationship is more reliable. There are no shortcuts in cultivation, just one step at a time, and the journey home was really emotional, flesh and blood. There are also shortcomings. There are a lot of desperate jokes, and survival depends entirely on the halo of the protagonist. The growth is a bit slow. I hope there will be less proactive risk-taking in the future.

@ Crab roe burger Shennong is here. (If you don't want to read so many words, you can just read the summary below.) Now I have read the latest chapter. The first few chapters of this book are very well described, with a score of more than 9 points. Later, the writing style drops a bit, but at the lowest it is still a score of more than 8 points. In terms of the poisonous points of this book, it is not big poison, but little poison. The controversial point is in Chapter 67. If you are interested in this book, you can read it and then decide whether to read it or not. Personally, I think the senior sister is a bit presumptuous and should apologize. The most outstanding thing about the rest is the author himself. Take advice, be positive, write well, and have a good attitude. There should be no more than five such authors in the whole Tomato. To sum up, this book has a high limit, has potential, and is top-notch among ordinary people. I highly recommend it.

I have read Chapter 337 so far. Let me share my personal feelings. This is a novel about mortals cultivating immortality, but it is relatively plain, without much drama about bitterness, hatred and intrigue, so it can also be read as a farming novel. The protagonist of this book is positioned as a transparent person with ordinary appearance, mediocre qualifications and average understanding. Thanks to hard work, caution, and a series of small opportunities provided by the author (this is the key point), I was fortunate enough to successfully build the foundation. There was no pretentiousness or slap in the face, no overstepping of ranks to kill the enemy, and no one showing off in front of anyone. In a very delicate way, the author describes the process of a little person who is at the bottom of the world of immortality, struggling all the way to improve his cultivation. This book is actually relatively immature in its writing, but there are two points that suit my taste, so I am willing to give it 5 stars. 1. Although the protagonist is old, he has a bottom line in what he does and has a strong sense of humanity. For example, in order to meet his parents, he was willing to stay in the world of mortals for five years; when he saw someone fighting a monster and losing both sides, he took the initiative to save the person and even gave part of the elixir he picked up to the person; 2. The author of this book will not be infinitely partial to the protagonist. The supporting characters in his novel are all normal people. This should not be mentioned specifically, it is mainly based on the support of peers. In too many books, the supporting characters either mock the protagonist without thinking, fall in love with the protagonist for no reason, or randomly assume the identity of a villain and are tortured and killed by the protagonist, or are humiliated without limit by the protagonist of the comedy. It is really disgusting. The supporting characters in this book who make friends with the protagonist are either life and death partners, collaborators with related interests, or they are optimistic about the protagonist's future and make friends in advance.

The plot description and personal settings are very good. The only three shortcomings are that in combat, the combat skills are too single, holding a sword but not swordsmanship (only one Condensing Fire Finger), that is, the combat power is low, and I have already tasted the benefits of body training before, but I didn't think about it or go to the sect and the auction house to seek it. As a result, none of the battles were positive. Every time I practice, I practice hard work in seclusion, but I forget that in the early third level of Qi refining, the benefits brought by traveling in the mountains are far beyond what can be compared with hard work.

I've been reading a lot of novels about mortals lately, and it's really hard to write about mortals without cheating. Many authors will arrange for characters to die later! Mortals can have a certain skill. But don't be too exaggerated when it comes to cheating! I hope the author can stick with it! I think what you are writing now is pretty good. There are some inconsistencies in individual characters, so I won't go into details. Author, hold on! Don't break it, don't let it end!

It is a rare and good book. The storyline is connected one by one, the character is portrayed, the direction of the story, and the most important thing is that the author writes with his brain as a cultivator in his heart. Come on! ! ! ! It's fun to watch it again after half a year

This book is quite good, with basically no poisonous points (after reading so many novels written by mortals, this book has a lot of poisonous points). I didn't expect the author's first book to be so well written. It is not wordy, the language is concise, and the image of the protagonist is also very well created. He is decisive and decisive in killing. In fact, after the protagonist builds the foundation, he can leave the sect to find opportunities to break through. Just like Han Laomo, he can become a lone wolf cultivator. This is very interesting. Being a sect will not help the protagonist. You must decisively leave when you are a helper. This is the normal state of cultivation. Tomato has a lot of so-called mortals staying in the same sect (the same, not interesting at all, and even creates a protagonist who is extremely loyal to the sect. He practices for himself and not for the so-called sect [vomit]). In the future, if you write a story about a lone wolf who is a casual cultivator, the author's level will be extremely high. I don't know if the author has this level to create an image of a protagonist who is dedicated to the Tao and only cultivates immortality. Never be overly compassionate and generous in sharing with others. There shouldn't be any plot about recruiting disciples or establishing a sect in the future. The protagonist himself has average qualifications and insufficient resources to accept any disciples and open any sect. These will affect the protagonist's energy and resources, and how can he ascend to the spiritual world or even the fairy world in the future [eating melon]