A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: Immortals Should Cultivate Secondhand!

I solemnly swear: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly declare: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to coding every day and every night. This book is a traditional ordinary book, not a brainless novel. Regardless of the bad reviews or good reviews, I would like to thank all my Taoist friends. After all, they have read my book carefully. It is the first time I come across this type of novel. It has many flaws and is not easy to create. I have written down the points everyone pointed out in a memo and corrected them. I will never do it again in the future!

Five stars are for motivation. In fact, the writing is good, but the protagonist's emotional intelligence is insufficient and not as smooth as Fang Yuan. Many of the twists are too blunt, but considering that the magic novel is the world's enemy, it is normal. But if the author wants to go further, he can ask Obsession and Dao Xin The direction is written, for example, love cannot be achieved, hate is like separation, killing the person you love and cares with your own hands, wanting to get everything but in vain, paying a terrible price for the goal, the essence of the magic novel lies in the heart and human relationships, rather than a killing novel.

The setting is good, even if he was arrested, he wouldn't be searched? Moreover, in such a big cell, the two of them were not in the same cell according to the description, so the cell leader didn't hear their conversation?

The score is low, at least 8 points should be raised. There are no poisonous points. The protagonist kills decisively, the fighting is very exciting, and the supporting characters also have their own characteristics. The cruelty of the world of immortality is fully described, and every one of them is a sinister sixth man!

It's okay, five stars for support. I thought it was a dark text at first, but later I saw that it was just a flow of mortals who were killing decisively. There is also the one that is barely considered a golden finger, but I feel that it is not very useful. The relationship between Luo Laodao was written very well, but the timeline jumped too fast and felt a bit stiff. There are no weird depictions of women, and hopefully no female protagonists.

The writing is good, mainly because the plot is rich and full of ups and downs. Compared with Tomato's pile of AI and primary school students' hydrology, this book can be read. Not that much water. Although there are some unreasonable and poisonous points, they are harmless.

There are shadows of mortals, come on, author. It's okay to borrow from others when you write your own story, but borrowing too much can easily bias your own storytelling ability. I hope to write a story that belongs to Chen Laomo (Chen Tianzun) [smile][smile]

It should be hand-made. I haven't seen any particularly strange AI points. The quality is quite good. At present, it is only when registering for others that you give your real name. This is a little strange. But in other places, there are no poisonous points so far.

It's a pretty good novel. The author is probably a bit older. It's a more traditional Hugh Immortal novel. The overall score should be above 8.0. If it were placed more than ten years ago, it should be above 8.5 Points. If it is placed now, it may be almost meaningless, because in the current environment, everyone prefers to read fast-paced novels, no matter what genre they are. The pace of this novel is okay, in fact, it is not very slow, and many ideas are very good. Many magic weapons, dungeons, and many plots are also very good, but there is a problem with cheats, because currently, cultivating immortals is also very good. Well, whether it is fantasy or rebirth, the golden finger is one of the most important points for readers to read novels. In fact, I don't think the introduction of the golden finger in this article is so detailed. I think the role of the golden finger is too low. For example, Some of these talismans must be particularly powerful. Since you can copy them infinitely, I think it is relatively easy. Many times they include some magic weapons, some elixirs, some elixirs, etc. There must be something very awesome. You just need to take some broken things and you can copy them. I think this is a very incredible effect, but maybe I was afraid that the thing I wrote was too invincible, so this point was not highlighted.

Mortals cultivating immortals would definitely not be so smooth if they were not Long Aotian. The character of the protagonist is kind and kind to him, and he will repay kindness. He will not kill people who have no hatred, but he will retaliate immediately if he has a chance. I guess I won't like them too much if they just like to kill everything they encounter. In addition, it may be because of the settings that the spiritual roots of the two newly discovered people were not absorbed to improve my own spiritual roots. It may be that the level is too low to absorb it, or something like that.