Listening to Rain as Autumn Deepens

The heroine Ye Tingyu in the author's novel has the shadow of every ordinary girl. Her life is not a dream, but is very close to reality. Her parents love her very much. Her family is very ordinary and not rich. Her grades were not excellent, but later she met the person she liked - Zhou Jianqiu, and she studied hard. However, due to taking drugs, she failed in the high school entrance examination. She entered the first high school and the second high school in her choice, leaving no way out for herself. Her parents would go around begging for Ye Tingyu, asking for a chance to study as a student. Her best friend is very good and will comfort her when she is down and let her know that she is not alone... I really like Lu Yuan's sentence in it: "Just like some people, you think they are walking in a certain direction, but in fact their focus has long been biased." (In Chapter 12) In my eyes, he is not the second male lead. Because he is like the reflection of thousands of secret admirers. "He thought she would keep troubling him, asking him to copy her homework, and playing with his touch-screen phone." (In Chapter 3) There are many more, but in the end I missed them.

After reading this, I was deeply touched. The distance between people is always pulled or pushed away by words. Sometimes you may feel that you have made it clear, but the two parties with different ideas go further and further in the misunderstanding. As expected, we still have to fight straight [crying] After thinking about it, I still recommend this book. Although it makes me feel very regretful and uncomfortable after reading it, there are obviously so many moments where we can be together as long as the other person is on the same frequency, but in the end we are not. But this is the fact, and it also makes us know the importance of understanding and understanding each other [Blow kiss]

It's very realistic. The secret competition between parents and the pressure on students are all described just right. I think I can deepen the character description of the supporting characters with a few suggestions. I wish the teacher will get better and better! I believe teachers should work harder!

My wife's writing is super, super, super nice, and the emotional line is quite clear, but at first I thought Lu was the male protagonist [laughing]

The ending is very regretful... Why did they miss each other, why couldn't they speak in advance [cry] [cry] [cry] I discovered a detail. The author always used them when writing about him, and he used them when writing about the male protagonist. Maybe they are both a regret in each other's heart... Have you really let go of each other?

I recently read a pretty good romance book. The author's writing style is indeed a bit immature. For example, the characters are too unnatural and the foreshadowing is not taken back. The most important thing I want to say is the ending. The part where the male protagonist is waiting for Tingyu really touched me, but the ending is very weak. There is no ending between the second male protagonist and the female protagonist's best friend, which makes it feel incomplete. But overall it is not bad. The author must write more campus novels like this!

The plot is very realistic and depicts all the small daily things in life, but I feel that the portrayal of the characters is not delicate enough. For example, the character Li Wenshan is a bit complicated. She was very mean to Ye Tingyu at the beginning, but then suddenly she became a little caring, which was not natural enough. Then some foreshadowings were not recycled, such as what does the "LNS" engraved on Hello Kitty mean. The above are my personal suggestions. I hope the author will get better and better.

It's very beautiful, but the author made some mistakes [crying] It's a pity

Woo woo hoo, why is it gone? [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] What a be, such a true story [cry] And the part in the middle where Ting Yu's parents care about her is really unbearable. Will the author still write be articles?

It's really good, it's so cruel, there are no exaggerated descriptions, only the bits and pieces of youth.