The Dragon-Slaying Protagonist’s Junior Brother? Even a Dog Wouldn’t Take That Job!

It feels okay The character of Protagonist 1 is quite likable. Except for the few paragraphs that describe 0's shocking appearance, which are a bit uncomfortable, I think the rest is okay. The emotional drama progresses relatively quickly, so it can be eaten as a cookie filled with ups and downs.

It's okay, I hate amnesia jokes The two protagonists do not complain about being bullied by others or by scumbag men and scumbag women, and they retaliate on the spot. This is very refreshing and does not feel aggrieved. But it's a bit frustrating to have to attack the entire amnesia episode. This amnesia episode runs through about a third of the entire text. Another point is that Shou is a time traveler. When I read the introduction and first read the film, I thought Shou was a funny and interesting character who would not be bound by heaven, earth, worldly morality, etc., And would always be a special existence in this world of immortality. The result... Well, let's look at the character of the immortal cultivator in ordinary immortal cultivating novels, and the time-travel setting does not play a big role (I think). It just plays a role in thinking a little bolder sometimes, and sometimes giving himself a sense of superiority (because he knows the plot). Even if Shou knows the plot, but there is no change in the plot, I feel that the difference between Shou and this world is that the protagonist is given a lover on the original plot route, the protagonist should destroy the spiritual root, the protagonist should leave the sect and go out to upgrade and wander. Upgrading and wandering does not involve Shou. The original plot has not changed at all, so even if Shou knows the original plot (Shou does not care about it after knowing it in the article), He didn't take any measures. Sometimes he seems to forget about the original plot [face covering] [thinking]). He is a time traveler. In fact, it is just a fantasy. He has almost become a native of this world. The original plot means that he knows what will happen in his future. He knows it and follows the plot step by step. So what is the difference between knowing and not knowing? In fact, if Shou is a time traveler who knows the identity of the plot, and I write it as if Shou is a native of this world, I don't think there is any sense of violation. It's just that the setting of time travel is more attractive [face covering] [thinking]

It's very good-looking. I hope my brother's 20th birthday will go well and not be too cruel. I hope that the brothers and sisters can be together smoothly. The elders in the sect are very righteous, much better than the elders in the sect in some novels. Come on author

It's really beautiful, I feel sorry for Xuan An, I love you cautiously, but in the end it turns into a sword, and it also stays with Jiu Jiu in another form. All the holes have been filled, the premiere is echoed, recommended and recommended [crying]

It seems very good so far. I thought the writing would be awkward but it's not. I'm really looking forward to the plot. The cool cat must be licked wet by Xiu Gou.

It's beautiful. Xuanyang fell in love with our little Jiu at first sight, and the rest of the writing was also very smooth. There was no awkwardness, but the exhumation of the spiritual bones was really caused by his inner demons, which shocked me [Thoughts]

It's really great. Three chapters a day is not enough. I hope Xuanyang won't get too carried away and don't torture me. [Crying] It's really painful to have my spiritual roots dug out. [Crying] Although it seems to be the pain borne by the inner demon, it's still very uncomfortable. My feelings for the inner demon are also a bit complicated. I don't remember when the inner demon started to be interested in Lin Jiu. Did I miss something? Looking forward to the update. Can you please give me 10 chapters!

Super good-looking, the cool beauty and the genius Sunshine Sword Cultivator are super cute [laughing][laughing][laughing][admiration]

It's beautiful, very beautiful, and the author's stream of consciousness is also very powerful. Please see Chapter 67 [Adoration] for details.

Personal remarks, don't comment if you don't like it. On the whole, it's still very sweet, but in the middle and later stages, what I saw was that Lin Jiu was always paying for maintenance, while Yin Xuanyang was dispensable. I prefer Lin Jiu and Xuan An as a pair. Yin Xuanyang has been dragging Lin Jiu down, whether it is good or not, but it just feels boring. It is Lin Jiu who is always doing the work, which is not worth it. Especially looking for the stone tablet in the middle is very awkward and weakens Lin. Jiu's ability, and forcibly increasing Renault's role, weakened Lin Jiu's behavior, and Tiandao has been targeting Lin Jiu, which is very double-standard. The whole book feels very unfair to Lin Jiu, like an object, and does not describe Lin Jiu's value and senses. Most of it revolves around Yin Xuanyang. If it were not viewed from the perspective of the master and the slave, I would have thought that he was assisting the main attack. It's okay, like [Like]