Master and Disciple Have Always Made a Great Couple, and Villains Are No Exception!

The author's writing is quite good, but I felt a little uncomfortable reading it in some places. There are also some points about lightning protection. 1. Have a deputy CP (Yan Heluo) 2. Some abuse our main CP for the sake of the highlight and plot of the secondary CP 3. In the early stage, Gong has been competing with Yan because of being the second-largest boy in ten thousand years and for some reasons (some words seem to be foreshadowed). Then after each of them accepted apprentices, Gong wanted to be better than their respective apprentices. Then there is a plot where Shou is forced to practice faster than Shou. For example, in order to practice faster, Shou is forced to take pills regardless of his wishes (some people are not willing to watch this kind of thing, so I will say it in advance to avoid negative comments because of this) I haven't read too much. If there are some lightning protection points that I can add. The author's writing is not bad. The above are my own opinions. If I continue to follow it and think that the later writing is better, I will come back and give it a five-star rating.

So pretty🥺Men are menstruating when they see it🥺Women get crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It's the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome🥰Yes God is my rose, it illuminates my dark life and makes my world ♡ meaningful😊I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😳 It makes me realize that God does exist and I am so cute The tears won't stop and the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression 😊 is the alarm clock for vegetative people 😳 It's so cute that the tears flow out of the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River 😈 It sounds so good 🥰 God is my rose, it lights up my dark life and makes my world meaningful 🥺 I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor, and I realized that God does exist. I was so good that my tears did not stop. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. (Haokan strongly recommends [send heart] [like] fast pace) (I'm here to revise the book review) Lightning Protection. The halo of the secondary CP protagonist was too strong in the early stage [currently in progress]. The main CP belongs to the upgrade flow. The secondary CP protagonist's attack has been overwhelming the villain's main CP attack. It gradually got better later. It was indeed a bit depressing in the early stage [crying] but the author wrote it very well. [Send heart] I like DaDa's character design. I have been following DaDa for the third book. I have been pursuing it. Avoid lightning. If you don't like the treasure, you can delete it.

It is currently tied at 175 chapters. I personally feel that the writing is very good. Some people say that they think the deputy CP has a strong presence. Don't listen to their nonsense. The presence is very low. Chapters 27, 28, the first half of 29, 90, 125 a little bit, and the first half of 126 are the plots where the deputy CP has a strong presence, and 27-29 mainly write about the Lobi test in detail. Because the deputy CP does not have a strong sense of presence, the description is not detailed, and the development is very fast, I personally can't stand it, but the character design is still good. Really, I am amazed that the author can update 1,000 chapters in one day. I really want to know if Lin will escape in the future. There is no death escape plot, but it is very difficult at the end, and I can't catch up. I said I would surpass the protagonist, but at the end, I saw that I surpassed the protagonist and ascended in advance. But after ascending, I started from the beginning again, and continued to be suppressed. I suppressed it, the crusher came~_~

The character of Xiaolin is delicious, recommended👍🏻 Normal cold-faced expression: ᗜ - ᗜ When you are cold-faced, cute and shy:,,ᗜ - ᗜ,, When the cold-faced cuteness is happy: ᗜ ᴗ ᗜ When the cold face is unhappy: ᗜ ‸ ᗜ When the cold face makes you angry: ᗜ - ᗜ💢 When the cold-faced cuteness breaks out: (╯--)╯╧╧ When the cold-faced cute fell asleep: ᶻz ₍ _ _ ₎ When you are cute and cold-faced: ✌️ᗜ ֊ ᗜ◞ When you act cute with a cold face: ᗜ 𖥦 ᗜ When the cold-faced cuteness is praised: (ᗜ _ ᗜ) ➡️ (ᗜ ֊ ᗜ)

It's so sweet. Before I clicked in, I thought it was Hate Hai Qing Tian, ​​but I didn't expect it was A Hai Yu Tian [Admiration]

Very nice. Although the slut was indeed a bit mean at first, but later on she turned into a crazy person. Hahahaha beautiful. The cold face is cute, this is (^^), and the fish scale porridge used to be really miserable. Going to cry. I feel a little distressed, but I don't feel distressed anymore after seeing the phantom mirror. What a slut

It's very interesting and the author's writing style is also very good. There is a hint of hatred towards the sea and love for the sky at the beginning, eh. . . It doesn't seem to count, it's just that Yulinzhou was a bit forced and tortured at the beginning in order to make Zhixu stronger, but I enjoyed watching it and it was delicious. I read some book reviews saying that the secondary CP accounts for more than the main CP, making the main CP miserable. Maybe it's for personal reasons. I actually don't think the secondary CP has much plot? Really, the progress of the two of them is so slow, and their roles are not more than the main CP, and they are the original CP. Regarding abuse, if it refers to Yu Linzhou forcing him to become stronger in order to compete with Yan's apprentice, actually I don't think it is abusive, and it is very satisfying. I don't know why the score is so low. For me, it doesn't have any interesting points. The character of the protagonist is very good (it's a bit mature but not aggrieved. I don't read the content that makes people happy). The author's writing style is very good. I saw it from more than 50 photos. If you are interested, hurry up and join in! Boss, please keep working hard (by the way, the author's updates are very stable and you won't lose money if you invest)

It's good-looking and suits my taste, but I don't want to have a sub-CP. It's a tie, I'll save it and wait for more, so I'll give it five stars (I really don't want to have a sub-CP). Hmm hmm hmm hmm

It's good to watch. To be honest, I was a little dissuaded when I saw those comments before, but I still read it. After reading it, I feel that there is nothing wrong with it. Everything is in service of the plot, and I don't mean to deliberately abuse the protagonist. The introduction is not written as a cool article. I don't know what happened to you. The emotional line is very delicate, and the plot keeps advancing. The protagonist is a normal person with seven emotions and six desires. It is very interesting. Please update it soon.

Nice! I really like the friendship between Luo and Lin. They both sincerely wish each other well. Who wouldn't want such friends? I'm very moved. I felt so bad when I saw Lin being struck by lightning and not saving Luo just to keep the story going. Damn it! You don't have to experience betrayal before you can decide to grow. I saw a lot of people saying that the deputy CP has too many roles and overwhelms the protagonist. I don't think Luo's role is too many, and Lin is a loser at the beginning. Compared with a genius, it's normal to feel aggrieved when compared to a genius. It's not a great story. Lin was not born to fall in love with someone. There should not only be his lover in his life, but also many people and things, including Luo. Luo will care about Lin, care about his current situation, trust him, and take the initiative to help him. It is normal for such a friend to play a large role in Lin's life. Cheers to the author, please don't force yourself to change your mind because of various voices. You wrote very well!