Junior Brother, I’m in So Much Pain!

I'm almost finished reading so I'll comment first because I feel like I'll be tortured later because I'm afraid I'll forget it (mainly because I can't remember most of my thoughts after reading the book). Overall it looks pretty good. As far as my senses are concerned, the plot before the year of coma was a bit tight, and things happened so fast that it felt a bit sudden (singlely referring to the anchor point where things happened), but the process and result of everything were pretty good. There is also a little bit of emotional development (referring to love and friendship). Xiao Liu's heartbeat after being captured is gradual, mainly the love between Xiao Qi and Xiao Liu, and the friendship between Xiao Liu and Chu Yunyang. It seems to be happening inexplicably at the beginning, but it can only be understood after watching the back. Although the previous relationship seems abrupt, the interaction between the two is very harmonious and enjoyable, and the slight abruptness can be ignored (I don't have a writing style, so I just talk about my feelings and can't make any substantive suggestions). I didn't see that Chu Yunyang is still a social nerd, so it feels abrupt. Friendship can be established quickly as long as one party takes the initiative (hehe, he is a lone wolf, so some emotions cannot be understood without writing them in detail). After reading an article, I feel that the further I read it, the more comfortable it becomes. The author is great. I don't have any suggestions to make.

After you read Chapter 90, you must read the commentary on the last paragraph of Chapter 90. That is also the main text. I accidentally missed a chapter and I don't have permission to repost it into the main text 😢 Please give Pei Liu and Shen Qi a chance to get to know you. Please please🙏🏻 Save the child, he doesn't even have a few hairs left [covering face] Thank you very much for your support of "Junior Brother, it hurts so much!" An opportunity, an opportunity to show it to everyone. I know that I have many shortcomings in writing, but I still have a glimmer of hope that more and more readers can see it. People say that Tomato has a lot of traffic, so dear Fanfan, can you give your child some traffic? The child wants to improve his writing skills and wants to hear everyone's suggestions for the child, whether they are encouraging or complaining, the child can afford it. Thanks.

It was quite cruel. Fortunately, Shen Qi woke up in the end 😢. He had sacrificed so much, so it was okay. I felt very sad for Mo Chuan, but he should never have taken someone else's life away from him. Even if Yang Yang and Jiang Han didn't succeed, I felt extremely sad 😢

It's really funny when you're funny, and it's really sad when you're sadistic. The pull between the two is also very delicate, and the rhythm of the plot is even better. I hope your work can be seen by more people.

I also think it looks good, but it's not very popular, so I'll give you a big five stars.

The novel is quite good, the plot and writing style are okay, but why are there so few reviews? Do you all read quietly without talking?

It's really pretty