My Beloved Pretended to Be a Tutor for My Sister, So I Took Her Place as His Bride. Now He’s Regretting It

He kept Gua, he kept saving people, and he had no mouth, he kept having his things claimed by others,

It's good to watch. Starting from Chapter 100, the plot development is very interesting. There are many "small copies"-like events, which are smoothly connected by the main line of "the heroine's training". The author controls the rhythm of the story very steadily, and the narrative basically follows the perspective of the characters. The foreshadowing is natural and well-explained, making people continue to be curious and satisfied. The female protagonist is a person with clear goals, but she has a weak temper and is too lazy to talk about the reasons that don't make sense. Therefore, the early confrontation with the Ruan family is very frustrating, and she urgently needs a slap god of war like Jiuzhu to fill her position. The male protagonist can be regarded as such a role, but he has to wait for a long time, so the overall reading experience is to be smooth and sometimes smooth. In the later stage, with the improvement of strength and the opening of new maps, the opponent's level has been improved and he can talk, and the confrontation plot will be much better. In contrast, the heroine is very agile in her actions, very patient in fighting off enemies, and very decisive in harvesting the results of the battle. She does what she says and is very reader-friendly. The rivalry scenes between the heroine and the hero are also very good. They are straight forward and there is no inefficient communication such as talking to themselves or being pretentious. They support each other and make progress together. Haha, it is very suitable for a progress weirdo like me. Looking forward to the next article! I also read some of the author's other books, all of which are quite long. The reading experience is similar to this one. Sometimes it feels like playing an Orange Light game, with a very concrete and perceptible plot advancement. I think this is what makes them beautiful, that is, the author will clearly describe the game process. Some novels like to use three or two sentences to symbolically describe the power of the protagonist, but to be honest, it is impossible to understand it in detail. Especially for many boss characters, you can only see a vague character - he is very powerful - why do you say that - because the author said he is very powerful. This book does not have this problem, but some people may think that this is "unclear". Relatively speaking, it is probably more suitable for readers who like to see the practical process ~

There are so many comments in the comment area. Are we just saying that we can't make money together? Let me give you a true evaluation. The heroine traveled back from the world of immortality, and the focus is on the world of immortality! Not to mention that everyone has read the article on cultivating immortals, but those who have a little knowledge know that the world of cultivating immortals is based on strength and kills people without blinking an eye. The heroine is very powerful in the world of cultivating immortals. Although she has lost her cultivation after time travel, she should still be able to use the basic moves [awkward laugh]. Not to mention the new map that will be opened later, and what is written in the front, everyone agrees to marry her instead. Moreover, she still has a way to deceive others, and she is always being picked on at home, and she always puts on a useless look like I don't care and just let them do whatever they want. The maidservant should be slapped a few times if she crosses the master's path, and the younger brother should be slapped a few more times if he breaks his forehead by kicking a rock. The reader's breasts are also mammary glands, right? [Laughing], the writing is pretty good.

Although it is a cliched rebirth, the metaphysics and immortality in it feel very novel and really nice to watch. However, there are too many people in it who don't understand human speech. Sometimes it looks really annoying, but it's really nice to watch.

When I saw Chapter 284, the writing was mediocre but still readable, and the whole article just seemed bland. From the heroine to the plot setting, the heroine has become a fairy and doesn't care about anything. Every time, it is the same: she is really annoying and doesn't want to get involved, but she still gets involved in order not to be annoyed. As a result, every time the villain causes trouble, the heroine just accepts the attack in a bland way, and then solves the conspiracy by using tricks, and is too lazy to get involved. Fortunately, the heroine was not injured every time, but the villain really looked like a fly when he jumped for a long time and made him sick from time to time. The author just didn't let the heroine completely solve them and let them fend for themselves. I think the setting of the female protagonist's training is pretty good. The merits of the male protagonist are probably set up to let the female protagonist stick to them. I can accept this setting, but the relationship between the two people feels very sudden and suspended. Even if they have a good relationship, they can't see clearly, but the female protagonist suddenly treats the male protagonist very well, protects his personal safety, helps resolve family conflicts, and even travels thousands of miles to save her husband. The follow-up seems to be about going to the country where the male protagonist is related by blood, and the female protagonist is related by blood in another hostile country. Isn't it a "if you marry a chicken, follow the chicken, if you marry a dog, follow the dog" routine? I sincerely hope that this won't be the case. Apart from cultivating and saving the male protagonist, I haven't seen a very independent story or goal for the female protagonist. What is she pursuing in her heart? It seemed like the plot was pushing her along, not the path she chose on her own initiative. I don't know if I will continue reading it, so I'll leave a comment first to record it, and I will follow up if I read it again.

Really beautiful! Just too little! Ordinary real and fake daughters, different story details. Cultivation, fortune-telling... The most enjoyable time of being slapped in the face is gone. The characters are full-bodied, the story is twists and turns, and it's beautiful (♥∀♥)!

Little princesses who live a happy life should read this book, and they will definitely be so depressed that they die after reading it. The heroine always knows that the other party has bad intentions, so she invites her, but she is determined to go and will not hide even once. This plot runs through the entire text from the beginning. The heroine is already a princess, but no one respects her. Anyone can scold her in person. The heroine only says after the other party scolds her, I am the princess, be careful if I ask you to kneel down and salute me [laughing]

Except for the shortcomings of many typos! The concept, writing, and especially some of the scene transitions are great! Both the male and female protagonists have sassy and sharp personalities, which will not make readers feel aggrieved. Flaws do not hide the merits, worth 5 points!

I don't know why the rating is so low. I was inadvertently attracted by this strange title. After reading it, it kept attracting me to continue reading, and I continued to read it. It is a step-by-step approach, and the heroine has low mood swings, which is consistent with the character of a cultivator. It drove me crazy while reading, but my concentration is still low. I have to get used to reading the reversal slowly, don't be anxious, it is very interesting, so read with confidence.

I rarely write book reviews. Although they are all old-fashioned stories about rebirth, the plots are very novel. There is a little bit of metaphysics in them, a bit of cultivating immortality. Being able to tell fortunes is novel in nature. The author is very good at telling stories. I haven't found any sweet plots so far. I hate those endless boring stories. I came here to read the stories.