Reborn as the Queen of Business: Young Master Mu Spoils His Wife to the Moon

Very exciting, very beautiful! It's also very interesting, but the ending is too fast. I hope I can see the extras! I especially want to see the heroine's superpowers reach great heights, haha...

Give it a five-star rating! The main line of the book is clear, and the writing and thinking are smooth (not counting typos)! The space given to the supporting characters is basically adequate, but it doesn't drag out or steal the spotlight! There is no very sad plot, which is good for me, who wants to read and relax! It's just that the pit in the first half is a bit deep and makes me look a bit confused! The only drawback is that there are too many typos, sometimes there are several in a paragraph! I got through most of the first half, but I really couldn't bear the second half (because I gave it five stars). Many errors have been corrected. I hope readers can read it more smoothly!

The plot setting of the novel is still very innovative. There are no big holes. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is affected by their life experiences. The male protagonist, due to the experiences of his parents and the dangers around him, as a love novice, it is understandable that he suppressed the female protagonist's feelings in the early stage and did not express them. He is a person who only acts and does not talk. In the later period, after dealing with the problems around me, I was able to protect my lover enough, and I also faced my lover decisively. The heroine's character is obsessed with revenge when she is first reborn. Although he was reborn, he still had flaws in his character. Maybe it's the need of the plot. In some places, the heroine's character may not be likable enough, but it is still acceptable. For example, sometimes the Virgin's heart is too nosy. Some were thanked and some were given a blank stare, but she was still cute for being like this to those who really needed help. Although she is reborn, the heroine is still timid about her feelings. Even after experiencing life and death, she does not decide to face her heart until she is likely to lose again. It seems that the heroine is not as brave as the male protagonist who is not reborn. So relatively speaking, the male protagonist is more likable than the female protagonist. However, the heroine is finally able to see clearly, which is the true meaning of rebirth. She is happy and her friends around her are also happy. The rebirth of the heroine can be regarded as the redemption of the hero! The heroine who has not been reborn in her previous life meets the hero. The hero with such a childhood experience will probably not have his own happiness. The reborn heroine and the hero are angels who make each other truly reborn. This novel is relatively compact. In the early stage, the emotional line between the male and female protagonists is suppressed, which may make people uncomfortable, but as a plot foreshadowing, it still fits the personality of the two people. So the novel is worth reading.

It's very interesting. The author's writing style is very good. The outline is very exciting and attractive. Although I didn't read it from beginning to end, overall I am very satisfied and like it. Good luck to the author!

It's quite interesting, but there's no such thing as their wedding in the ending. I wanted to eat sweets, but the author didn't give me the chance. Hope to add extra wedding and post-marriage life

Not bad! Quite novel!

The idea is very novel and great🤗🤗