{Urban daily life}+{Not cultivating immortality}+{Travel to modern times}+{Love}+{Original}
Yun Zhi failed to survive the catastrophe and accidentally fell into Ma Xiang's rental house.
"I do like you a little bit, but I hope that after you have seen the mountains and rivers here and met all kinds of people, I will be your boyfriend."
"Yunzhi, give me your hand to play with, okay?"
"Yunzhi, give me a hug"
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Reader comments
It's pretty good. It's similar to My Wife Comes from a Thousand Years Ago, a book about what to do if the heroine walks away from the book. So far, I feel pretty good about it. Not surprisingly, it should be a single heroine. The two are still in the ambiguous stage of getting to know each other. See how the author advances the relationship. In addition, for the female protagonist to become an immortal, it would be good for the villain to show off and slap her in the face, otherwise this setting would be useless. Also, the female protagonist is strongly required to have a contrasting side. My favorite fairy has fallen [licking the screen][licking the screen][licking the screen][shy]
In fact, love never needs anything earth-shattering. It's just:
· Always hold hands when crossing the road
· Just say you want to eat breakfast and it will appear on the table
· The force of holding you in my arms unconsciously in your sleep
· Remember to warm a glass of milk for you after a quarrel
· He quietly dimmed the lights while you were reading.
Love is hidden in all these ignored daily routines, silent but deafening.
It's pretty good, there's nothing wrong with it, it's just that the heroine was too arrogant at the beginning, but that's just for the sake of being a powerful character, everything else is okay. The male protagonist really doesn't have a good solution to this situation, and it's reasonable to take the heroine in.
Have you signed a contract? It feels like there are so few people. No matter how good this show is, at 8:5, I don't think it's a big problem @
Yes, to find a wife is to find a healthy person who has seen the colorful world and is willing to get closer to you.
Good. , I just feel that the male protagonist has a bit of a girlish personality
Even a little too fussy.
It's a good daily novel. I personally like to read works that reverse daily life. However, the early stage is a bit too bland and may be a bit boring. The heroine seems a bit emmm, too ordinary and has no special characteristics. It's also not lively enough, so the first hundred chapters may be a bit discouraging, but this dull feeling is actually very important in daily writing if you read it patiently. Come on, author
It is a calm and heartwarming novel, the plot is remarkable, but the heroine is a powerful cultivator, and her character is a bit like that of a little daughter.
You can see. You can see more.
Love doesn't have to be vigorous, it can also be dull
Very good daily article worth recommending [Like]
Very interesting, come on [laughs]
Really pretty
Did you find a jade pendant or something like this in the antique market, and then Yun Zhi's magic power was restored [face covering]
It fits my imagination of wearing it backwards.
Come on, keep writing [I understand] It's still good
The descriptions are vivid, the plots are interlocking, and the book support is pretty good.
It's beautiful, the writing is delicate, and the emotions are sincere.
It's so good, fresh and natural, not impetuous at all, but it's just not enough to look at.
A sweet daily story about a single heroine, it's a great book to read if you're bored.
It's true if it's plain and simple, and it's well written. [Laughing][laughing]
Just change it.
The emotional description is very delicate and natural, the book is good
I feel like there shouldn't be so few people. Will the author write a new book?
It's pretty good. It's similar to My Wife Comes from a Thousand Years Ago, a book about what to do if the heroine walks away from the book. So far, I feel pretty good about it. Not surprisingly, it should be a single heroine. The two are still in the ambiguous stage of getting to know each other. See how the author advances the relationship. In addition, for the female protagonist to become an immortal, it would be good for the villain to show off and slap her in the face, otherwise this setting would be useless. Also, the female protagonist is strongly required to have a contrasting side. My favorite fairy has fallen [licking the screen][licking the screen][licking the screen][shy]
In fact, love never needs anything earth-shattering. It's just: · Always hold hands when crossing the road · Just say you want to eat breakfast and it will appear on the table · The force of holding you in my arms unconsciously in your sleep · Remember to warm a glass of milk for you after a quarrel · He quietly dimmed the lights while you were reading. Love is hidden in all these ignored daily routines, silent but deafening.
It's pretty good, there's nothing wrong with it, it's just that the heroine was too arrogant at the beginning, but that's just for the sake of being a powerful character, everything else is okay. The male protagonist really doesn't have a good solution to this situation, and it's reasonable to take the heroine in. Have you signed a contract? It feels like there are so few people. No matter how good this show is, at 8:5, I don't think it's a big problem @
Yes, to find a wife is to find a healthy person who has seen the colorful world and is willing to get closer to you.
Good. , I just feel that the male protagonist has a bit of a girlish personality Even a little too fussy.
It's a good daily novel. I personally like to read works that reverse daily life. However, the early stage is a bit too bland and may be a bit boring. The heroine seems a bit emmm, too ordinary and has no special characteristics. It's also not lively enough, so the first hundred chapters may be a bit discouraging, but this dull feeling is actually very important in daily writing if you read it patiently. Come on, author
It is a calm and heartwarming novel, the plot is remarkable, but the heroine is a powerful cultivator, and her character is a bit like that of a little daughter.
You can see. You can see more.
Love doesn't have to be vigorous, it can also be dull
Very good daily article worth recommending [Like]
Very interesting, come on [laughs]
Really pretty
Did you find a jade pendant or something like this in the antique market, and then Yun Zhi's magic power was restored [face covering]
It fits my imagination of wearing it backwards.
Come on, keep writing [I understand] It's still good
The descriptions are vivid, the plots are interlocking, and the book support is pretty good.
It's beautiful, the writing is delicate, and the emotions are sincere.
It's so good, fresh and natural, not impetuous at all, but it's just not enough to look at.
A sweet daily story about a single heroine, it's a great book to read if you're bored.
It's true if it's plain and simple, and it's well written. [Laughing][laughing] Just change it.
The emotional description is very delicate and natural, the book is good I feel like there shouldn't be so few people. Will the author write a new book?