Little Brother, You Can't Escape

The author is sorry. I have tried my best to read it up to this point. I really like your writing, which is not mindless, but the progress of your writing is too slow. I don't want to read it after chapter 50 or 60. But seeing that you write it with great care, I still stick to it. Today is my last update reminder, and I hope to meet the author again in the future. Goodbye, author👋🏻, bye! I hope you will make this book better and better as you write it.

After reading the latest episode, there is nothing toxic in the whole text. It mainly focuses on the daily interaction with my sister. My sister is so cute and the heroine is relatively comfortable to watch. The interaction and two-way running between the male and female protagonists made the corners of my mouth go up crazily. [Laughing evilly] The author is strong, so keep going.

Very, very beautiful. Come on, the author.

Seeing this book reminded me of, "About the incident where I was accidentally turned into a loser by the angel next door"

To be honest, the writing style of this book is eye-catching. It is not like the messy system articles and harem articles in the Tomato Channel now. The author's sentences and quotes are very good. Regardless of the plot direction, people will never tire of it. The only pity is that there are irresistible factors that cause this book to be careless. The ending is rough, (some pitfalls have not been filled, and I hope the author will write more extras in the new book later) and then learned about the author's experience, which made me feel that you are worthy of the author. You have worked very hard. We readers all hope that one day you can realize your dreams and reach your end. Come on! ! ! Author

The overall grasp is actually quite good, especially for sister-control people, it is more attractive. It can only be said that it may not be "cool" that meets the requirements of ordinary users, but there is actually a considerable number of people in the audience. [Laughs] The good news for sister-controllers is that girls have a much more delicate grasp of girls' inner feelings, and can transcend the limitations of the reader's own perspective, allowing readers to experience such characters in a more three-dimensional way. For such readers, such vividness is very happy. [Shy]

The plot of the angel next door is okay, I hope it doesn't end badly. If there was an angel next door on a tomato, this book would basically be useless.

My humble opinion, no other opinions From reading, Xia Qingluo's character creation is not very full and a bit stiff, and I think the adoption plot may reduce people's enthusiasm. The author here should want to establish a connection between the two, but later looking at Song Yi's meaning, this matter has been premeditated. If Xia Qingluo was cured (partially) by "Jiangxinzhoubian" at this time, Then when getting along with Jiang Yun, he opened up his heart and revealed his identity instead of giving it away directly (this was very abrupt and inconsistent with Xia Qingluo's "Flower of the Mountains" character, even though he knew Jiang Yun was "by the side of Jiangxin Island"). There was a slow healing process, and Xia Qingluo gradually changed from good to enthusiastic. With the author's literary style, there is a high probability that he will become popular. Furthermore, the pacing is very well controlled, but there are only more than a hundred chapters, which is still a bit slow in comparison. I can understand the author's good intentions in writing a good novel, and he can develop Jiang Yun's character and let Xia Qingluo redeem him. Isn't this label worthy? "My Active Pride" Lu Chen and Ye Ziqing in "My Friend" are a good example. Lu Chen and Jiang Yun in it are very similar, but I think Lu Chen has richer emotions and more vivid images (just some immature opinions. After all, I am only a high school student. If there is anything wrong, please correct me). Finally, I wish the author to be happy every day, and to persist in writing such a good book even when he is under a lot of pressure. I hope that the author will find his new moon soon!

The writing is very good and the plot is relatively real. As a reader, I can feel the author's intention. The switching of perspectives in the article is very smooth, which makes it very comfortable to read. The psychological activities of the two people are also very rich. Anyway, all in all, it is a very good book, unlike those cool articles that make it boring and cliche to read. Big cheers for the author

The writing style is simple, with few typos and no loopholes or poisonous points. The characters have three-dimensional personalities, have their own considerations for the direction of the article, and will not blindly pursue the public aesthetic. However, it is indeed not suitable for writing in Tomato. Most of the tomatoes are fast-paced, and the change does not consider the writing style, which is just fun. Of course, I still hope that the author can write new works on Tomato.