The Mage's Journey: A Knight's Tale

I won't comment on the male protagonist's character. What impressed me most after reading the first 20 chapters was the interaction between the male protagonist and the little boy. I didn't remember anything except that they were suspected of embarking on the path of being a man (if they didn't, the little boy was sent to a monastery). This place was quite off-putting to me, maybe because it was a foreshadowing or a huge turning point. For me, it's a little bit toxic. I participated in the knight duel and made friends with Irena in the past. It's okay and it can be considered as a step-by-step progression of the plot. Overall, the narrative style of this book is close to the original novel in Tomato's witch novel. I don't exclude the toxic points that I think. You can take a look. I hope the author can continue to improve the plot. I really like the witch.

So far it looks pretty good, and I like this subject very much 😘

I hope there won't be any scenes involving a little boy later on, it's not very acceptable. Other than that, the writing is pretty good. Keep at it, even though there are very few people now

The content is pretty good

The little boy part is hard to explain in one sentence, but I think the author at least held steady and didn't overturn. Other than that, there are no problems at the moment, ambrosia.