My Talent Has Transcended SSS

It's still the same old super-limit cheats and extremely slow growth line. Talent is related to experience. The worldview allows you to buy experience at a low price, but the worldview also sets national purchase limits for everyone [Thoughts] Nothing toxic overall? (It may trigger poisonous points for some people. For example, if the male protagonist gives the female protagonist something that is extremely valuable but cannot be used by the male protagonist, he can just ask the female protagonist directly when he wants to use it.) The increase in combat power is too gradual, so that there is a kind of SSS talent and D-level talent that are treated equally from a national perspective, and there is no relevant resource tilt [Thinking] After reading the second volume, I started to improve my strength, and it looks much better [laughing evilly]

Not bad. Counting food and grass, the 6.6 Score is very suitable for the situation. Advantages: It's cool, can be improved infinitely, career transition or skill changes are quite interesting, and the update speed is fast. Disadvantages: There is basically no growth in the protagonist, and the character feels childish, unlike a time traveler. And sometimes what was just mentioned in the previous chapter may be forgotten in the next chapter (for example: the skill fusion caused by the career jump, the original experience consumed by the skill will be refunded. However, considering the large number of updated chapters, it is understandable). The relationship between the protagonist and the heroine is not handled very well. It seems to be okay, but it always feels weird. Overall, it's a boring novel about food and grass, but since it's about tomatoes, it's quite good.

It's not like online game novels, it's like story telling

The writing is good, and the setting innovations are pretty good. Many places can be justified, and the plot and character design are also very good. However, the character communication is still insufficient. It is all about the protagonist's personal display. The perspective is too one-sided, and the other characters are not fleshed out enough. It is necessary to add more display of other characters, and don't always communicate with other characters from the perspective of the protagonist. Other than this, there are no obvious shortcomings. Of course, the best part, I personally think, is the setting, which is so imaginative and unconstrained that it's worth a look.

It's not bad. It's not as bad as the low scores in the comment area describe it. Although the emotional line is indeed not handled very well, the emotional expression is very delicate, which makes up for the shortcomings of the emotional line. Secondly, in terms of setting and writing, the background and setting of the big world are very innovative. As you wrote at the end of each volume, your intentions are indeed visible, and your expressions are very delicate. However, the loopholes caused by the setting are such as the problem that most people in your comment area mentioned, "it is necessary to suppress the combat power without taking it seriously." You have not dealt with this properly. Another point that most people say is that the personal portrayal of the protagonist is too strong, thereby ignoring the drama and description of important supporting roles. The supporting roles are not fully portrayed enough. In your portrayal, all the supporting roles in the world serve the protagonist. This is the biggest shortcoming in your novel. You can shift the focus of describing skills to the main character. Regarding the portrayal of supporting characters, the villains in the article should not only be those absolute villains who are mindless and only want to destroy the world and have extreme egoism. Some villains should also have the charm of villains. This is good in the chapter about the devil you wrote before, but the villains in the main world line are not so good. I will not elaborate too much on the establishment of villains. Finally, let's talk about the lack of fun points that many people have commented on. In fact, to put it bluntly, it is the problem of cliché plots that you have always been worried about. You can have less of this kind of cliché plots, but you can't do without them. The essence of it becoming a cliché plot is that it is fun enough. As long as you connect the plot well enough and don't make this kind of plot too abrupt in your novel, the fun points in the novel will naturally be there. Although there are other shortcomings, blindly modifying your novel to the fixed template of conventional cool writing is not conducive to your development. To be honest, your subject matter, setting and writing style are really eye-catching, but your shortcomings have indeed dissuaded many impatient readers, but it doesn't matter, this is your first book, and it is really well written. Don't worry about those one-star or two-star reviews. Polish your settings and details. You will definitely have a place in the online literature world in the future. I look forward to your progress!

This is a rare children's book. The content is completely immersed in the author's subjective color, so that the plot can only revolve around daily life.

Groove, when did Tomato book friends become so picky? To be honest, this book should belong to a branch of online game streaming plus unlimited streaming. I basically followed the progress and found that the author's writing style was flawless, the descriptions were detailed, and the narrative was smooth. The plot of the story is not too toxic. At least when I listen to the book (before going to bed), I don't think there is any problem that prevents me from falling asleep (*^▽^*) Finally, this book is not finished yet. You are putting pressure on the author day by day and picking and choosing. The writing is obviously very good. What should I do if the author is so pressured by you that he stops writing? You keep writing (｡･ˇ_ˇ･｡:)

It's pretty good to watch, updates quickly, and basically has no fighting power. It has a single female protagonist. The female protagonist has a good personality and is very strong. She's not a drag. The protagonist is also decisive in killing. The only shortcoming is that he doesn't trust the official, but considering his experience, it's understandable.

The focus of the first volume is not outstanding, love takes up a lot of space, and there are too many narrations about the gay friend's upgrade adventure. Goldfinger has no sense of existence and is not enough to be enjoyable. The second volume started to get better. The description of the different world is very interesting, but it's a pity that there are not enough updates [laughter] The copy of Xinghai is too long and can be read in a single book. I really have no motivation to read it [smile]

The description is very delicate, and the romance is the main line, which is not suitable for me [laughing and crying]