Online Game: My Brother Is a Reborn Big Shot!

Upper middle. The plot is not a traditional one. It is not "I" who is reborn, but "my" brother, which gives readers the feeling that "I" want to hug his thigh. (This template is not uncommon.) But "I" is stronger than the brother. This contrast attracts readers. As for the writing style, it looks like a novice at first glance. It is a bit laggy in some places, but it is not too toxic (in my personal opinion). The description of the environment is too little, which makes the sense of substitution not very good . The emotional drama between the heroine and the hero is average, but it's not too abrupt. Suggestions for the author (optional): First of all, there are too many typos. If you really want to write well, this problem must be improved (a big taboo in online game writing). After writing a chapter, you can try to look at your article from a reader's perspective and read more comments from readers. You can add some small details to the emotional scene. The details in the emotional scene determine success or failure. For example: the male and female protagonists hold hands. After passing the bustling crowd, the distance between them seems to be a little wider. She looks at his back, steps forward in three steps, and silently squeezes his hand.

Can't help but want to comment, it's a breath of fresh air. In the first chapter, the heroine Liu Ruyan comes to break up. What she portrays is not the ordinary Liu Ruyan, she is not following the trend of being in favor of a wealthy man, and there is no bloody plot. There is simply no material foundation, and the heroine feels that there is no future. Well, it is very similar to many men and women in reality who have to break up because of bride price or RV. The following content is actually very general. The protagonist can obtain a new highest level talent every ten levels, and this golden finger can be said to be the highest level. Then I didn't see much interaction between this book and the reborn brother. The two of them couldn't fight monsters together in different novice villages before reaching level 10, but it was very slow to level up. The first-level monsters did three or four points of damage, and the second-level monsters directly increased to 50 points of damage. Then in terms of plot, it's a brainless little guild. Classic

Let me tell a joke. Upgrading to level 1 gives you 4 points of free attributes. Then the protagonist spends more than 100 points but cannot defeat level 1 monsters [laughter]

Okay, it would be better to be more vigorous and resolute. After all, it's like saying nothing if you have the strength! Moreover, the protagonist's brother even told the protagonist about his rebirth. When the author wrote it, the protagonist had more trust in his brother! [Code to live][code to live][code to live] Five stars first!

It is very novel. It is no longer a traditional rebirth online game stream. It has a lot of unknown plots and I have a lot of expectations for the follow-up plots. It is not mindless and cool. It also has elements of cultivation and online elements that compare cultivation and magic.

The main character's predator talent has no restrictions. I don't want to constantly farm low-level monsters. I go to find high-level monsters. I only add a few attributes after upgrading. The attribute points gained by the talent are the big deal.

It is quite creative to plunder attribute point talents and use warriors to cut them one by one. The reason is that large warriors can easily defeat small warriors, and that's really the only way to achieve success.

Come, the author read with me, and I solemnly swear: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, working hard unyieldingly, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, steel being refined a hundred times, worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly declare: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can work hard I am a keyboard in the darkness and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet writing. I voluntarily dedicate my life to coding every day and every night.

It's so beautiful. Compared with the original rebirth online game, it has a different kind of two-dimensional beauty. Just like people, the protagonist and the rebirth go their separate ways but help each other and work hard for the future. This is rare in online games and rebirth. It's useless to say more. Just watch it [Like]

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