Demon Game: A Catastrophic Start

The author's writing style exceeds most of the novels on my bookshelf. The plot is ups and downs. I like the character of the protagonist He Jingtai very much. More importantly, the novel storyline is what attracts me the most.

Ah? Why does such a wonderful book only get a score of 7 or more, at least 9.5? Don't understand. Is it because reading this book requires some brain capacity? The plot is not procrastinating, the setting is novel and interesting, and the pace is acceptable. Was it because someone maliciously tricked you into giving a low rating?

It is indeed well written and worth a long read. I look forward to the author continuing to write. The book quotes a lot of classics, uses a lot of memes and content from various animations, games, movies and TV shows, and the writing is profound enough to show that the author is also an experienced Internet street slut. The battles of wits and courage in the book, as well as the reversals in which the villain or the righteous come up with new abilities, are all eye-catching. It is indeed an excellent book. At present, I feel that the only problem that affects the score is that the cover is too sloppy. It will definitely be more attractive if it is customized [Chigua][Chigua]

The writing is very good. Except for some inconsistencies in some places, the plot is ups and downs, and the characters and settings are good. Finally, I want to contribute a skill [Dyeing] Introduction: Can change the color of itself and all objects it sees. I thought of a few ways to use it myself 1. Mimicry color concealment, simple and easy to recognize 2. Dye the opponent's pupils black and blind them, or use painting techniques to make the target's skin appear to be aging rapidly to scare people (making the target think that they can control their lifespan or even time) 3. Darken the target object, increase the absorption of light radiation, and even darken the sun. The whole world will only have temperature and no light. 4. Painting on the sky to spread news or fake miracles If there is a price, the author will look at it and pay it. This ability obviously has great development value and is a very strong auxiliary skill. Can the author give it some thought? [Blowing kiss]

It's a masterpiece, but there are too few people, not enough reviews to get five-star reviews, and the description of the characters' appearance is a bit vague. It's my first impression of the character. Not so clear. (Not enough imagination), I suggest the author greatly enhance the appearance of various characters. Clothes to wear. Write it more clearly. As the saying goes, details determine success or failure. With all the details in place, this book is sure to be a hit.

In this novel, the super powers are quite outrageous, and I think it's quite enjoyable. Chapter 1 is about the super powers with no lower limit, the speed force and the command of destruction. Chapter 2 is about space teleportation, time-stop and eternal time-stop. Chapter 3 is all about plundering omnipotence vs copying omnipotence vs trading omnipotence. It's still being updated. It feels very similar to Jojo, which is quite interesting. I wonder how it is about the scientific growth-oriented all-round ability of analytical understanding and learning. In fact, I have always liked the alchemy in Fullmetal Alchemist. Wouldn't it be better if it could be carried out, understood, analyzed, experimented, reshaped, and decomposed more conceptually? It seems that there have been no updates in the past few days [laughing] [crying] Come on, come on [laughing] [laughing]

This book is definitely the most potential book, no one. If it develops, it will definitely be in the first and second echelons. The plot can be written and relatively compact. Even the remarks in the middle do not affect the coherence of the plot. Instead, it shows that the author thinks a lot when writing the book. The protagonist is not brainless, and everyone's IQ is online. The potential is very great. Come on, author [laughs]

Alas, I think of a boss whose skills are not bugs, but they should be very strong when combined. A speedster who has truly reached the extreme. The first and main skill is speed. The second one will not destroy, can withstand it, cause all attacks, and can be summoned at any time. The third one is immune to control. If these three have no side effects, they are basically invincible. The control must be immune to all even Time pause and rewrite can be set so that the control skills will have half the effect on it, but the damage received will be 10 times, and the top speed is how much the weapon will be reduced for every meter of movement. The weapon is made of its bones, and its bones are not regenerable, so he will be born with one section missing, maybe a rib, but if the weapon is eliminated by an ability such as bombing space, he will need to lose a new bone. The protagonist in To the Immortal You also has omnipotence. He can physically imitate the image of his friends and gain their abilities, but every time he dies, he loses a friend.

At that time, I read more than a dozen and gave up. Now that I have seen this book with 2 million words, I went back to review it. Maybe it was because my reading mood was different. I can watch it this time. Generally speaking, this book has a lot of poisonous points. Because the direction of superpower intelligence fighting requires very high logic and imagination, there are many places where the logic is not conventional. Moreover, this book has a tendency to be self-explanatory and requires readers to be aware of the radio waves. However, the author of this book is very enthusiastic, and the author's hard work can be seen in many designs (at least the first few hundred thousand words, I didn't see it later) For me personally, it is a masterpiece with a score of 90 or above, because the protagonist's character and writing style are very different, and it is suitable for readers who are neutral and kind or above and who have a loose sense of logic. [Learned]

It can be seen that the author spent a lot of energy and thought on it. It is very beautiful.