Your Youthful Love Story Is Wrong

Just like giving a five-star rating to a cake you made yourself - adding too much sugar is called romance, being burnt is called dark aesthetics, but it's delicious anyway! [Laughs] For an author who I am such a fan of, I think he should be given five stars [love]

It can be said that there are very few fan-fiction books with a single heroine like Tomato. The books written by Yukino Dan that I have read before basically either stopped updating or collapsed. In short, the popularity is very low. The author is also very perseverant. I hope I can continue to persevere. As for the writing style, just speaking of the books I have read in the manga, it can be said to be the best. It can be seen that the details in some places are well handled. I think some readers feel that the character of Yukino in this book is not very similar to the original work. I will comment on the emotional line by the way. In fact, the reasons have been written in some places. , The protagonist is a childhood sweetheart who came from heaven. He was like a redeemer for Yukinoshita when he was a child, so the relationship between the two must be very stable. After that, the protagonist disappeared, and Yukinoshita was also very sad (this can be seen from the conversation between Haruno and the protagonist), so you insist To say that she suddenly became a spoiled wife in this book is only relative to the protagonist. After all, she is very fond of her. I think she is pretty much the same for other people, including Yukinoshita's attitude towards the great teacher later in the original book. It can be seen that Yukino is a person who is cold on the outside and hot on the inside. She is just Because some bad experiences in childhood formed a protective shell, making it difficult for people to get close to her, but she is just a normal little girl, and she also longs for someone to care about her and protect her. This gap is filled by the protagonist, and her character will definitely be slowly affected. I have said so much. In short, it is a sweet and easy-going daily novel. I hope the author will continue to work hard and the pace can be slower. After all, the details are well described and it will not be boring to read. Also, hurry up and update, I want to see this mouth! [Laughing][full] High yield

What can I say about this book? It looks very good. The characters' actions, psychology, appearance, and emotions are all very beautiful. From the description of their meeting to their gradual reconciliation, the content is also quite perfect. However, there is one thing. When does the author mention "spring things"? It seems that I haven't mentioned it after reading several chapters, but it does not affect the beauty of this book. The book is not about the number of viewers, but about the quality, so it is also very beautiful and worth recommending. Don't read it. There is no rating. No one understands the content inside, so it is worth reading. The book is not popular, but loved. Come on, author! But I still recommend that the author always focus on "spring things"

Yukino is the best on Tomato. She has good outlook and acting style. QD's fast forward to marriage, Maomao's The Lost Dog Boy, Yukino's Correction and Yukino's love story are among the top 5 erotic movies I've ever seen. Come on, come on, but can the update be faster [I'm about to cry]

Beautiful, this book is highly recommended. The single heroine Yukino, Tuanzi will most likely team up with the great teacher for cp.

The emotions are delicate, but there are too many words to describe emotions, and it has the literary youthful flavor of the original work. The daily candies are not bad, but I feel that the author's thinking is still a bit limited, and it is quite boring after reading it for a long time. (After all, it is not a comprehensive comic, the pace is too fast and difficult to grasp) It's quite suitable for killing time (especially when dreaming before going to bed). I feel like I'm peeking into my daily life [pucker][poke][pinch]

There was no rating when I watched it, so why did I give it a 6 rating after not seeing it for a few days? I think the writing is very touching and quite good. I just watched the extra version of Game of Kings, and the detailed descriptions of the characters and events are very erotic. Although the highlight of the great teacher has been robbed, after all, fan fiction serves the original male protagonist.

May the wind come and the flowers bloom. Even if they stop and go, the two of them will eventually reach the end. Isn't it?

There are not many single female protagonists anymore, you must support [Chigua] Tonic Runaway Wow author, if you can finish writing it, Wow Darcy can do anything, oh yeah

Caused by long-term vegetarian diet