My Youth Romantic Comedy: The Deconstructor in the Sunlight

I can feel that the author wrote it very carefully, and the writing style is excellent, but the content is a bit heavy on the literary youth. To be honest, this book should not be placed here, it should be written in Maoke. People come here to read cool novels, especially comprehensive comics. Not many people are willing to sink their minds and savor it carefully, so it is difficult to achieve results. I don't know how long the author has been able to generate electricity for love.

Overall, it's good, but the description of facial expressions is sometimes a bit too much and too detailed. In addition, Chunwu naturally requires a single female protagonist, and it is also feasible to write multiple if lines like a game. So far, the main plot is Yukino, which has been well received.

Yes, the author must have used his brain to think carefully, but I think the writing style needs to be improved. Some of the dialogues between the protagonist and other people are a bit stiff. For example, when the protagonist reveals his past and points out the differences between himself and Yukino, the words and sentences in the dialogue are not like spoken language, but closer to written language. When I read it, I thought: "Normal people don't talk like this every day." ""It looks so strange. ", Everything else is pretty good. I think the dialogue sometimes reads better if it's more everyday and colloquial. [Love] [OK]

There is no doubt that the character creation is very good 💕. I think the character has been deeply rooted in the hearts of the people. It does have the same feeling as the original work. The protagonist's thoughts and words left an impression on me in the first chapter, which shows the author's skill. I'm rather confused about who the heroine is. I think Yukinoshita's writing is second only to that of the male protagonist, so she should be the heroine. However, it can also be seen from Yubi Bin that she likes the male protagonist, and her writing is no less than Yukinoshita's, so who is the heroine? [What] All in all, I think this is an excellent fanfic. I personally hope it can be a single female protagonist under Yukinoshita. I hope the author will continue to work hard 💕💕💕 Why is it rated 6.7? ! ! ! So wrong

How can I put it this way? I think this book is rare in fan fiction. Both the character creation and the original image are well written. The rhythm is also very appropriate and the handling of the characters is also great. But to be honest, when I was looking for Harmono fanfics, I was also looking forward to the plot of the great teacher. Although the author did a good job here, I always have an unexplainable feeling in my heart about the great teacher; Finally, the author writes very well. Don't change your mind easily. It's good now. Come on! ! ! ٩(๑^O^๑)۶

To be honest, the author's writing is very good. Whether it is the inner portrayal of the protagonist or the other characters in Harmono, they are very delicate and rich in writing. I hope the author will not make this book too eunuch, come on!

The writing is really good, giving people a fresh and refreshing feeling. The plot is interesting and the male protagonist has a good personality. The world view that can be described after the line of Shangcheng can be bigger. The emotions are in the details, not so abrupt, and the ultimate grasp. It is a very good book. I like to read it. I will update it when I can return to it in a day [laughs]

It's quite good, and the description of the protagonist is quite delicate, but I hope it will be a single female protagonist, leaving one for Daliushi. 😏

One sentence summary: The original protagonist and familiar writing style made me feel like I was back in high school summer vacation when I read the original novel in one go. This book may be a coriander, and people who are not used to the narrative techniques of light novels may not be able to adapt to it, but those who love the original novels of Harmono will definitely find it a treasure (it's really hard to squeeze the corners of your mouth). The rich psychological descriptions, out-of-the-box associations, and mysterious linkages of unknown meaning are really wonderful. If you ask me what is the beauty of it, I would first answer that I am a person who likes to think wildly. I think a lot but say very little: I think a lot so my mind is agitated, but I can't express it and I am depressed. The beauty of this book (including the original work) is that sometimes it exposes all the random thoughts to people, and sometimes it talks about it like a dialogue, so that the reader can sometimes be entertained and sometimes ponder. In short, if you like to read erotic novels, just read it. You won't say anything after reading it (the author is currently changing it to the first person, which is great👍🏻)

Grandma said - authors should give five stars to their works.