Childhood Friends Since We Were Little

My evaluation is: [Yukino evaluates Zaimokuza's novel]

I can only give it four stars. Of course I came to see the single heroine and the sweet love story. There were too many scenes that were a bit abusive to the protagonist. In fact, the scene at the school anniversary party was quite annoying. That's why I gave it 4 stars. The chapters at the school anniversary party were a bit abusive to the protagonist. Then, after I finished reading, I didn't find anything to fill in. It was basically negative emotions. I didn't find that the male protagonist and Yukinoshita were very close. Apart from living together, I felt that there was no further progress. It was not as good as when I was a child. Maybe some people like to read this type, but only a few people like it. This is why this book is not popular.

The author can make the previously deleted chapters into extras. Anyway, although that chapter is a bit messy, it is very sweet. If you still have it, I hope the author can tell me which season and episode of Harmono the general plot is, because now the author's plot is basically an original feeling, and watching it I asked Yuigahama, what do you like about seniors? You don't want to have two female protagonists, do you? Anyway, according to my speculation, the plot of the novel is now in line with the plot of Harmono Season 2, and the author can also add a little sugar (knife) into it to create some small conflicts. As for why, I understand [smile]

The single heroine Yukino has very good writing style, and many places contain the author's insights. The protagonist and the great teacher are very similar in many ways. They have seen through the darkness in the world, but they both think that this is all there is in the world, so they dare not touch the beauty, because they think that the beauty is false and will eventually be broken. There are many places where the perspective changes, but some are difficult to distinguish and affect the sense of immersion. I am always confused whose perspective is now. I hope the author can add some emphasis, otherwise I will always look at it later and come back to read it again.

I have read this book before, but when I read it again, I felt that the plot was messed up, and some parts seemed to have been changed. However, if I read it later, I can still see that the author is constantly improving. Anyway, give it five stars.

The writing is good overall, but the disconnect between the first observation and the second is a bit too big. Also, the plot before the protagonist replaces the great teacher and plays the ghost is very uncomfortable to watch. Although it is a second creation, it looks exactly the same as the original work. However, the subsequent plot is still very well written. Although the plot is similar, it has a very different feeling from watching the original work (fortunately, I persisted in watching it and did not miss it [face covering]). Finally, let's see how the author fills the library and Takeshita's trap. The author will update soon, Baga.

Dear readers, I apologize for failing to live up to everyone's expectations. I am very happy that everyone likes this book and has included it in the bookshelf. After the daily update, I saw everyone's reminders and small gifts. The author was really touched. I am really sorry to end it in such a hurry, but there is no way. Facts have proved that the author does not have a huge world view and excellent writing style to continue writing. The author also needs to survive. As you can see, the results of this book are not good. The author has no energy left to write anymore. Please come to Japan for a long time!

Overall, it feels very good. The description from multiple character perspectives gives me a very fresh feeling. Although the content is a bit messy, once you sort it out, you will feel that the story is very good. I especially feel that the author's writing style is great and it is very comfortable to read. There are many inner descriptions of the characters. I personally like this feeling very much. Few people who read this book hope that the author can continue writing. Even if he can't continue writing, they hope that he can give a good ending and not just leave. Please (put your hands together)

The writing is still online and the story is good, although I can't quite understand it. It feels like a person is dreaming, and then he discovers that he is in reality. Then he thought he was in reality, but then he was actually dreaming, which is what it felt like. A little obsessed. (Of course, it may be that my personal understanding is limited. She is still pretty good-looking and is one of the few Yukino female protagonists.) Five-star support

Not bad, the writing is very detailed, keep up the good work