My Little Pony: The Perfect Image Has Crumbled!

It's rare to comment on writing, but it's really good. And in this context where new books on Tomato Girl's Pony Channel are generally not good, the book's emergence also vindicates Pony Girl's name: through exquisite and accurate descriptions and special and interesting plot entry points is the best way to improve quality. The traffic gained by the novel setting of Succubus Neodymium Mary Sue's system will only be temporary.

Anyway, the setting is really attractive, and the writing is not bad. I think as long as it doesn't end badly or make a mess of things later on. This book should do very well🤤I hope it won't be removed from the shelves after reading it halfway (›´ω`‹) Can any other author update 10,000 words a day🥺🤤🥺🥺🥺🤤🤤🤤 The number of updates is small and the quality is not good. Some of them are even promoting new books to friends. It seems that the word count is crammed. I feel that the protagonist is too cowardly. I can only say that I will not comment on it in the future.

In fact, the plot and other aspects are very good, but the fake system is poisonous. If the real system is the mask of the protagonist, then the fake system is the ghost that harms people. I don't know if it has something to do with Discord. If so, Discord and the protagonist will also have a hostile relationship. But in fact, the real system will look better if it develops, while the fake system will cause drama. Weakening the system and emphasizing friendship will not make the protagonist too uncomfortable. Faced with social pressure and past painful experiences, I really don't want to add a backstabbing system. Having something that the protagonist can rely on will make you more motivated to watch.

The writing is very good, but I feel that the protagonist is a bit aggrieved...[Crazy] I think there is a song that fits the occasion. An adapted version of "Mo Homesickness", the lyrics are as follows: Cry loudly, no one will laugh at you here, the most important thing in life is life and death, nothing else matters, the reality is too terrible, it makes me want to escape all the time, but in the blink of an eye I am woken up by the alarm clock [I'm about to cry]

I'm so good at writing about the dampness in life. Although I come from a northern city (if I'm wrong, just think I didn't read the article carefully (waving my hand)), the style of my previous life was as humid as the summer in the south, very heavy. Great writing! Although I was unlucky to meet some bad people, I still shine brightly. Looking at it so far, I don't know if Zi Yue and the others will really trust Shirai, but the last words Shirai said should be challenging their bottom line, what does it mean to withdraw, so that others will wonder whether you consider us as friends, and just withdraw without permission. But I'm looking forward to the follow-up development. Everyone in My Little Malia is a good pony, so I hope it will develop well!

When I saw the title of the book, I thought it was a funny article. The author, who taught you to write a book like this? ! ! ! So innovative and beautiful! ! ! ! ! Looking forward to continued updates! ! ! !

Yes, the picture description is very good. The My Little Pony I watched ranks very high. If you have read Salted Fish Novelist, you can see that it is similar to what she wrote (I am talking about the picture description). It is very good.

Because he was not liked and was at the end of his rope, he decided to give up on his previous self, put on a mask, and please everyone around him who could make his life better. He is very autistic and has a severely dependent personality. I was hurt so badly that I was very afraid of being disliked by others. I hope you recover soon and don't collapse.

Very very beautiful! But if there are babies who can't bear the abuse of the protagonist, you can skip it, because the protagonist in the early stage is still quite distressing. It's really, really beautiful, the writing is very good, and some things are very interesting. Then I really want to ask, can the original system also become a pony to accompany the protagonist? ! ! ! I think it would be great if the original system could come back. I am very much looking forward to the next story, but I still hope it won't be too cruel. I cried for a long time when the baby was forgotten. I will read more and change the rating. 😘

It's really, really beautiful! Daily life is like really entering the life of My Little Pony. The sense of immersion is super strong. After watching it, I still have a feeling that I still have something to say🥺. The character creation is also super good. From the nervousness and anxiety at the beginning of coming to this world to gradually integrating into this world, becoming a member of a loving family. There is no need to split the CP and use CP. For those who like to have no CP, it is really super suitable! Really highly recommended! Believe me, as long as you read a few more chapters, you will definitely be hooked!