Drarry: How Could the Savior Possibly Be Whipped?

The writing is really beautiful. It's rare that DeHaven, Harry is not so coquettish, and Draco is not so domineering and arrogant (eye roll), they all look like normal people, and the plot is also very good and smooth. The only thing that makes me unhappy is that those who think Wen is Hadd really don't need to show their presence in the comments... These characters are human beings, and what's wrong with them being sometimes strong and sometimes weak? Do they have to summarize all the behaviors and attitudes of these characters in terms of offense and suffering? Those who think it is Hard can withdraw. The author did not have any ambiguity and made it very clear that it was De Ha. Why are there so many people criticizing her? It's really annoying. As long as Harry takes the initiative and is strong, he comments below. Isn't it really De Ha? Oh my God, don't be embarrassed.

It's not bad, but the time is wrong. The Fury Arrow should appear in the middle of the third grade, but I think it is in the second grade. The author also doesn't want Harry to lose Quidditch matches so many times, because the original Harry is a very powerful Quidditch master, and Krum is 46. Maybe my words are a bit sharp, but I really like some of the author's interactions with Deha. It's easy to compare, but it has to be reasonable, because not all original writers don't criticize Deha. I am an originalist. Because the novel has rich text, I can remember some timelines very clearly. For example, Nimbus 2000 is 199 It came out in August 2018, so there are still 2 years before Firebolt comes out, but the author is already very good. These are just my explanations. It's OK if the author doesn't make any bigger mistakes in the future [Blow a kiss] [Flow a kiss] [Flow a kiss] Also, I read very fast, so I only read it for 1 hour [Please pay attention]

The concept and setting of this book are extremely novel, the writing style is brisk and smooth, the emotions are clear, and the food is really delicious, there is so much food, please come on! Seeing as how motivated I am to work every day, I must finish it! !

It's so beautiful, their married life, the two little troublemakers, the friendship of the three little ones, the tough-talking and soft-hearted Sri Lankan, and Peeves in the final battle [love] After reading it, I felt a little sad [almost crying], but more than anything I was happy. I knew they were so happy living in another world. Finally, Deha 99 GGAD99[sending heart][sending heart]

Why no one watches QAQ [crying]

Deha CP, the overall writing style is exquisite, double life, has been completed, you don't have to worry about watching it disappear, or the torture of waiting for updates, you can just watch it in one breath and enjoy it. Everyone who likes Deha, please give me a [send heart]

It's nice to read, very sweet, and the writing is very good, but I personally feel that the emotional line develops a bit too fast, but it is indeed because of the limited space, so the emotional line is normal, but I usually read longer ones, so I think it's a bit fast, but why is it written so short that it's not enough to read😭

It is very in line with my idea of ​​Deha's interaction. The writing is delicate, and some small details are very in place (because I am a Virgo, I have high requirements for details). The author is great, come on＾0＾~

It's really beautiful! If I lie to you, my fifth personality will not be able to make money💪💪💪

It looks good [sending my heart], I, a hardheaded person, think it looks good, maybe it's because the author's writing is not OOC at all [thinking] (there may be some flaws) [eating melon] In fact, the minimum requirement for me to read fanfiction is to try not to be OOC (I saw a lot of people saying it looks like Harder, but I feel it is closer to the image in the movie (I haven't watched many movies except the first one, and I have seen clips of the others) [Eating Melon][Already Planted]