My Disciple Has a Serious Crush on Her Master

It's great, the character setting, descriptions, etc., I followed it from the short story, but why is the update so slow [face covering] [crying] I have almost forgotten the previous content and the short story [crying] I almost thought it wouldn't be updated anymore.

The writing is good, but the phoenix eyes appear too frequently. I suggest you fix it. The phoenix eyes are an external description. Outsiders can see the heroine's phoenix eyes narrowing, but the heroine herself cannot see it because this is the first person. If the heroine insists on narrowing her phoenix eyes, the perspective will cross the boundary. It is true that the heroine knows her appearance. Of course she knows that when she narrows her eyes, she narrows her eyes slightly, but writing it like this will make her look narcissistic.

Seeing that it is tied here, there are no surprises at present, it is a bit like a daily relaxed and funny group portrait article. The heroine has a carefree and cheerful personality, the super-talented monster is cute and funny, and the hero has a black sesame glutinous rice dumpling. Both of them have long mouths and they play cool straight shots with a good rhythm. They don't have to express their feelings like some masters and apprentices. The heroine has always been clear that she is determined to ascend and live the life of a happy little fairy. With a heroine like this, the hero can't be tortured even if he wants to, so let's continue with the sweet cake ~ [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts]

Very good looking. I followed it from a short story.

[Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] Dear author, don't be tired, but don't be idle either [please update]

Teacher, what you write is really good. Teacher, what you write is really great. Teacher, everything you write and describe is very good. Teacher, what you write is really beautiful. Teacher, you must continue to write. Teacher, you must update it every day. You must update it every day! (˶‾᷄⁻̫‾᷅˵)

Tied! It feels so good, so good! So beautiful! Author, don't be tired or idle, get up quickly and continue updating! [Adoration][Admiration] It's really beautiful. I couldn't put my mouth down when I watched that part. [Shy][Shy] It's so beautiful. I love watching it.

Humorous and funny article, I like it so much! Don't be cruel, you have to remember that you are a funny writer It's so funny. The author's writing style is my favorite. It's humorous, concise, and neat. It looks like it was written in a short article. Nowadays, the level of authors is uneven. Many authors like to add a lot of descriptions, but lose the important level of plot writing. Short articles use the first person more often than long articles, but the author's excellent writing style is enough to support it. Even a short article is written very well. Then there are the characters. The heroine's cowardice in the face of love is really funny, and the hero can still get hit back when he hits the ball straight. The psychological division is well written. It does not directly describe the psychology, but also reveals the feelings between the male and female protagonists through small actions. Finally, this kind of master should be hit hard and straight. (•̀ᴗ•́)و Don't be afraid, your apprentice is here

It's so well written [crying] [crying] The protagonist's personality and behavior are very good, and you must not let go of the dank male ghost disciple. The light humor and ambiguous pull in daily life are really beautiful, and the straight heroine has a faint sense of humanity. The author's writing is so good [crying] Can I wake up and watch the finale?

The little ambiguity is really sultry. The author writes it well in big letters. [Sending my heart] It's hard for me not to fall in love with this guy Ha Ji Ya's pure love. I hope I can still see the author's sweet writing when I wake up. Ah~ so sweet🤗😇😇