The Hufflepuff Queen Destroys the Quidditch Forum

Tian Nai is really good-looking and well-written. I originally liked Wood as the male protagonist or the female protagonist who likes Quidditch. When I saw the introduction, I was really excited, excited, and excited! ! ! ! The description of the heroine's emotions is super delicate. From always thinking that she would always go on her own to feeling the power of her friends, don't be too happy. When I saw the heroine going to Snape's office alone, I found a group of little badgers following behind, not the heroine alone to please Justice! She was very passionate during the competition and I really liked the character of the heroine. But now that I have read more than 20 chapters, the male protagonist has turned into Drisek. [Shy] Oh my, my Chinese is not very good and I can't describe how beautiful the text is [Shy] Anyway, it is very beautiful. The rest is a bit reluctant to read [Shy] [Shy] Is it true that the male protagonist cannot become Dricek? [Exploration]

Very well written! Although I don't know why there are so few people, the writing style of this article is really smooth and the growth line is very natural, unlike some articles that are lyrically rigid and abrupt. Moreover, the heroine is so handsome and she is my favorite type. The emotional line that is now emerging is also eye-catching. The hazy ambiguity is so delicious! ! I rarely see Wood's articles. Generally speaking, everyone thinks that although he is handsome, he is insulated from love. But this article is about a rare love story that is not OOC and is really delicious... It's so delicious. (So teacher, please try harder, it's too early and you're so lonely)

Author, I like your novels and your portrayal of the characters. I especially like the junior high school you wrote. It brought me countless inspirations. When I first saw that the catalog was for Hufflepuff, I was very happy (≧∇≦) Because I have read a lot of fanfics, but few have written about Hufflepuff, but when I saw the beginning, I had already recorded it, talking about the heroine guarding the door alone, and her heroic deeds. Especially when I saw two or three pictures, I found that it was not in any one period, not the same period as Harry Potter, nor Snape and the others. The heroine was in the same period between the two of them as they struggled and grew up with Gran. In such a period, I was very impressed. Moreover, the words in this novel gave me a lot of inspiration, because when I read Harry Potter before, I also had very big prejudices about treatment, like Slytherin, Hufflepuff must be manual and so on, he is just a loser, a fool and ignorant waste, and so on. Such words also made me fall into a trap. This is a misunderstanding. When I read the article and the Miss Slytherin and the Miss Hufflepuff were talking about this matter, I realized that I had really fallen into this misunderstanding. Just like there are infatuated and kind-hearted people in Slytherin, there is no shortage of cruel and cruel people in Hufflepuff, but such things have been infinitely weakened to zero. What I like very much is our heroine, her bravery, her miracle of being alone, and her sense of not giving in. She walks alone, thinking that there is no one behind her. When she looks back, she feels that she has her own teammates, which strengthens my determination to continue reading. I I thought there was no one behind me, but it turned out that you all gave the heroine a great confidence behind me, not to mention Hufflepuff's loyalty. It made me understand the word loyalty again. He is loyal to Hufflepuff and also moves towards a bright future with them. This is their promise. This one fascinated me so much that I couldn't finish reading it until the end. Author, I like your idea, and your understanding that is different from others adds a rich touch to your novel. So the author should persevere and work hard to update. The author loves you, loves you, loves you and works hard to update (๑˙❥˙๑)

What can I say, it's very cute! Most of the fanfics I have read before are dominated by male and female protagonists, and other characters seem to serve the protagonist. But this one is very different, more like a group portrait. Each image is very three-dimensional, such as Farley and Blanche, both are cute. The atmosphere in Hufflepuff is really warm! The green emotion of a teenager is like a green apple, with the feeling of sugary honey, a bit sour but mostly sweet and pure. Really enjoyed this book! Author, please let me be your editor. This book is so cute! (Sorry, I'm short of words. I like to use cute when describing things.) Be sure to read it! ! !

Different from many fanfics, in this article I saw a vivid spirit, a group, the glory of our Badgers, and the players who showed their talents on the court. The descriptions on the field were very passionate and real, which gave me a feeling of shock. I did not follow the plot of the original work, but I saw the new life of Badgers. This article is also very natural. There is no rigid transition in each chapter, but it is very daily. The big words give me a kind of bud born in spring, which grows with its kind. "The wild fire cannot burn it out, but the spring breeze blows and regenerates." The heroine gave me such a spirit, not fragile, free. I think her best reliance is her inner self. After falling, she stood up again and looked at me with her stubborn eyes. The heroine is a very powerful person, and the author is not like other fan fiction heroines. Cora is a strong-hearted but also scared person. As written in the article, when the troll comes, the scene is chaotic and full of screaming. Cora is also scared but she is also a conscientious prefect. She is covering her emotions. All in all, boss, I will always follow you

It's really refreshing. The badgers are all very nice and united. Cora is also super cool. She has a mother-like feeling, and sometimes she's a little cute. The interaction with Wood is also very pure and fun. I hope the ambiguity period will be longer. After all, they are still very young (only fifteen or sixteen years old) and it is hard to imagine what it would be like for two people to fall in love. In the end, the ambiguity period is the most comfortable and the most enjoyable! ₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑

The writing is very, very good! I've read a lot of HP articles and this is the first time I see a heroine like this! The description of Quidditch subverted my imagination! Ced's growth is described delicately and naturally, Cora's personality is also very distinct, giving me the illusion of being a Gryffindor, and Blanche's character is also very full. Cora and Wood's emotional line, especially the hazy emotions of Wood who have a crush on each other but are not aware of it, are particularly well described. To be honest, at first I thought the two would be rivals or old enemies, but the two of them working together to deal with Flint is really passionate! ! Too bad it's a new book. . But well written! The author would like to read it more!

I loved this article, especially the description of Quidditch! I think this is actually a test of one's skills. A paragraph of text can show the intense atmosphere of the scene! Each college is trying their best to win glory for their own college. I am a person who particularly hates sports, but I also like the pride of honor brought by winning. In many cases, the impact of the picture will be far greater than the text, and the description of the game here makes me have a desire to rush to the field! The description is very powerful, with a far greater impact than the picture, and is full of beautiful longing and yearning! This article is also very good at describing daily life. Every excellent result in a competition is the result of thousands of practices. After the competition, everyone returns to daily life, laughing and joking, and giving each other gifts on important days. Cora seemed a little lonely at first, always thinking of surviving everything alone. Well, after each game, everyone got closer to each other, and the relationship between Wood and Cora was more than just rivals and classmates. From shopping together in Hogsmeade to asking what he liked at Christmas and wanting to know him, this is a very ambiguous boundary. They are close to friends, but they seem to be more than that. Whether it's a thunderbird brooch or a warm, singing scarf, it's a warm and happy moment that makes people forget for a moment that they will have to face the Dark Lord in the future. And the female prefect of Slytherin (please allow me to forget her name for a moment) has changed since she apologized to Kara and admitted that she was biased. At this time, Hogwarts's deep-rooted hostility and prejudice against other houses has changed. , Cora and her conversation in the shack sharply pointed out the problem between the colleges. Everyone in the college has a deep prejudice against each other, putting inherent shackles on them, and through good luck and accident, the family obliterated their efforts. Although the Slytherin prefect cannot make a choice when she is engaged to someone else, it is precisely because her fiancé is not a very decisive person. This outstanding and capable girl will surely be able to win her own glory one day. I really hope that her name can be completely remembered and addressed by everyone. In short, what is presented in this article is not just a superficial story, but also contains some realities and problems that existed at the time. For example, some people work hard, but are denied by others with a light word of good luck. This exists whether in the book or in reality. I think the feelings are written very delicately. It's a feeling that is secretly explored before it is spoken (?). The rhythm is not fast, and it feels like a long and steady flow. The above are all my personal opinions. They are purely subjective thoughts. The author has not finished it yet, but it can be said to be a very excellent novel.

Really super pretty. This is my favorite book so far, bar none. Every character has flesh and blood, and the heroine's image is very three-dimensional. She exudes unique charm both on the Quidditch field and in everyday life. She shows amazing abilities on the field; off the field, she takes the initiative to take responsibility and also has a vulnerable side that is not revealed. I also felt the unity of Hufflepuff, the tacit cooperation on the field, and going to Snape's office together to discuss explanations... I especially like this kind of unity. I also like the emotional line very much. The unpredictable atmosphere between the two people is well expressed. Every time I see the relationship between two people getting closer, the corners of my mouth fly to the sky [laughing]

Nice. . . Ah, in the end, I had to endure the punishment in frustration,,, I like the way the protagonist looks confident and flamboyant on the court [crying][crying][crying][crying] I really appreciate your writing. I really like your writing. The heroine is so charming. She is locked with Wood. I like this kind of confrontation but the love is just beginning. [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Love]