My Little Pony: There's Something Seriously Wrong With This World!

Your rating is: A+! Your novel will shock the entire tomato pony circle and put everyone who sees it in the supreme artistic realm. Your novel will shine like the stars of Equestria. We need artists like you! The novel contains a lot of jokes, and the interaction between the author and the readers in the paragraphs and comments is very rich. The characters are not OOC. As a single heroine, Twilight's interaction with the protagonist is also handled very well. The persecution of Twilight from time to time is the finishing touch! The combat power has not collapsed, and the protagonist relies on his super wisdom to walk on the road of advancing from a disembodied magical creature to an alicorn. Therefore, this novel will serve as a model for pony fans, and I look forward to you creating more excellent works!

Yes, it is the only My Little Pony fanfic I have found that I can continue to read. Although I have abandoned this book twice, it is still very interesting to read later. This book can clearly see the author's progress, so it gives me a feeling that it is getting better and better. But what really stood out to me was starting from Chapter 17, which is where I am currently. The main problems at the beginning were that the segmentation was not done well, and the dialogue between the protagonists was also very stereotyped. The author has made rapid progress, and these problems have been basically solved. I won't go into details about the settings. After all, there seem to be conflicts between settings in different versions.

Among all the pony stories I have read, it is definitely unique. It is a work with its own plot and ideas. It is worth watching for all pony lovers. It just has too many jokes and is a bit abstract.

This is truly ecstatic! I have never seen such a fierce, domineering, strong, loyal and obsessed with abstract content! It's so exciting that I can't even speak of it!

The protagonist has the best early setting among the fanfics, and the logic is also very clear. There are some chapters where the three little ones only get their cutie marks, which is a little flawed. I hope that the following chapters can increase my favorability, but I can only have one cp. It is best not to have an officially confirmed cp. The Crystal Empire chapter will be Shining Armor Green later. In summary, although it is not finished, it is a very interesting book. In conclusion, this book is definitely rated low so far The logic from Chapter 1 to Chapter 208 can at least reach 8.9 Points

So far, there seems to be nothing wrong with the pony. It should be such a warm and sweet daily mouth! ! ! [Hokage Shisui's eye expression]

Suddenly I realized that I haven't written a book review for a million words, 666 domo, this is the author of this book [laughs] Readers with ninja vision must have noticed the way the plot of this book develops. Along the plot, but not limited to the plot, putting many places together... Commonly known as scribbling [laughing] (This then led to the book being assigned to the fantasy area by AI during verification) The author was very sad after reading Pony's ending, not only the plot of the ending, but also the ending itself. When the story reaches the end, it means the end, the adventure is over, the story is over, there is nothing new and interesting anymore, and we fall into a meaningless nothingness (author's self-perception) Therefore, the author has a habit of sometimes leaving the ending unread when reading a story. It's like in my world, the story has not been observed by me, so it has no ending. The same is true for Xiao Ma. I am looking forward to whether there will be a different development. When the protagonist is inserted, the story will go in a different direction, and even the moral conveyed will be different [Thinking] I think emotion and love are two-way and mutual. Although the protagonist of this book's brilliant sequence has been helping all ponies in the plot, this does not mean that he is perfect or anything. On the contrary, he also has many mistakes and omissions. It's just the experience he remembers as a human being that makes him appear mature in many things. And the truth is always easier said than done. But in fact, while teaching the ponies, he also learned a lot from them. Help them and be helped by them. While giving love, you also receive love. This is also a sentence in the introduction. I hope that this soul who came to Equestria from another world will find peace and happiness [Thoughts] This is the main idea, the following is the main line Just like the Brilliant Sequence in Equestria can create gems through the laws of the universe on the other side of the earth. The two worlds may seem similar, but they are completely different. What does a world without magic mean? The power of the Brilliant Sequence relies on his existence as an alien soul. His magical body, his Alicorn power, and his wind demon power are all born and exist based on the differences between the two worlds. Since I have no body, I can transform myself at will. Without a soul, there is no fear of broken thoughts There is no existence that can ignore the mercy of fate … But love is not, the love of the glorious sequence and everything known in this world is not. There is no difference in love in every world, it is the only thing in common. It's something so fragile that it passes away day and night. It is also something that is so strong that it lasts forever.

See Chapter 297 Personal Comments The author knows a lot of jokes and writes them. There are a lot of them in the book, but there are too many of them. One chapter can account for 1/10 of the daily jokes. It seems okay at first, but there are too many and it makes me feel a little boring. The plot of the protagonist's combat power improvement is one that I strongly recommend watching. It's the first time the Crimson King's combat power is improved. The protagonist realizes his weakness (he just passed through because he is in the permanent virtual state and is not afraid of death, but is punished by the boss and finds that he will die when facing this boss). But for [friends], the protagonist finally chooses to sacrifice himself, but he does not die and his combat power is greatly improved (you can refer to the collapse of Yak next door. There is no difference between the two) As for the relationship between the protagonist and the heroine, based on the chapters I have read so far, I can only say that Lu Mingfei has a brilliant sequence hidden in his eyes. Because I am a time traveler, I cannot forget my original world and I have no sense of belonging to this world, so I refuse to form bonds (the protagonist has been in this world for more than ten years) If you like no heroine, you can try it If you like a single female protagonist, you can leave If you like multiple girls, you might find one as long as you keep reading (I skipped through the pages and only saw one chapter where the protagonist's relationship has progressed, and I didn't see any of the other female leads in F6)

The content contains a lot of memes, mixed with a small amount of plot. The world view is grand and expressive. The main story is dark and has some contrast. It is funny in daily life, the main story is serious, and the characters are vivid? (Crazy), daily descriptions often end with a bunch of jokes. The amount of information is actually quite low, but this is not a big problem in daily life. The main thing is that if you can understand the jokes, the paragraphs and comments in each chapter are very interesting. Good looking 2333

The logical thinking of this book is very good. When he introduces the story of My Little Pony, he also provides detailed supplements to My Little Pony's world view. The protagonist was originally a human, but he didn't know the plot of the My Little Pony animation, so he was able to integrate his feelings and thoughts into the story very well. At the same time, I also discovered my own way of thinking as a human being, and saw through the retirement strategies of big companies. It is a good choice for babies who want to watch a sane protagonist.