My Little Pony: Do You Want to Listen to Music on the Moon? I Really Do

The rhythm feels very good, but I want to watch the life! ! ! [Laughing evilly][top post]

Good book, good book. The writing is comparable to the previous Mr. Human in Frankfurt. Believe me, it will definitely look good First: Don't go to school hungry! Second: When the weather is nice, you should sunbathe your quilt! Third: Pay attention to passing vehicles when crossing the road! Fourth: Don't rely on the strength of others! Fifth: Run barefoot on the sand!

To see such excellent Xiao Mawen, even death is worth the price of admission~

Shen Nong comes uninvited, the writing is fluent, the interactions are warm, the protagonist is very good, sunny and cheerful, not a Japanese-style dank man with heavy psychological defects, which is great. Start by rubbing Pinkie Pie's little head angrily There are some points that you can pay attention to (personal opinion) 1. The main line can be clearer to avoid the feeling of water. The sub-plots are scattered and have no connection between them. Animation is okay, but the novel recommends that the main and branch lines are connected. For example: Removing an entire subplot will have no impact on the main plot. If there are many such subplots, then you need to pay attention. 2. Generally speaking, after a plot is over, something should be gained, such as the advancement of emotional lines, abilities, foreshadowing, solving a certain problem, etc. The main thing is to grow, otherwise it will give people the feeling of having done something but not doing anything at all. Of course, the above are all routines. If you are just writing for fun and reading for yourself, you don't need to worry about these, as long as you feel comfortable writing. The writing is relatively concise, without the complicated flavor that the old author has (referring to the number of words describing water, and being sloppy). The overall writing style is very fresh, which can be regarded as unique.

It's good-looking. It completed all my fantasies about ponies. The protagonist is relaxed and relaxed, and his attitude towards ponies remains close but not ambiguous. I read it from beginning to end, but the author has not updated it. Why why why why [Petrochemical] [Petrochemical] [Petrochemical]

Hope to keep updating. Are there Celestia, Gray and Starlight among the author's heroines? Will the three sirens accept it? Will people accept it?

Give it a five-star rating. The relationship between M6 and the protagonist is handled very well.

The first positive review comes from me. This book was created by a newbie. Please forgive me for the poor writing style.

Good-looking (calm analysis. Jpg)

I don't know if the heroine is Twilight or Moon Okay, it actually has multiple female protagonists, and the description is quite good.