The Warmth of Mortal Life, the Gods Look Down

Disclaimer: Read the first 15 chapters carefully and comment first. If it were me in the past, I would probably tie it up and then comment, but now I don't have time and I have accumulated too much disappointment. I actually don't have the patience to read. Please forgive me. After viewing: So far, it feels very comfortable. It will be outstanding if we stick to this quality. Intangible cultural heritage is indeed a huge material library and a very high platform, and it is not overused now, and the themes are novel. There are many settings and the world view is quite large. The writing is good, the language is poetic, the environment is rendered, and the parallels and contrasts are good. The name of the protagonist is very meaningful, but "civilization will not be an ember, because the spark has burned", the writing power can at least take on the responsibility of intangible cultural heritage. The characters are described in detail and have a familiar teenage feel. I'm a little touched because it's rare to see sincere works nowadays. It's not that this book is very good, but on the stage of Infinite Brawl, I actually saw a lion dance standing on its own high platform. The plot was bland and I didn't watch much of it, but the only thing that retained me in the first few chapters was the setting and writing. I hope there will be some reversal and foreshadowing in the later plot, and it would be better to have a small climax that shines before my eyes. The best ratio of lyricism to plot is 3:7, or less lyricism. Internet articles are different from prose. Excellent works are indispensable for the sublimation of lyricism and discussion, but the most basic skeleton lies in plot development, and the rest are the icing on the cake and the finishing touch. For platforms and web articles When describing the specific content of intangible cultural heritage, try not to incorporate a lot of subjective consciousness, especially to add some unrealistic halo to a certain point that you like, objective description and a little artistic processing. Inheritance does not require a lot of pen and ink. For things that have universal resonance, a little blank space is more effective. Can the author summarize or introduce the traditional knowledge of this chapter at the end of each chapter (not the main text, just as an extra or some supplement. Some people don't read comments). In fact, many people do not have the desire or time to check this knowledge in person. They are easily confused when reading, and the settings and pictures cannot be connected, and their emotions are inexplicably sublimated. Over time, the reading mood is easily depressed. Ok, the author's persistence is one of the greatest miracles in the world. Being able to put the ideals and thoughts in your mind into writing is really amazing! Long live creation≧▽≦ Let's pick up the ashes together. Can I still see updated works when I come back from my next monthly vacation?

The writing is quite good, the writing is well-argued, the plot description is harmonious, the transitions are not abrupt, suitable for slow reading, the single female protagonist, there is no ambiguity at the moment, the inheritance progress is layered, the key improvements are detailed plot descriptions, it is not the kind of improvement that is inexplicable, the content includes relevant extensions of intangible cultural heritage, the only thing is that the realm seems to be improved a little faster.

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The sharpest blade needs to be tempered thousands of times, so I wish you: Tough muscles and bones are tempered in the fire, and an unyielding edge is honed in the frost; even if the road ahead is densely covered with thorns and wind and rain are dark, you can split the fog with a fearless posture, and accumulate strength with a calm heart, and finally become a sharp blade that can cut off hardships and protect your original intention. In the furnace of time, it blooms with its own unique and unstoppable brilliance.

Awesome intangible cultural heritage very restored The "even" part at the back is a bit too long and disjointed, and the connection is not very good. I hope the author will continue to write more.

Nice! This theme is rare!

The subject matter is very good, and it seems to be quite good so far

The subject matter is novel, the plot is smooth and not brainless

After reading it for a while, I found that the subject matter of intangible cultural heritage is very good, but maybe the content did not attract me very much, so I withdrew it. However, the author has some ideas. I would like to support it with five stars.

Good looking, intangible cultural heritage theme