Making the Defense of Jinling, Players Charge Forward in Tears

The subject matter is quite good, but the author's writing needs to be improved. I feel that there is a very small flaw. Don't criticize me. It's a personal feeling. I don't mean to insult. It is that every time the protagonist persuades others, he has to bring up a list of the sufferings suffered by the people. It is written too much and feels a bit stiff, but it is still very touching. It feels very good. It just feels that the protagonist shines a bit too much. He does not have the intelligence and game sense of other players. I recommend it. It is good to watch.

Wow, it's full of real feelings, the text is very good, and it can arouse the readers' emotions very well.

I feel that this type is suitable for group portrait writing. You can write from the perspective of each front. The protagonist is just the creator and relies on the players. Of course, the author writes from the perspective of the protagonist, which is also very good.

How can I put it... If this is a historical time travel novel, then it is a pretty good novel. The characters are vivid and the story plot is very visual, and the words between the lines are very easy for readers to empathize with. But when viewed as a game production article, the problem is huge. Including but not limited to: the gameplay seems to have many flaws, the script kills the host personally, the planner and producer stares at the NPC he designed with a ferocious face, and other operations. If this weren't a game, none of the above would be a problem. In short, after reading more than ten chapters, this book gave me the feeling that it was a sports car running on the wrong track, with amazing momentum but in the wrong position. Those who come here for game production can go, and those who are interested in combat can have a look.

The writing is very good, really very good, but I suggest you not to write too much around the protagonist. If the book is another kind of continuation, then everyone in the book should have his or her own brilliance. It can be done without the protagonist, and there is no need to deliberately create a god.

I'll write an objective review for this novel. I've never written a review before, so I'm trying to write a little bit. I've read more than 2,000 pages on my phone. Overall, it's pretty good, quite exciting, positive energy, and the subject matter is also very good. The previous part is tear-jerking and can arouse the readers' emotions. They can't stop and are always holding back their energy. But in the middle part, I personally felt that it was not handled smoothly. I think it was mostly touching for the sake of being touching, and it was a bit overdone and made me feel tired. Therefore, I started to skip and read. All good stories should have ups and downs, various contradictions, and a process that makes people calm down and welcome the next climax. Instead of blindly using one emotion to permeate the article, thinking will be paralyzed. No matter how touching or advancing, it will not be effective. As a bookworm for more than 20 years, I am optimistic about the author who is capable, emotional, good in logical thinking, and has a distinctive personality in the group portrait. Hope to see more exciting works in the future.

Give it a good review, it's quite touching, but the protagonist has too many roles, and it feels like it's a one-man show. So many players can't compare to one protagonist. But the writing is very touching, so I'll give it five stars.

It's not a cool article, it's very sad, and it's more like a small character in the history of Jinling, and every "player" tries his best to save it. It's hard to judge the military aspect. The characters and emotions are written with great detail. Basically, my eyes will turn red once every two chapters, and I will shed tears once every three chapters. I watched part of it earlier and skipped it in the middle because it was too sadistic and too brutal. It feels like running towards a future without victory, a group of people working hard to achieve success. It's not like a game planning game, but rather like the moment when the protagonist led a group of ordinary people to travel to the history of Jinling. It's just that you can exit halfway, and you can't come back after death. Basically, there are no cheats. The only highlight of the protagonist is the detailed description of the entire Jinling characters. But fortunately, the current updated position has reached the point where official military leaders are taking command. In the end, we can win. I'll wait until this battle is won before reading the previous chapters. Otherwise, the whole article is full of knives, and the tone is too heavy. I couldn't bear it at all, my eyes were almost swollen from crying.

The sentiment of the article is there, and the stance is good, but when I started reading the first two thousand words, I was deeply moved and moved me to tears. But when I saw more than 4,000 in one breath, I felt tired and had a headache. The whole text keeps people emotionally high from beginning to end. The plot is good, the writing is good, but the details are not good.

The writing is great, the details of the characters are very well written, and it writes about many ordinary people, which makes us realize the horror of war more. It feels much better than history books. The main reason is that just a few words in history books cannot make us remember it so deeply. The score is high, the score is over 90, which is too little.