Pokemon: The Greatest Trainer in History

Good looking, more updates It is recommended to write about waveguide. The original work has the power of waveguide. There are also Yusanjia who are suitable for double swords. At least Water Arrow Turtle is suitable for double swords. Can Eevee evolve into Sun Eevee? Fairy Eevee is tired of seeing it. Sun Eevee can also form a sunny team with Charizard Bulbasaur. After all, it evolves during the day. It should be better than ordinary elves to fight against the weather. Water Arrow Turtle can also form a rainy day team with Pikachu, preferably from Kuailong

Overall evaluation: Not bad. It is indeed well written, allowing Xiaozhi to lead a different life. The protagonist is invincible and the story is good. Although it follows the main line, it is novel and even skips many unnecessary branch lines. Where is the one star? The author writes some marginal descriptions from time to time, whether it is with humans or elves. If these marginal descriptions are not too much, it doesn't look like much. The marginal descriptions do not mean that they cannot be written, but they are a bit too much. I obviously feel that removing them will not affect anything. Or it may be less to make the overall writing style more stable. Otherwise, if you wipe it from time to time, I personally think it will affect the perception.

Battle! Cool! He is worthy of being a true master of reverse attributes among battlers. The plot is very well written. In the future, I hope to include the previous heroines Xiaoxia, Xiaoyao, Xiaoguang, Serena, and Lillie. Don't abandon it like in the original work. Anyway, the physique is already comparable to that of a humanoid Pokémon. I hope I can leave no regrets!

I've read half of the book so far. Xiaozhi prefers Xiaochi's character in this book. He has strong physical strength and is quite interesting. However, the author's plot is a bit too fast. He could add some warm things between Pokémon and people.

It's a bit interesting, and the writing is also readable. This Xiaozhi is a bit like Chi who has been in Baiyin Mountain for a long time. When did he evolve to speak only three points? [Sinister smile]

Physical MVP + divinity, full of security, the interaction between Pokémon is also very interesting, especially since Ash has no idea of ​​collecting, but the Pokémon have haha ​​ꉂꉂ(ᵔᗜᵔ*). But the writing at the end is a bit bland. During the journey, Xiaoxia likes Xiaozhi as much as in the original novel. I don't know much about the protagonist's thoughts, but I don't like to see this kind of occasional ambiguity between men and women. However, the length of this kind of story is quite small, which is okay. However, Xiaoyao needs to be taught as a newcomer, and the description of growth is a little too much. It feels like it robs Xiaozhi of the scenery, and it feels like the narrative object has changed. All in all, the interaction with Pokémon can be a little bit more, I like this [send heart][send heart]

It's pretty cool. Xiaozhi is calm and strong, and he doesn't have any messy data. Xiaozhi has become the urban dragon king in these paragraphs. He was bullied twice and had no reaction at all.

A good Pokémon fanfic. Ash is physically invincible. The heroine can't tell the author. I still like Chise. I'm looking forward to the next upgrades of the Beast Theater and Ash's Awakening Guide.

I have an idea, now Ash has learned super powers. One of the superpowers is teleportation. Wait until you awaken the power of the wave guide later, and then learn the wave missile. In the later stage, is it possible to teleport behind the enemy and fire a wave of missiles? It's just Flying Thunder God plus Rasengan.

The Blue Beast of Zhenxin Town