Want to Become an Immortal? Become a Junior Sister First

I wonder if I have the wrong software. There is no tomato🍅 flavor, it's all pineapple flavor🍍[Like][Like][Like]

The longer I watched it, the more I realized it was well-conceived and the story was fast-paced. Characters enter gradually, but most of them think that Chekov's gun has its structural function. Some exit at the right time, some seem like game branches are activated from time to time, and some are like a time bomb that will trigger some "emergency events" very reasonably. Most of the characters have distinct personalities. As time goes by in line with the development rate of the plot, the character's "face" will change color or even angle. This is especially obvious for the protagonist, whose character was intensely shaped by tense events in the early stages, and some of his subsequent behavioral habits and habits are related to the social environment in which he has been living for a long time. The plot design is very good. From the details of each character's setting and the fact that most characters will continue to appear until they exit, it can be seen that these plots are not just thought of. In fact, many times a skill, a vessel, an event or even the appearance of a character assists in advancing the plot or foreshadowing, or creates a more complete character image. A very smart thing is that the settings so far have their own flexibility, and many places will not tighten the settings; the author will pay attention to the readers' comments and thoughts, and take them into the structure of the plot, using the blank space in the previous text to naturally improve the plot to fit the readers' preferences, while also being reasonable and maintaining the author's own style. The main themes of immortality and sexual transformation are very harmonious and important in this book. Lu Linjiu's female fall did not fall into the cliché of ordinary transformation stories, but closely followed Lu Linjiu's overall personality changes in certain events. This process was also gradual and comparable before and after. When Lu Linjiu took the initiative to dress up as a man and woman, recalling the "macho" oath he made when he first entered Qingling Mountain, the mixture of feeling lost and firm and broad-minded will make people deeply feel that this is a funny but not funny story. This style is a consistent feature of the whole text. Perhaps everyone who appears in it has his or her own indescribable experience. No character appears just for the sake of appearing. They always have their own liveliness, troubles, and even sadness as a living being. As the protagonist who has personally experienced everything, her state of mind has been pierced, washed, licked, and nourished... Lu Linjiu is an unfortunate person. Her origin is full of mysteries. Close relatives: either she cannot recognize her relatives and return home, or she was caught up in the entanglements of the previous generation and died early in the story. There are only a handful of teachers and friends who are truly close to each other after the early days. Those who survive are either crazy (like Master Qingfeng, whom she first truly recognized) or are destined to be different from Lu Linjiu (like the few who embarked on the road of cultivating immortality with Lu Linjiu). A friend from the same village, a drugstore family she met in Shengchi, etc.); But she is also even more lucky. She has noble blood, extraordinary talents, and a profound background, which has blessed her to survive natural and man-made disasters one after another, and continue to pursue the true meaning of a higher realm and origin. She also has a lovely character and can truly win the favor of some big shots (such as Feng Yan, the lord of Shengchi City, and the young master of the Demon Sect); she is also very real, has developed some strange hobbies, can enjoy herself in time, and has fun with some people with special temperaments. I hope that Lu Linjiu can go all the way, and I also hope that she can maintain the girlish heart of a "macho man" who continues to explore immortality. If you can find someone who can truly talk to each other and trust each other with everything, maybe the article will be more warm while being depressing.

I didn't realize how much it cost, but I feel like I'm going to get married in the next second [eating melon]

I enjoyed watching it, and I like to watch the protagonists being pulled on the edge of life and death. They are born to live in a conspiracy. Although there are some bugs in the plot, the early stage is a bit bland, and the bad taste is too strong, but if you pursue reasonableness too much, it will be meaningless. Overall, it is good, but it needs to be improved. The taste changed as I wrote it. Originally, in order to survive, I had to give in a little bit, and the repeated pulling and pulling disappeared. I was frustrated that I had not had a wave of relief for so long, and it just went on so flatly. Instead, the protagonist became more and more bohemian, and his inner twists were always written directly. The result looked more like he became more confident after having a backer. After the initial attraction was gone, some plot flaws were magnified. I originally thought it was a love-hate relationship between grandparents, mother and daughter, but it was not. Or maybe it was the collapse and despair after being deceived, but it was not. It was even a combination of both, from dark revenge to being loved and redeemed, but it is not the case at the moment. The only emotional outburst was when being tortured by the devil, but in the end it was still acted. The protagonist was too bland, as if she was not the one who experienced this.

It's rare to find a good book that's very satisfying. I like books where the female protagonist gradually becomes stronger. It's just that this book has too many holes that have not been filled in, and too many questions that have not been answered. The more you read, the more doubts you have in your mind. The author will mention these holes every once in a while, but only to remind the readers that they exist, and will not write in depth. I guess the author has a plan, but the speed of pushing the main plot is too slow, which makes people a little impatient to wait, especially the plot of the protagonist entering the Green Sword Sect for the first time. I have almost read more than one million words of the latest chapter, but when I think about the plot here, I still have a lot of doubts. I hope the author can fill in some pitfalls first. In addition, a single branch plot is a bit too long. For example, the plot between Ding Jue and Qiao Xue after being injured has more than 30 chapters and it has no effect on the main plot. It is mainly boring. I suggest it be shorter. If the author has follow-up arrangements, just think of me as farting. Also, I am looking forward to when the protagonist will return to the demon world to reunite, face the fear in his heart, and get along with his cheap mother on a daily basis. I am really excited just thinking about it. You're so cool, why do you still have to make it all-inclusive? It's clear that the protagonist likes women, so why do you always write about the protagonist and the male co-star having an affair? Give me an explanation as to whether to change your marriage or change your marriage?

The content is relatively new to me. When I first read the introduction and the introduction, I thought it was a 20-300,000-word book that was just a side project of cultivating immortality. As a result, the unexpected development of the story became interesting, and I was somewhat looking forward to how the protagonist would become a fairy step by step.

Overall, the writing is okay, and the story is more interesting than most of the books in 🍅. Although some parts in the later period were not well written. For example, for no reason, the plot suddenly went to the perspective of the supporting character while writing it, and several chapters were written at once. When the supporting character's story is over, I don't know what the meaning of his part is? What does taking up so many chapters have to do with the protagonist? I just want to skip watching the protagonist's perspective earlier. If you must write a supporting character's perspective to advance the plot, it's not impossible, but don't take up too much space and try to be as concise and compressed as possible. Poisonous points: The author of this book says not to get married, but he wants to have an affair with a man without getting married, and there are a lot of pages about the ambiguity, but there are also plots where he has direct sex with different female co-stars, and it feels like he wants to take it all. However, Bian Bai and Bian Marry are two different audience groups. The author thought that theoretically he could harvest both groups by doing this, but in fact, he will trample on all the poisonous points of both groups. In the end, the readers who will be left behind will only be a small minority hobby group. The story is not bad but the actual income is not high. I would like the author to find his own position and analyze why. Originally, the audience for the transformation is small enough, and it is necessary to filter out an even smaller audience under this audience, so that the income can be high. Advantages: The characters are well created. Both the protagonist and the supporting characters are written with flesh and blood, and you can feel that different characters have different personalities. There are humorous points in the story that can make people smile, and there are also sad points that can make people empathize. With these advantages, I have been able to type 90% of the books on 🍅. This book is worth reading and studying for anyone who wants to write a book. I personally like it, and there are some characters that the author has created that I like quite a bit. The first one to appear was Xiaodie, but later she had no role. Xiaodie showed up again and showed her liking for a man. Then Lian Xinyun appeared, but there was very little plot content. She appeared twice and then disappeared. The author did not write about how to solve the poison in her body and did not give her a plot. Then came Qingling. Qingling attacked the protagonist the most fiercely. As a result, the author later wrote that Qingling was not sincere. If the story unfolds later, I feel that only Lian Xin Yun has the chance to be the other half of the protagonist. After all, Lian Xin Yun's tragedy was directly or indirectly caused by the protagonist. The character of the little fairy at the beginning was stabbed in the back by the protagonist and turned into a witch. Qing Ling treated the protagonist as a toy, but in the end, the protagonist treated Lian Xin Yun as a toy. The protagonist and Lian Xin Yun are actually involved in a very deep relationship, so I really hope that the protagonist can trust his other half wholeheartedly.

It's an unusual novel. It's not cliche. The plot is really novel and logical. You won't know the ending at a glance. I still can't guess how it will end. What's even more rare is that the author really devoted his emotions to shaping the characters, writing music, and writing about real people. It's so rare, I hope the author can stick to it and finish it!

Wait and see, what can I say about the plot? It feels like the process of growing up a witch (PS: Western type). But what about the plot? Does it feel like being constrained? After finally escaping from one restriction and entering another, the reading gives people a feeling of being unable to move forward, as if the plot is forcing the protagonist to go in a predetermined direction (Author Sang, you are not afraid that you cannot control the protagonist, are you?) As long as the later development does not go in the direction of remarriage, I think it is still very optimistic. The author's intention does not seem to be writing in that direction, but more like (writing in the direction of...) As long as there is no cp added, or the plot of the male protagonist being forced to marry, I think it will not be shocking (of course, you can force the relationship, we need details, every step of every step is very detailed) I'm very interested in chasing my daughter's crematorium, but I'm not sure if it's in the author's outline, so I won't force it. In terms of later development, this article is quite difficult to grasp. Come on, author, if you write it well, the score will not be low [laughter]

It's nice to read, I love to read it, but it has a bit of a sad feeling (I think). It's cruel, but not cruel to the end. I personally think it's a slightly sadistic one. Maybe this is just right, because the cruel writing is a bit of a test for readers. I don't know why I sympathize with the protagonist (at least what the author wrote touched my heartstrings a bit)