Cultivating to Immortality as a Mortal with a System Panel

1: The manuscript of this book is currently available and can be consumed with confidence. Two: I won't write emotional dramas for the time being. Fight scenes are my comfort zone. Three: This book sets a grand worldview. It belongs to the traditional cultivation of immortality, but it takes different paths and leads to the same destination. Four: I wrote the previous Mortal Realm two years ago. If you don't like it, you can skip it and read the Immortal Realm directly. Five: If fellow Taoists have opinions and suggestions, I can listen to them, but I may not be able to write them down. This post is a merit post! Not an all-male, all-female story! Non-women respect men! It's neither a man nor a woman! Respect strength! There are few female characters in the first 50 chapters, and the plot requires them not to appear! Growth article! Growth article! Feilongao Tianwen! It will be fun later! Free text, show mercy!

It's okay, but it feels too classic. It's the style from a few years ago. I can tell where it's going after just one glance. It's a bit boring for me. If I try more in the future, it's still pretty good.

The traditional stream of cultivating immortals. But at the beginning, most of the characters are men, so this is acceptable. The villains are basically female villains, and they are all the kind of villains with no structure, very vicious women with facial makeup. The author's plot is really good and enjoyable. I hope the villain can be described with more intelligence and uniqueness. From what I've seen so far, she's a bully who takes advantage of her power, a conceited daughter of a noble family, a poisonous woman who was disfigured and hates a beautiful woman... Just so damn familiar to you NPCs. As for swear words, I have no objection to swearing at people, bitches, and other things that are obviously meant to curse girls. The heroine is a woman, so this is okay, but! Does the heroine have no teammates? I really watched the whole process. The heroine was scolded, the heroine's female friends were scolded, and the male cultivator who was with us was not scolded. It was as if he was invisible. Well done to the author. Although you are writing about a female protagonist, I don't ask you to make any production decisions and give all the highlights to women. At least, can the treatment of men and women be more balanced? The author's three views are actually normal, and the characters' three views in the article are also pretty good. But sometimes the writing has a sense of beauty that has been tainted by the domineering prose of ancient times. Generally speaking, the heroine has a good personality, the world view looks quite big, there are some innovations that can make people shine, and the villains basically disappear as soon as they appear. This is a very good article on cultivating immortals. However, the current characters are all flat and familiar NPCs are clustered together. After reading through the book, the only ones that impressed me deeply were the female protagonist and the male protagonist Qin Heng (the purest and most benevolent guide?). This is chapter 145. Some minor flaws can be skipped and the book can be read. I'll check it out later and comment later.

Very cool! ! The author is great! ! This article on cultivating immortals is worth watching 1: The world view is very large, so the content is very rich, there are continents to experience, and there are many large sects. It is not unique, there is competition, and there are opponents to read (@author The heroine is a little bit stronger, adjust it down a bit, let the geniuses compete with each other, it will be more interesting , now there is a sense of competition among geniuses, but the heroine is a bit too much, and it is not appropriate to build the foundation and kill the Nascent Soul.) The most important thing is that the world view is very large. When I read the book, I felt that the world of immortality was prosperous, the large, medium and small realms are interconnected, and there are mysterious foreign enemies. I feel that the author can write a long novel, which is very novel. 2: Small details such as inserting questions about the realm of cultivating immortality are different from other female-channeled immortality articles. It is very novel and makes people want to watch it. There are not only different realms of sword cultivation, but also different realms of bow cultivation, ax cultivation, whip cultivation, sword cultivation, and physical cultivation. The article also covers painting cultivation, alchemy cultivation, formation cultivation, medical cultivation, poison cultivation, demon cultivation, and soul cultivation, all described in detail, with battle scenes, and the grand road where a hundred flowers bloom and a hundred schools of thought contend. It didn't give me the feeling that only those who practice swordsmanship are brilliant. 3: There are no female cultivators because men find trouble with the heroine, and trouble is definitely related to the path. The competition is for treasures, not messy love. The heroines in the supporting roles are also very charming, and they all shine on their own path to immortality. It is great. It is very comfortable to watch, not cliche, and the author is great. 4: The heroine's master is really good. He has always been a protector. It is great to accompany the heroine to experience for 4 years. When the heroine disappeared, he went to Jiuyou to find her. I hope that the heroine will find good things to give to the master during her experience. The master has always found connections to treat her illnesses, send things to find people to refine weapons for her, find people to show the heroine the bloodline of spiritual beasts, go into secret realms to find people to give treasures to help the heroine, find the missing heroine, and find the master to ask for talismans from other sects for benefits. Ling Ling has never seen the heroine repay anything. It feels reassuring to have such a master, so I hope the author can arrange it. Come on, author, write a long novel. After all, the world view is huge. I support you! ! @ I hope the author won't stop updating and keep writing more than 2,000 chapters. I believe the author can do it [sending my heart]

I have read more than a hundred chapters so far, and there are basically no surprises. In the early stage, I felt that there were too many male characters around the heroine. In the later stage, there were basically many high-profile female characters. The description of the heroine's growth and the writing style of the entire book are quite good. You can feel the tenacity of the heroine. It is really good to read. Recommend [Blow Kiss][Flow Kiss][Flow Kiss]

It looks good, it looks good, the heroine has a really good character, and I have never encountered a plot that can't accept a slap in the face. It's quite reasonable. The heroine is really good, and she is really progressing in practice step by step. (Guess: I feel that the spiritual source of the Yunluo Continent where the heroine was at the beginning was maliciously taken away. The heroine's system may be a clone of Tiandao, which is self-rescue)

I just like to watch this kind of genius upgrade flow, step by step, every detail is in place, good product, there are too few articles like Tomato, I can find all the ones I like in serialization, oh, the life of chasing updates is hard, can the author organize holiday activities, and have ten more chapters for Dragon Boat Festival and Children's Day () [Send heartfelt message] [Sneaky laugh]

Five stars to encourage the author. The writing is very good, the setting is also very good, there is no inexplicable plot, but there are occasional sentences that don't make sense, but the flaws are not concealed. The only request is that the teacher must finish this novel [I'm about to cry]

Super Invincible is very good-looking. The author's writing is very strong and the plot is also good-looking. The assessment is finally no longer a cookie-cutter secret realm and competition. The world view setting is also very grand and exciting [shy][shy][shy][shy][shy]

This book is really great to read. Shi Zhen has a good nature, is smart, has a lot of talent and hard work, and is accompanied by good teachers and friends. It is really great! ! ! The author's writing style is also very good. It is difficult to find such a good writing style. It is not a noob at all. Big cheers for the author! Support ♡(*´∀｀*) people(*´∀｀*)♡