The Record of a Long-Lived, Cautious Immortal

It's good-looking, and the protagonist is down-to-earth, not Feng Aotian, a charlatan whose golden fingers are too bright to see. The people the protagonist comes into contact with are also real and natural, not deliberately made-up characters. Being persuaded by Zhu Ganghye to quit, the protagonist has not even improved his own strength, and has not accumulated his own resources. Let a pig work hard to dazzle the medicine garden he is looking at? She was very angry. Does this medicine garden belong to her alone? I can't even control a pig.

It takes a long time to explain the reasons, ideas, pros, cons and consequences of each move, which is very tiring to read. Not sure, check again. Just look at the title of each chapter. It's full of chatter, and everything must be explained in a big way. It repeatedly talks about the hardships, cold-bloodedness, and caution in the world of immortality. Goldfinger is just a portable farm for now.

The writing is quite good, down-to-earth, and knows how to hide clumsiness, and it is not too outrageous. The plot is disconnected from reality, and it is a link to link, not a forced plot. It is very interesting to watch. I also like the heroine's character very much, she is cautious and calm, and I hope she will continue to be like this in the future. Can one person only write two book reviews? [Pause face] The character of the heroine is really my favorite among the books I have read so far. Every drop of kindness must be repaid (no need for a spring). No matter how kind or small the kindness is, although the family blessing is not particularly good, it must be repaid with hard work, but knowledge and technology are indeed Only those who are favored by their family have the opportunity to learn. Some protagonists have received favors from their families, but after becoming powerful, they still hate their families for not paying attention to them, and retaliate. I think this is true and should not be done, but after watching it more, I think it is normal. I originally thought that the heroine was like this, but after seeing the heroine's inner monologue, it was very satisfying.

The protagonist can hide his clumsiness and has a relatively calm personality. The plot is quite interesting✌︎ ॑꒳ ॑✌︎, I don't like the protagonist's shortcoming of forgetting things. In fact, this shortcoming is quite good. At the beginning, it shows that the protagonist will also have shortcomings after time travel. This is slowly changing, but I hope there will be no more shortcomings in the future, otherwise such a temper will happen sooner or later. However, it depends on how the author writes it. It is still very interesting but a bit lacking. ૮₍ ˊᯅˋ₎ა

If things don't go as planned, does persistence still make sense?

Very well written and very engaging.

The article "Treasure of Cultivation of Immortality" is really well written.

Not bad, just for dinner

The author of the male channel writes the female channel, and his writing skills are really good yyds

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking