Gathering Immortal Fortune: My System Is the Heavenly Dao

I couldn't help myself and finished reading it all night last night. Before I went to bed, I was still thinking that I would write a book review tomorrow. The writing is good, the plot is interlocking, and the foreshadowing is well arranged. In particular, it captures the essence of the group portrait. The author is willing to spend time and effort to ponder the character of a supporting character. Li Jinnian is not completely perverse and out of touch. Her innocent heart is filled with an unbearable and even fragile past. This makes her character like an onion, which needs to be peeled off layer by layer to get a glimpse of the inner color. But the mud cannot block the upward-growing lotus. In the future, it will surely bloom more dazzlingly than before. I really like the author's teacher's portrayal of this character. I also like the description of Li Jinnian's past. The countdown to 1,000 times serves as a link, running through the lives of the two characters. Maybe the two will eventually become one again, but they can't merge in this way. This is the curse of twin flowers and the blessing of twin flowers. From birth to death, from beginning to end. Reminds me of an urban legend I read many years ago. When you count down 1,000 and walk forward on a deserted street at 11:50 in the middle of the night, if you finish counting down at 12 o'clock, you will find yourself in hell when you open your eyes. On the contrary, if you hit something during the process, the entry will fail. But I don't think the countdown before hide-and-seek is the key to opening hell. The only one who opens hell is the devil. At present, there are less than 100 chapters, but the tip of the iceberg of a magnificent world has been revealed. The author has good control over the rhythm. Although it does not deviate from the "traditional" sense of immortality, the quality is very high. The protagonist's life experience is foggy, the mother's life and death are uncertain, the source of the devil's energy, the hope of saving the world, etc. Are all waiting for the protagonist to wipe away the dust of history bit by bit and explore the truth of the world. To be fair, this book is far from perfect. Although it is irrelevant, it has many flaws. I feel that many things are revealed too quickly. It could be slowed down a bit. For example, the protagonist knows that he needs to save the world in the future so quickly. This is a bit like rushing a duck to the shelves. I hope that the protagonist can find the meaning of saving the world through experience, rather than just to remove this stumbling block. You may realize it later, but suspense is the best stimulant. If you reveal it so quickly, readers will lose a lot of freshness. You can adjust the rhythm appropriately, integrate the main plot into the branch plot, and let the protagonist and readers find out the answer on their own. However, the difficulty is a bit high and the rhythm is difficult to control. If the author is not sure, the current rhythm is not bad. I wrote a lot of messy stuff. Finally, I hope the author, teacher, will work hard. Please write more! Too little, not enough to watch (Toshita-za)

Come on (๑•̀ㅁ•́ฅ) The story is novel and the writing is smooth, but still a little immature. Things develop naturally and I look forward to the day when I will be able to enjoy the best sword in the world (*ˊᵕˋ)✩︎‧ What should I do? I'm very curious about Bai Yujing. Although it's still far away, I still... Look forward to it (ღˇ◡ˇღ) Huanhuan's journey is so delicately written. Gift Quotes: Spring is on the road, flowers are on the branches, all the beauty is on the road Take your time, the fun is all in the fireworks

Come on, the author, don't give up on this book. It really appeals to my taste. I really like the heroine's character and way of life. The author writes concisely and makes people understand the details of the matter. It is very detailed and not verbose. I'm serious. I have been reading novels for so many years, and there are only a few novels that are very well written. This one is one of them. I look forward to the next story of Yi Xianghuan. It's really good to read, but there are too few and it's not enough to read. This is the charm of local fairy tales.

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It's very interesting [love], but the score is low just because it is a new book. The author's writing is very good, very logical, and not cliche. The heroine is very good ヾ(❀^ω^)ノﾞ, and I like her character very much. The two friends are also very good, and they grew up with me, and they are trustworthy partners. It is a very good article about cultivating immortals. Cheers to the author! I hope the author can update it soon [blowing kiss]

It's really rare to see orthodox immortality writing, but it's a pity that there are too few [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] It's very well written, please give it a try

It's a new book. I've read more than 20 chapters and I feel pretty good so far. I hope the author will continue to read it. After all, who doesn't like a cool heroine who is dedicated to her career? The author actually uses the same format for the titles [laughing evilly] Keep up the good work, but don't stop updating [please update]

I really don't find any flaws here so far. I like it quite a lot. Great support for the author.

૮₍♡♡₎აSo many cute sisters and cute babies! Like! Every year the baby is like a happy puppy, kissing me, kissing me, kissing me!

It's so beautiful. We like it. The author will update it quickly [Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss]