Sword Art Online: A Swordsman's Daily Battles

I gave it four stars because the latter half of the first volume felt a bit padded and rushed, and the character development around the protagonist wasn't quite there. Personally, I feel the first volume could have included more slice-of-life content to deepen the character development and give the main characters more exposure to the original work; this would have been more appealing to readers…

This is an excellent Sword Art Online fanfiction; it ranks among the top three I've read. The book doesn't follow the original formula or plot; the author has adapted a large portion of it, making it very original.

Actually, I feel that SAO is relatively simple for an MMO. Boss battles are just pure stat clashes, with no particularly difficult boss mechanics. Look at those mechanic-heavy dungeons in domestic MMOs, one person makes a mistake and the whole raid dies. If that were in SAO, just clearing a single boss would probably exhaust the entire raiding team. 😏😏

There's no sign of the female lead at all! When will the author let the male and female protagonists get together?

It's alright, author, keep writing! I especially like Leafa. I hope you'll focus on writing more stories about the male protagonist and Suguha instead of writing about other characters and getting things backwards 🤦

Very good. I don't think there's any better Sword Art Online fanfic on Tomato Bookstore right now. Keep it up, author!

It's good; I hope the author can write a longer version.

Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good

Well, I still hope the author can take some time to read the novel and fix the plot holes in the first few chapters. Reading this book after finishing the original novel is like a farmer seeing the monthly income of a company CEO – utterly shocking. P. S.: This is currently the most faithful adaptation of the original work I've seen on Tomato.

The beginning is quite good, but I suggest stopping when Kirito gets stabbed.