Sword Art Online: I Can Top Up!

Come on, author, I really like the sword series. It's a pity that not many people write about swords. I hope you can continue to write well.

It's very good. Tomato Tomato's rare fan fiction is Sword Art Online. Asuna is the happiest thing for me as an LSP.

It feels like one of the best swordsman fanfics I've ever read. Although the emotional plot is a bit rushed, the logic is okay. I hope you can continue writing and don't finish it.

Sword Art Online light novels are rare, but this one is truly the best one I have ever seen. As for the fact that there is a second time traveler, I don't think it affects the viewing experience, and it feels like the icing on the cake. This is also the only book that I don't dislike having two time-travelers - in terms of content, the second time-traveler only plays a supporting role for the protagonist and promotes the development of the plot, such as arranging Kirito, and there is no fighting; secondly, the characterization is also very realistic, but some plot insertions are relatively deep and hard. Overall, this is a very good book. I hope the author can update it more - come on, author! (Please don't express your personal opinions)

The writing is quite good, but it's a bit short, and it's a bit messy. The presentation is a bit messy, and it's written to 100. Then in the later stage, it should be a second season, but the author may have something to fill up, or forget something. Well, what should I say? It's still good, but there are a lot of magical changes. From my point of view, the story should be written on some levels according to the book or the movie, or some other levels. Well, how do I put it? The map can be a little bigger, because if the map is big, the story will be good. There are a lot of hidden tasks and the like, but the ones here don't seem to be very good. What I said may be a bit incorrect. You can also give me some opinions. I plan to write a book, but I can't write well because I am not good at speaking or writing. Well, so when it comes to writing, I like to compare and read, but it is still good to express some opinions. It is expressed from the perspective of a scholar.

Come on, come on! Sword Art Online is my favorite anime to watch. I've swiped it five or six times. So I hope you can stick with it, come on author, ˚*̥(**⁰͈꒨⁰͈)*̥Wow~p

When the swords of black and white intersect, I make a wish at that moment to protect you and each other forever.

I think it's okay, but how did you manage to seamlessly connect the sword with the Bone King?

If you still read fan fiction about swords and the original male and female protagonists, I hope you won't read it. Even if you think you don't want to read it, don't comment with low scores. It's hard to find a fan fiction about swords. Forget it, that's all.

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