Sword Art Online: My Trump Card Is Ridiculously Overpowered

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As a novice novel, it is considered qualified, but the author forgot one thing. Most people who read this book have read Sword Art Online, and have rewatched all the comics and anime that I love several times. As the young lady of a big family, Asuna's heart is not easily broken. Just like what Asuna said when forming a team: she does not want to slowly rot in the hotel, even if she loses to a monster and dies, she must maintain herself. I feel like I fell in love with the protagonist out of nowhere, and the protagonist behaves a bit like a crazy person. Asuna opened her heart to someone she only knew for a few days without any precautions. She said, "Sister, protect him for me." It's strange that Asuna doesn't keep her distance from the protagonist. As for my sister, the dark elf princess and Lisbeth, I also know that the author must write a harem novel. I am not opposed to a harem novel. I just hope that the author will slow down the pace a little, otherwise it will not become a mindless harem novel. I will withdraw it first and leave a 5-star review. It will be regarded as a reward for the author's hard work in coding. It is an objective review. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.

My own book, the first one. Family members, let me explain here that I cannot reply to many comments one by one. Please forgive me. If you have any questions, please leave them in the comments at the end of the chapter. I will reply promptly when I see them. Regarding the content of this book, I would like to emphasize again that this book is Kirito's "harem novel". If you don't like reading harem novels, you can just leave. This book is about the first season. Before writing, I consulted a lot of information. I have not changed the rigid settings in it. However, because it is a fan fiction, I will not completely copy the plot, nor will I completely deviate from the plot, so I will change some settings, and there will be some magical changes. Please understand. It's okay to write a negative review in a book review, and I won't delete the negative review. After all, this is my first time writing a sword fan fiction, and I know it's not good. However, regarding various aspects, especially the rigid settings, please read more of the original work and watch the animation of the first season before posting. Finally, I would like to express my gratitude to my family members who have been supporting and encouraging me ❤️ ❤️. Especially the readers who have been following this book for a long time and have been following it until now 😘😘, I will always remember you, and thank you very, very, very much for your support ❤️❤️!!

Write well, it's okay to read, keep up the good work

To put it bluntly, the writing is not very good. At the beginning, the protagonist was eager to find Asuna, which made me feel like the protagonist occupied the magpie's nest and then ntr Kirito. Even if the protagonist knew the plot, it was too deliberate. When I saw the sword coming in, I can only say that I was a little disappointed.

Okay, I've read a few chapters and I just can't stand it anymore. Is the author a newbie? In the Sword Aincrad chapter, elves appeared. None of the anime or fan fiction I have watched has it. Only you wrote it. Obviously they are all humans, right? You've written about the elves. After writing the Aincrad chapter and the Fairy Dance chapter, isn't it good for you to continue writing? If you have to force it on, can you just finish Aincrad and be done with it? If you don't write about Fairy Dance, Death Gun, and Alicization, the subject matter is good, but you don't have enough grasp of it. Author, you should read more sword fan fiction written by others.

Big cheers for the author! Sword fan fiction is very well written! Support you!

The article is okay, but I don't recommend harem stories for Sword Art Online fics. . . . Since the original work is about a harem, I think it would be better to have a single female protagonist or no female protagonist. It would be better to write about combat power.

Hmm, I've always wanted to read a sword fanfic and finally someone wrote it ❤️

I haven't read many chapters and I feel a little embarrassed. Sword Art Online is a game that simulates reality, and the author directly changed all the settings to almost make them the same as ordinary online games. It's not that this won't work, but if you change it so thoroughly, you might as well just add "Sword Art Online" at the beginning. It's great to have a similar world. In Sword Art Online, there are no restrictions on the number of professions and skills. As long as you know how to use them and you have the skills, you can use them. There are not so many restrictions. At most, it's just stiffness after using the skills. I can be considered serious. What kind of brains do I need to read novels.