I Want to Cultivate Immortality, But I Have No Spiritual Root. What Rotten Luck!

I read seven chapters and came back to give you a five-star review simply because I'm looking forward to reading more. Ugh, chapter 37 is enough to make me want to quit. I'm outta here.

It's pretty good. The only drawback is that the female character, who has a bit of screen time, is described as "absolutely beautiful." Too much of that "absolutely beautiful" gets boring. It would be better to describe her facial features and clothing, etc. Also, there are different levels of physical attractiveness, so those could be described as well.

You can watch this with your brain engaged; here's a clip for you. For ordinary people, minor illnesses are endured on their own, and serious illnesses are left to die. They rarely go to clinics, and the clinics they serve are mostly for the wealthy and powerful. Doctors are human, not saints.

I have an idea called External Qi Cultivation Method. Step 1: You can construct spiritual patterns and meridian pathways externally (Qi cultivation). Step 2: Activate acupoints within the body with spiritual energy, temper bones, and cleanse the marrow (foundation building).

The story's structure and appeal are only worth four stars at most, and the writing is three and a half stars, but I think it does one thing very well: it dares to take a different path. It's like delivering food... Well, let's use another analogy, finding customers. Everyone starts from scratch to find customers. Some people rely on phone calls, some on connections, some on looks...

The protagonist has strong moral principles, there are no idiotic plot points, and he's cautious when necessary and brave when needed. Most importantly, he doesn't fawn over the protagonist or abandon the story, and his refusal to eat swill is a great point. I feel it deserves at least a 9 out of 10.

The author's writing is good. However, the fact that the protagonist doesn't have a spiritual root at the beginning is a bit puzzling. It would have been better to set it as a hidden spiritual root, allowing him to still sense spiritual energy, which he could then awaken in the ancestral hall in his village – that would have been perfect.

Since you possess this special ability, why don't you study spiritual roots, or even just enhance the effects of your breathing techniques? You can cultivate without spiritual roots? You're so confident in saying that. You're really amazing. Aren't you afraid of being dissected if this gets out? How did you manage to travel 3 million li (approximately 1.5 Million kilometers) in just 3 months?

It seems the protagonist is a powerful being who has undergone a transformation, but lacks the memories of that powerful being. Otherwise, how could everything have been prepared for the protagonist?

This book is more insightful than those who live by the mundane path; it shows a clear understanding of cause and effect, a lack of entanglement in karma, and a knowledge of what one wants, which one achieves through one's own skills. It's quite an ideal life.