A Lookalike Transmigrates, Starting with One Piece

Very satisfied. Don't upgrade so fast. In fact, you can write more about reality. You can develop into super gods and achieve technological achievements.

7000 Old bookworms said: I think the author writes about the city, and the writing is very good. I like the protagonist with an urban character, and the pirate one is a little bit interesting. If the author can write about the city, he will definitely be popular. Trust me, my vision will not be wrong 🤔🤔

Very good, please update more, this is enough for anyone to read. I like how the protagonist feels so lucid in this world

It's pretty good, pretty realistic, pretty good, please update it soon 🍉

Very good. After reading so much, I finally found something I was more interested in.

Very interesting, a rare intellectual novel. A good novel, I am looking for a similar pirate novel.

Hold on steady and don't wander around. The pirate part is okay, but the city is a bit chaotic. The main line should be clearer, including cultivation, biology, technology, politics, and business. If cultivation is the main line, the supporting lines should be expressed clearly, and the equipment, drugs, and The ancient books are all about taking the initiative, not passively participating, and systematically summarizing the cultivation methods, cooperating with the officials to disseminate them, and developing the diversity, light, dark, Hua, Dan, Gang, Zhengjin-Ming, Soft Jin-Dark, Hard and Soft-Hua, Dongxuan-Dan, and the levels should be clearer The so-called concentration, concentration, and cave are not clear to what level they are aimed at.

The writing is very good, and the three views are very upright. It is just not in line with the "obvious" moral standards, but it is very true. The only bad thing is that it likes to preach and talks too much. I suspect you are in trouble 😏 Pirates is well written, Douluo is a mess of answers.

Hello author, your novel has a good idea, but the emotional aspects are average, and overall it is good. I hope you can keep writing. After all, you can't even stick to one novel, and you can't organize your writing experience. You will give up on other novels because of grades or gossip. If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, you will choose to write vaguely. If you don't know, learn to overcome it. Read more other novels of the same type to organize and learn. This novel is very good. I hope you can come back and keep writing. Come on!!! How should I put it? The original theme of this novel was double penetration. Now the reality feels like it has been abandoned by the author, and it has no own characteristics. I think the realistic plot also has characteristics. In short, now this novel just feels like it doesn't have the same style as before, and its own characteristics seem to have been cut off by the author.

Let me ask, does this book have a female protagonist or not?