Myriad Worlds: Dream-Proving the Dao, Starting with One Piece!

So cool! So cool! This is what I want to see Before cheating, the protagonist compromised, and after cheating, the protagonist still compromised, so why did you cheat? [Pouts]

Not bad, not bad. The character of the protagonist is stable, and there is no such thing as drifting away after gaining strength. Basically, he is a very free person. The characters who appear basically have brains, and the characters written are relatively lucky, but it may also be because of this, so when he writes, he will be very detailed and a bit wordy. Other than that, it is very good. Oh, there was also Nangongxian, who was said to be a true immortal descending to earth, but it was quite disgusting/

Judging from the first hundred chapters of the current update, it is worth reading➕collecting. The level is better than 95% of Tomato authors. I hope to maintain it in the future. But after Chapter 100, it felt like it was deviating from the previous main story. Gunfights and cannonballs started to fire, and there were dragon bones and ghosts. In the real world, murder and arson are commonplace for people with some wealth, just like joking. The sense of separation is very serious, as if a world view has suddenly changed. Since your book is about the transcendence of the heavens, wouldn't it be enough if you just write about the heavens and about cultivation and upgrading? The further the real world is written, the more it follows the routine of the Urban Dragon King and the God of War with a Crooked Mouth. It's better to just finish spreading the flowers

It's very exciting so far. The protagonist's personality is very full, and he knows what to do and what not to do. He is neither a pervert, a harem, nor a eunuch. The supporting characters also have normal IQs. At least there is no such brainless supporting character jumping around all the time.

It looks good, I like this kind of protagonist, who is self-aware. Decisive, able to think, and ruthless in making critical moves It felt weird when Nangongxian came out in the front, but it changed back again later.

At least so far, there are no flaws, the protagonist's IQ is online, the storyline, character settings, and arrangements are quite satisfactory. Although they are all some routines, they can still be watched after all.

A very good novel, but it's a pity that Nami ruined it, I feel Let me tell you a story, a kidnapper kidnapped a girl, and then you rescued the girl, and then there was gold there, and the girl said that the gold was hers, and then you asked him where the gold came from, and he couldn't tell 123, and then you confiscated it. Then you take him in and let him hang out with you If I hang out with you, then one day you tell some information that they can't access, and then you have to give money a gold coin, and he gives it, and then you tell them, it is quite important information, it opens their eyes, and then he steals the gold coin back, and the protagonist is pauper again. You are an officer. You made some money by doing this job. Then you wanted to go to a place to check in and have something to eat. It was like checking in and eating something. Then you threw a bag of gold coins there. The person who stole your money said that I would help you order an affordable place and take the money away. And you agreed. I would like to ask, why can a small soldier control the decision-making of the commander? Since she can control the commander's decision-making, will the soldiers under her still listen to him? Will he refute him? Will it trick him? Will we wait and wait?

I have listened to Chapter 372. I personally find it very interesting. The early stage is poorly presented to attract readers, and the reading (preaching) is quite thorough, but it is a bit too much, and it is a bit annoying to listen to. It will be better when you move to more than 300 chapters later. There are many flaws. According to the feedback on the gun battle in the forest, the most serious one is Nangong Xian. You can see the comments. It was okay at first. There is something wrong with the logic. When I write about Xiantian, there are only dozens of Danjin countries, then Waigang, Neigang, and then Nangongxian appears. I feel like reality has been suppressed? I feel that the author is really crazy. The protagonist in the novel is not a hero who has strength. He can stay in the house forever after becoming wealthy. The conflict is a bit abrupt. I listened to it in 2 days, and I personally feel it's okay (do I have a problem [thinking]?)? The author writes very smoothly, and it doesn't sound like a big problem. Especially every time the world changes, every time I get stuck and change the world when I am impatient, I feel that the author is a veteran. The development and growth of the butterfly effect, the original intention remains unchanged, If you don't have the strength, just be content with it and find someone to hold you in your lap. If you have the strength, don't mess with me. If you love me to death, what's wrong with me? As for women? I said it at the beginning, if it's there, it's not there. Later, the girl was also patched, so what else could I say? After Chapter 370, it feels like the author suddenly accelerated the pace and gave up on the original world? Was it destroyed too quickly? ? Gone instantly? ? ? [What][what] Rating 9, there are many flaws, but overall it is an excellent choice for time travel novels.

The protagonist has a clear mind and lives the way I want to live, and the plug-ins are not too outrageous. However, the description of strength is a bit strange, especially after the transformation of strength, it directly collides with the higher-level natural abilities of the pirates. This is at least something that can only be achieved by high-level martial arts transformation. Of course, this is just a personal opinion. Finally, the book overall is very good, and I highly recommend it to everyone.

As soon as Nangongxian came out, he realized that the taste had changed. Did he change the person? The biggest secret of the pig's feet was also discovered. It's really 6 flying