Xiao Po's Survival Journal: Irises in the Ashes

It's amazing. The author's description of despair is really breathtaking. I feel as shocked as when I first watched "One Hundred Years of Solitude". Although I feel that the author has a very deep understanding of despair, neither Mengqi nor Xiaopo are limited to despair, they are even more exciting. It is the beauty revealed in the darkness. Even if every word written by the author expresses despair, when that beauty is written gently, it is enough to make my heart surge~ Come on, author, continue to persevere in both life and creation~

The writing style lacks some sense of power. My most intuitive reading experience is that it is difficult to imagine the picture. I can only feel the hardship of Xiao Po like the description of despair, and I can't imagine what I would do in this situation. There are also soldiers like A123. Their portrayal is too flat. In my opinion, they are obviously victims and perpetrators whose humanity has been distorted by war. What have they experienced? How to change? And why does it become like this? Why wasn't the plot of the soldier that Xiao Po killed mixed with some of Xiao Po's inner doubts, such as why other people's husbands treated themselves like this as a child? During the period when Xiao Po was a prisoner, it was obvious that there were too many overviews and the pace was too fast. As a test-tube baby without a family, Xiao Po's cognition should be very different from ordinary people. I can't imagine this aspect, but the sadness has already surged up. I didn't think much about it when I was reading it, but looking back now, I can actually discover many, many issues and emotions. I wrote so much because I was also writing the beginning of my own novel. It happened that the plot was similar, so I included some of my own thoughts. What I said is simple is actually extremely difficult to write. As those of us who have not experienced war, it may be difficult to describe the complexity of war. Now that Xi has just appeared on the scene, we can see that the author is advancing in two ways, and it also makes us feel that the tattered world is still mended by someone. We are very much looking forward to what will happen if the two lines come together in the future, and pass by Xi? Never met? Or is it that the figures of Xi and Xi overlap in the future, doing the same thing? I would like to give some suggestions to the author. Describe more of the environment, and even focus on describing items such as firearms to give full play to the author's strengths. For example, what does Uncle Mu's sewers look like, and what their appearance looks like (don't forget to put some little amber cats to relax). Putting the characters in the scene will give a better look. Finally, world peace!

Fire Tongs Liu Ming came from the previous book Come on, the author, the beginning is very interesting∽ This style of work reminds me of "Girl's Last Journey" I've seen all Xiao Po's efforts to survive. I believe this book will definitely become popular!!!

To be honest, the first time I saw this novel, it reminded me of "The Journey of the Last Girl", but the two are different. One is more casual in daily life, while this book is, as the author's title says, "a hard-core, realistic post-apocalyptic survival". There is death, growth, and... Crisis in it. I don't know how to express it, but I feel that the author's writing style gives me a sense of immediacy... Like a light novel? Very novel and very picturesque! Finally, please forgive my poor comments, I am not good at expressing...

Although I think this kind of book is very interesting, it would be difficult for a place like Tomato to become popular [crying] In fact, I think not many people like to watch this kind of plot now, even if the doomsday novel is about the summoning system or something😮‍💨

The writing is good, and the details of the battlefield are indeed fleshed out. Consider moving up to a narrative of large-scale war, from war preparation, mobilization, logistics, large-scale corps-level engagements, multiple rounds of negotiations to post-war liquidation. In addition, there is too much lyricism in the act of personal understanding. War does not require so much lyricism, just a few condensed sentences at critical moments.

The author still has a certain way of thinking about war. The current plot should make reference to the situation in Palestine and Israel, but because it is a plot set in 21xx, there are still some interesting settings, such as family disintegration and so on. Then, the government of the country where the protagonist lives is relatively unreliable. Soldiers still use Cold War-era rifles, but the academy will implant relatively high-tech chips into students, and there are also settings such as forced assignment of occupations for artificial humans. Suspected to be from Warhammer 40k Empire. (Just kidding, let me go, why are there cockroaches in the house?) The last essay took more than ten minutes to write.

Attracted by the title and introduction. Currently in my thirties, the novel is well written overall. The setting and heroine are also a genre that I like very much. I have added a star to my bookshelf. I hope this book will be read by more people in the future. Five stars support the author to continue to write more. Come on

Human beings have given up on the concept of family and after in vitro fertilization, newborns have no parental care and no concept of love. Even life is fixed. Years of continuous war. Such a society is distorted. I hope that in the following plot, Po can find his own happiness.

The writing is very in-depth. As a non-military fan, I also feel the fragility and humanity of human beings. The heroine, emmm, can only be said to be very lucky, but the novel needs to be modified, otherwise what is the point of reading? [Laughing evilly] The question is, why doesn't anyone see [what]