I Refuse to Become a Witch's Breeding Ground

Contains elements: be he lily, turning into a hundred (almost pure hundred), small dark room, wife chasing crematorium, amnesia (two chapters), Shura field (not), white hair, vest, magic Although he was severely adjusted by Shen He, he is still very interesting. The plot flows naturally and smoothly, with clear cause and effect. It ends at the right number of words, and there are no repetitive plots. Good looking However, the first four chapters are a bit foreshadowing and concealing for readers. You have to read the first five chapters in one go, otherwise you may be a little discouraged. Good looking There is indeed a dark room good looking

Nice to watch, love to read, quick to update! I want to see the witch who plays with emotions being severely punished by Lovia after her identity is exposed. It would be better if she could turn against the enemy and lock the witch into a small dark room! (Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it) After the chase, well... How should I put it, it was not as good as I expected, and many places were not handled well. For example, there is no explanation as to why the witch is a witch and why the witch is shouted at and beaten by everyone. Another example is that Cestia's past was not explained well, her experience after becoming a witch and meeting Lovia was not told, and the group of people and other countries who were chasing the witch did not appear at all. As a result, the world described is very small and the sense of crisis is too low. Although the small dark room fits the character, it still seems awkward. Chasing the Wife at the Crematorium is also like chasing the wife for the sake of chasing the wife. Although there is foreshadowing for the turning point of the female setting, there is too little foreshadowing, the twist changes too quickly, and the changes are too big, which leads to some collapse of the character. The final ending was also too hasty and sloppy. These problems were mostly caused by the unprepared world view and outline. However, after all, the daily writing in the early stage was good, and there was not much poison in the whole. It was still worth watching. I hope the author can write better and better in the future, come on (.ω.)ノ♡

The ending is flowery, although the ending is a bit abrupt. It left me feeling unfinished, but indeed at the moment when the witch caused so much damage to the protagonist, this ending was the most suitable ending for the two of them. Although it feels a bit regretful that it ended so suddenly, and a lot of foreshadowing was simply recycled in the end, such as the heroine's witch seed, I think the author's writing style and description of the character's emotions made me feel comfortable watching it, and the relationship between the protagonist and the little witch before the truth was revealed was very sweet and healing. However, I felt that the final reveal of the truth was not handled well, resulting in a hasty ending. I love reading this kind of subject and type. I think this book is undoubtedly a good book regardless of the hasty ending. I hope the author can inherit the advantages of this work and make the next one even better. Come on!

It's quite good to watch, but I felt a little uncomfortable watching it. I wish I could go straight to the crematorium of my wife, otherwise I would feel uncomfortable watching it. I actually don't like knives, but the author, if you give me a lot of knives, I still want to look at knives even if I can't hold myself any longer. (Diejia: only represents my personal opinion)

I have a question. Since the protagonist is not popular as a witch, why did he agree to take the little girl on the trip? If the identity of the protagonist, the witch, is revealed, won't the people around her be implicated? Shouldn't choosing to travel with a little girl put the little girl at risk?

This book was written from Little Evil to the end and is now finished. How can I put it this way, if I hadn't known that it was a hundred at the beginning, I really wouldn't have thought I would be able to write it, because the beginning is really good. But it exploded very quickly, which resulted in insufficient explosive points in the later period. The subsequent content was basically written around one point. Moreover, the perception has obviously dropped a lot since the middle period [Thinking]. In the later period, the work was a bit rushed and the content was forced to be supplemented, and the ending was also a bit rushed. But overall I feel pretty good, and doesn't Xiao Evil plan to write an extra chapter or something? The story setting is really good, many related settings are not completed, and the follow-up of some characters can also be completed [crying]

I really liked this book from the bottom of my heart. [Crying] There is a turning point in the back part (The Knife). For someone like me who wanted to watch something sweet (and bad), I had a heart attack when I saw it coming to an end. (I was attracted by the plot, but I didn't dare to read it.) If the ending of The Knife is complete, I think In my mind, this book will be on the level of "White Moonlight", but although such a sloppy and compact ending is quite good, it still feels a bit strange, and what is the ending of the "three people" [crying] [crying] There is really no explanation of the aftermath, and also. . . I'll take the sinking box🥢...

As we all know, the sweeter the previous plot, the sharper the subsequent plot. I look forward to seeing the wife-chasing crematorium＼(`Δ')／ I finally finished reading it. I have been reading it since the last book. It is as good as ever. But why did Chasing Wife in the Crematorium end with just a few scenes? The ending is too sloppy. Hurry up and give me a 100-chapter sequel (*^▽^*)

The author's writing style and delicate description of emotions are very good, but in the part I'm reading so far, I feel like the witch is bullying the protagonist in the name of love. It feels like it's more of a possession than a love. Let's see how it develops in the future (personal opinion, and the author has read all the last book)

It's good. I've read another book by the author before, and it's all good. Now I save more and read it again. I always have a withdrawal reaction after reading it in one go. This book is really great. I look forward to the author's updates every day [laughs]