The Artillery Girl Was Once a Fine Young Man

The theme is novel! I feel like the writing is pretty good! It's said to be a change of marriage, but why does it sound like a change of marriage? Leave a comment, I'll wait and see...

It's a pretty good fusion of magical girls and reality. The last time I read it, it was a fusion of magical girls and weapons a few years ago. This is a good fusion of reality and the author's writing style can also be very delicate. If it is written at this momentum, it will be at least 9.3, Which is very good on Tomato.

It's a very good novel, at least it's to my liking. First of all, the writing of the novel is very good, and it feels like reading paid novels on other platforms. Secondly, the character descriptions are exceptionally good, and the personalities and stories of each character are quite detailed. The content of the story is also very good, there is not so much intrigue, it is like an ideal utopia. Of course, the world in the book still has human enemies. The only thing that worries me is the author. The author is the only uncertain factor in the novel, especially if there are more books. Counting that this book is at least three or four, I am really afraid that one day the author will get tired and stop this book. I hope that the author will do what he can and I will not push the author to add more chapters. My only hope is to see this book slowly come to an end. I don't even want this book to end. I hope to keep reading.

Yes, it feels like a military compound. Is the author a descendant of a military compound or has he spent time in a military compound? 😏👍

Personally, I think it is a good book with a very novel perspective. The focus of the novel is the exploration of the relationship between magical girls and society. When individuals with powerful power suddenly appear in human society, how will the government and society welcome this change. And what is the real magical girl battlefield like after abandoning the cute filter. Magical girls can also die from pain. The protagonist is basically invincible, and his style is similar to the earliest version of One Punch Man. The protagonist is like a tour guide, taking you through the world from an observer's perspective. At the same time, you can also experience the purest violence. The current low rating is because some people can't accept the ambiguous writing of all parties in the early stage, because it feels like changing a marriage + changing a hundred. However, the author initially left some room because he was not sure, and later made timely adjustments. At present, the love line is simply changed and it should be a single female protagonist. So it is worth reading, and this part is only about 48 chapters at most. Overall, it should be a military-oriented story, and the emotional line is just a foil to dilute the smell of blood. It can be seen from the back that the author used too much force on the emotional line at the beginning, but has gradually adjusted it later. The narrative is more daily, but it is not purely daily, but shows the events caused by the collision between magical girls and society, and solves them. Very interesting and original. In terms of rating, I personally think it would be an 8.5. People who like it like it very much, but people who don't like it may feel that they will quit around chapter 40.

It's really good-looking, at least 9.0+. As for the all-male interpretation of demining in book reviews, I have read 106 of the latest chapters, which do not involve the emotional lines of any male characters at all. At the same time, because the book is more realistic and serious in tone, it is naturally impossible to have a world view where only women in the world are there. There will definitely be male friends, colleagues, and bosses, etc., But if it is said that as long as a male appears in the work, it will be shocking. It feels a bit like a cyber witch hunt and a literary prison. On the contrary, the concentration of emotional lines in the following content rises sharply. I guess it is because of the feedback in the comment area. In short, under the current extreme situation of the Internet, if you plan to avoid controversial content in subsequent writing, it is best to modify the controversial part in the introduction to avoid misunderstandings, and at the same time put the label of becoming a hundred and stick to the unwavering line of becoming a hundred. The current problem I feel is that the description in the later stages is a bit too complicated and the plot advances slowly. Although the delicate emotional description is also a highlight, it is a bit too much. Pay attention to the balance of rhythm.

Boss, I feel like you have invested in the wrong platform. A platform for novice readers like Tomato cannot withstand the bombardment of your serious plot, meow [Chigua] I feel like the writing style will be more suitable if I go to Mao Next Door. The writing style has a Jiangnan flavor, which is quite good

It's a great book, both daily life and drama are well written. It feels like the story is written with care. The low popularity may be because the positioning is different from the mainstream market of the platform. I feel that the author has a lot of his own thoughts and feelings expressed through Lin Xia's mouth, and the character creation is also very distinct. Lin Xia is really a male god-like image. I guess the author will write about Miss Lin Xia for a lifetime. If there is no Miss Lin Xia, Wataxi...!

Okay, I hope it doesn't crash later.

Ah? Why do some people think it's marriage? I didn't feel anything after reading Chapter 42. It's quite simple. The relationship is also like friendship. It's only around Chapter 40 that romance begins to take shape in the protagonist.