Academic Underdog from the Start: China's Card Maker Takes Another World by Storm

The plot is very good-looking. I can't say it is novel, I can only say it is good-looking. (If you delve into some plot details, it's a bit... Hard to tell.) It feels like a very ordinary passionate novel. But the writing style is a bit elementary, I hope it can be improved. I would like to make some small suggestions (please don't read it if it hits the target): get more weapons. I don't quite accept the character cards in the article. It feels a bit too young. After all, promote China. As for mythological characters, it is best to use characters from mythology to describe them. Nezha, the devil boy, is different from the description in the myth, so this book uses Nezha from the devil boy, which gives people the impression that he is very young (but I can't tell) (maybe it's because the special effects given are too sufficient, I feel that a very powerful Nezha will appear. But I didn't expect it to be the devil boy Nezha (in the form of a child), this feeling of gap) I would like to ask the author if this book can be completed in the future? There is no guarantee that it will not be unfinished, and I am afraid of discontinuing the update [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking] Warm reminder: This article is about two heroines, Lily. It does not mean that the two heroines each have their own emotional lines.

It's so cool. I don't know why the card masters in the female videos are all men. It's inexplicable! Seeing that it is really good so far, I suggest that the plot should be the main focus and the emotions should be supplemented. I hope it will be a long article, ε=(´ο｀*))) Unfortunately, it takes too long to develop the article, and I discovered it too early [awkward laugh]

It's super cool. The whole thing is flowing smoothly. From the early stage, it's a step-by-step plot. [Thinking] The heroine is usually very reliable, but she is relatively dull in front of Qin [laughing]. The deputy CP is also very cute [shy]. Every couple is very protective of their wives and jealous [making faces]. It feels very good-looking [laughing] and there are many famous scenes. Every moment, they slap people in the face and shock passers-by [cool]. It's so cool. And when I see the team members trusting the heroine very much, I feel warm in my heart. There is also a part that is almost like "How can the people of China be the same person"? I feel like I am being protected by my own family. No one can hurt the sense of déjà vu [heartfelt] The author must update frequently and not stop updating [almost crying] otherwise it will be really sad [crying]

Let me first state that I am a not picky reader. Even if there are many bad things, I will insist on reading a few more chapters and only divide them into good and average ones. My evaluation of this book is average. First of all, the author's writing is not bad, and the narrative is complete and picturesque. However, I can't stand it. From the few pictures so far, the story line is blunt and the emotional line is the same. Of course, it may be that I have read less. The complete version should be better, if I can stick to the premise. In terms of overall level, after looking at the author's homepage, the level of the first book is already very good. I will evaluate it after I finish reading this book. Finally, I wish the author a better next book. I believe you will make great progress.

It's beautiful, especially the card version, and it has two heroines. Don't give up, author. It's very beautiful. Come on, I'll tell you my thoughts after it's finished. It looks very good now. I like it very much. Come on, author [blowing kiss]

I'm looking forward to it. It's rare for two heroines to post a post. I hope I won't be like other people who stop updating when they get to a wonderful point [please update]

The author's writing style is very good and novel, and he also has a lot of knowledge. The characters he writes are vivid. The only drawback is that the update is too slow. I have to wait a few weeks to update this little bit. The author, please update it quickly [cry][cry][cry]

It's very beautiful. I've always wanted to read this type of two-girl novel, but no one writes that my writing skills are not good and I can't produce my own food. But after reading the author's book, I stayed up late to read it. I really liked it. The author, please don't be influenced, please do more updates [like][like][please update]

Not bad. It's quite good. It's a novel with two female protagonists and a lot of outstanding female supporting characters.

Overall, it's not too bad, it's pretty good. I also understand the author's words. Zhao Kai is indeed a lily that everyone should be able to read [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face]. This is a unique and good Lily