I Became a Beautiful Girl, and the Villainous Witch Forced Me to Love Her

A very good article, worth 9 or more points, because few people commented and were buried. After reading it, I discovered that the other book I was following was written by the same author. Compared to the new book, this one is a bit more youthful (I didn't dare to write about small dark rooms, wife-chasing crematoriums, darkening, yandere, etc.), But it is also a good book with an interesting plot, online character intelligence, and no poisonous points. In terms of the emotional line, Kyoko is actually quite good. After reading the whole story, I feel that the protagonist has always had feelings for Kyoko as a senior, a friend, or a family member. Kyoko has never shown any feelings toward love towards the protagonist. (Ruan Ju and Rannian are the best couple) In terms of character design, Ruan Ju's setting is simply amazing. The author's imagination is quite big. The settings of other characters also have their own characteristics. Reading the full text, you can almost recall the personality of each character. The twists and turns in the plot are very natural. There are a lot of foreshadowings laid in the past, especially in the later stages. You can probably guess what the ending will be. It's a pity that there is no chapter describing the sweet daily life of the two heroines after solving the boss (the author said that the extra chapter can only be released at level 5, so we can only wait) All in all, it is a good book and highly recommended to readers who like 1v1 Lily articles.

The plot design is great, and the writing has improved a lot since the beginning. I recommend newcomers to keep reading, the plot is still great. The plot needs to be plotted, the writing needs to be plotted

It's a great plot, compact and bright. It's the most comfortable book I've ever read in the category of magical girls. It's a pity that there are no extras. Alas, I'm looking forward to Kyoko's plot. The second half of the book was somewhat rushed, the same feeling I had when chasing snow. But it really gave me a very good reading experience, and I thank the author for never stopping updating.

The author's plot design is good, but it is a little inferior in the later stages. Maybe he is anxious. The more he writes later, the more he realizes that some things are beyond his control. I saw this novel on the home page at that time, and read the introduction before reading it. Later I found out that it was good, so I kept pursuing it slowly and leisurely, and now it is finished, but I still have a lot of regrets. Give me five stars to encourage the author

Are you just a picture and not as real as those stars, as real as this dust? They all pulsate with the pulse of all things, but you are completely fixed in your still painted image. You have walked with me before, your breath warm and your limbs singing the song of life. My world finds its words in your voice and touches my heart with the light of your face. You suddenly stopped and stood beside the eternal shade, leaving me to move forward alone. Life is like a child, it laughs, chattering about death as it runs: it beckons me to go forward, and I follow the invisible footsteps; but you stand there, stopped beyond the dust and stars, you are just a picture. No, that's not possible. If the flow of life stops with you, then it will also stop the rolling river, and it will also stop the footsteps of the dawn with its colorful footsteps. If the gleam of your hair is extinguished in the hopeless darkness, the shades of summer will die with her dreams. I forgot about you, is this true? We walked in a hurry without looking back. Forgot about the flowers blooming on the roadside fence. In a state of forgetting everything, their fragrance enters our breath unconsciously and fills it with the music. You have left my world to sit at the root of my life, so this is forgetting - the memory is lost in its own depths. You are no longer before my songs, but you are one with them now. You came to me through the first rays of morning light. When the last golden light of the setting sun disappeared, I lost sight of you. Even after this, I am still seeking you in the darkness. No, you are more than just a picture. --Tagore

How shameless! Make full use of the characteristics of death return to add sudden changes to the article, and the plot has ups and downs. What impressed me the most were the two scenes where Linnai shot Ruan Jue and everyone on the paper plane fell asleep one after another. The scene of killing Xingzi after cognitive confusion was not sufficiently exaggerated, and he regained hope too quickly ( Recently, I feel that I am in control of this part. There is no depression in the mid-term. Maybe I want to keep it simple. I hope I can use more knives and be more thorough when writing. I don't want to stop at the point, but I'll try to make the ending as good as possible.

I'm [slightly sadistic] [face covering], the plot is interesting, but the emotions are not fully mobilized and not deep enough. The writing style is improving along the way, the author will give you a lot of support [sending heartfelt wishes]

I may never forget this book in my life. Sure enough, I still don't like finished books. I always feel empty after reading them. I'm sorry to say that I spent some time reading the first volume because my mentality at that time was that I would die if I didn't read it in one go. When I think about it, I didn't want to read it until it was finished. It was not until recently that I picked it up and read it. It was very satisfying but also very sad. I am very lucky that I could find this book before and now I can finish it. When I look forward to making more extra chapters, the author makes up for the missing daily plot. In the previous daily life, I still have to worry about sudden explosions.

The whole novel reveals a depressing feeling (maybe I am not suitable for reading this kind of doomsday theme), which is despairing but with a glimmer of hope. I had already prepared for the ending of BE, but the author did not disappoint me [shy][shy]

It is a high-quality, fine-grained, and beautiful work. Although the new writer has some flaws in rhythm and contrast, he is very attentive and creates a more vivid picture. There's nothing poisonous about it, you can feel it with your heart