A Billion Maniacs: The Doomsday Road to Survival

The writing is okay. I don't have the feeling that I can't even understand the writing after reading two chapters. The plot is indeed compact, but it's too compact and I feel it's a bit too much. You can follow it. It's more than enough. I suggest changing the title of the book.

After reading more than 30 chapters, I feel that except for the sister of the person in the protagonist group, the rest is okay. It creates conflicts and conflicts. The intention is good, but it is recommended not to use the old routine of the Holy Mother. First, most people will be upset when watching it, and many will deliberately give low scores. The subsequent development can also be roughly guessed. Comparing it with Mo Qianfan, I feel that it can appropriately reduce the impact on the environment and infected people. Description, add some such as character monologues, dialogues and psychological activities, because after reading the first 30 chapters, I only felt that the environment was very three-dimensional, but the characters were relatively rigid (it may also be that I haven't seen the back yet). Of course, Lao Mo's is a video, which naturally has an advantage over text, but there are some examples, such as the Burning Chapter: The Blind Girl, there is no video in the whole process, only text, but the atmosphere is very good. Of course, the above is just a suggestion, not an order. I personally feel that this modification will give other readers a better reading experience. I originally wanted to give it 4 stars, but the score dropped a bit ridiculously. Although it is not outstanding now, it is not just 6:00, so I decided to give it a five-star support. The author's writing is still very good, keep up the good work.

The writing is very good, and it fully embodies the sense of despair in the apocalypse. The protagonist repeatedly struggles between being trapped and escaping. During this period, some people help others and some add insult to injury. In short, it is a good apocalyptic novel [heartfelt]

The writing at the beginning is good and immersive, but later on I feel that the protagonist group is too reckless. Is this the world of Blood Cross? ! I hope the author can come back to the point later, come on. [Exploration] It's finally finished, overall it's pretty good. [Sending Hearts]

The apocalyptic atmosphere is well portrayed and the emotion of despair is well rendered, but the logic of some plots is a bit stiff and the early pace is a bit fast. Overall, the flaws are not hidden, and it is still a masterpiece of apocalyptic survival worth reading. (By the way, everyone in the protagonist group can carry the Hungry Emperor😂)

It was pretty good after reading it. Although it was a little difficult to read in the middle, I still persisted in reading it in the end. As a new author, it deserves encouragement. The plot is a bit stuck and jerky. But the lucky thing is that I don't have CP, and living is just a luxury, and I still deal with the useless ones. Bai is very realistic and I quite like him. It's a pity for my brother and father. They tried their best to protect the people they cherished most. There are also many things that are not human, and the same kind of back stabs are even more disgusting. I hope the author's work will be more mature next time I see it

The writing is very contagious, and the content is full of ups and downs. It can be seen that the author has borrowed content from many other works, which ensures the interest of this novel to a certain extent. However, the various difficulties encountered by the protagonist group seem a bit too deliberate. Perhaps I did not see much content about the growth of the protagonists in it. Instead, I saw a man who had been hungry for several days running wildly, saw that the members of the protagonist group seemed to have no thoughts of their own, and saw the protagonist group giving up on themselves in the apocalypse. These are mainly because the difficulties encountered by the protagonists were too many and too deliberate, and the original meaning of the plot was lost, which made people feel that this novel was not very real.

The content development story is quite compact, and the final open ending is quite good, but I always feel that the protagonists seem to be troubled by not having resources such as food, water and medicine on the way to the destination. Not to say that there is no description, it feels really light. With a pen, I basically have to pass or pass by somewhere and then cause a fight between the two sides. If it is too difficult to survive and cannot be fought, someone will sacrifice (it is not that sacrifice cannot be made, but sacrifice can only happen in this situation). Overall, the writing is OK.

[Laughs] Damn, it brings back the feeling I had when I watched Doomsday Cockroach ten years ago. It's so exciting, my heart can't bear it. Hahaha, I haven't seen such high-quality doomsday writing in a long time.

Looks great, keep updating! It will definitely become popular, but it may be a bit late. There are too few chapters and it is estimated that it will take more than 200 chapters to become popular. It is very interesting and the book you wrote is the most interesting among the zombie books. There are no fake millions of supplies and no rebirth system. The characters are very unique! Zombies are also very unique! So pretty! ! !