Fox Spirit Matchmaker: After Becoming the Strongest in the Circle, Yaya Begs Me to Renew Their Bond

I think it's quite acceptable, but as others have said, Wang Quanzui is too intimate, and what is the protagonist's description at the beginning? The protagonist's parents were killed by monsters, and the protagonist looked like he was about to die. He was pulled out by our Dongfang Huaizhu. That's all. He should have matured early. Boys who have been inspired by major blows will become men. Then the article also writes about killing monsters since childhood. The character developed in this way. Seeing good monsters, um, established a correct view of right and wrong, and then began to sweetly call Shangjie. Sister, no, you know, people have good and evil, demons also exist, good and bad, but one second it's okay, you treat people as monsters, and the next second you directly call them sister, it's a little bit like that. You want to say Tushan Rongrong, Tushan Yaya is good, no problem, you recognize Cui Yuling, he saved the protagonist, I also recognize it, but in the chapter of Jin Chenxi, do you know that sister Cui Yuling? I don't know you. When you first met someone to confirm whether she is a monster, you just call her sister. This is the protagonist. No problem, but it looks awkward. Oh, because of my own mistake, Yaya was misunderstood, and then the protagonist burst into tears. No, is this the Taoist heart built up by killing monsters since childhood? This kind of boy who has experienced major changes will become a man, and his mentality will grow up in an instant, just like the precocious ones in ancient times. What did I see in the article? You, the protagonist, are a bit weak and have the feeling of a young shota. Is this the mentality of a boy who is expected to grow up after his parents were killed as demon slayers?

In the previous life, I was the top killer, but I was surrounded by 13 talented teenagers in the top-secret spaceflight. I killed 13 people with extreme operation, but when I evacuated, I was brutally pedicured by rats. They stole my supreme red armor and took away my supreme m14. Now that I am reborn and awakened to the supreme Uluru bloodline, I will definitely regain everything I lost. I will block the Uluru bridge first and second.

Anchor anchor, this version of Dongfang Haoyue is still too difficult to operate. Is there anything simpler and stronger?

This fanfic is great and I hope the author will continue it.

I can only say that it's okay. I also hope that you will write a new book specifically about Wang Quan Zui, because the character you created for Wang Quan Zui is very good and very consistent. If you can write a book, I will definitely follow it. What a pity. The characters created by Wang Quanzui were so good in the past, but the character of the protagonist was not very good in the later stage. He did not look like an Eastern God of Death at all. He was written like a young man. The transition from the front to the back is not too clear. Keep working hard.

Many years later Huaizhu: Brother, you don't understand, Ba Ye and I are true love [shy] The bright moon is silent and combined with reality, it is just red and warm😡

Although I don't really like Shura Field, I support newcomers' writing

Come on, keep an eye on you

There is no doubt that as long as the children don't mess around later, Yang Persimmon will have another excellent fox demon fanfic.

It looks good, cheers, author