[Invincible protagonist + one heroine (Tu Shan Yaya) + no breaking up established couples + an unconventional way to mend lingering regrets + changes to certain original settings to make the story more plausible]
Bai Ye, an overworked wage slave, runs a red light to avoid being late for work. While rushing along, he has an accident and is taken by an unknown higher-dimensional life form called “Boss” to the world of Fox Spirit Matchmaker, at the start of the story, when Bai Yuechu's era begins. He also gains the auxiliary golden finger, the Reincarnation Simulator.
And so Bai Ye begins a new life in the world of Fox Spirit Matchmaker.
The Reincarnation Simulator is only an auxiliary golden finger. After running a simulation, all Bai Ye can gain is one of the talents he chose, much like getting to try a talent in advance. He can then decide whether to select it based on how it performed in the simulation. Choosing a talent cannot directly make the Bai Ye in the present world stronger. And so...
First life: Bai Ye gains the talent trait [The Best Under Heaven]. Its side effect is that Bai Ye cannot live past the age of thirty, but before turning thirty, he is certain to become the best under heaven.
If you knew that the life you were living in this lifetime was fake.
If you knew your life lay in the future.
If you knew you would become incredibly powerful in this lifetime.
Then, as someone destined to become the best under heaven, would you live freely and recklessly, staking your life in this lifetime to carve out a path to survival for your future self, who would have no power at all and struggle just to survive in a world surrounded by humans and demons?
I would.
@Grasp a moment of inspiration. The writing is very good, I personally like it better. It would be nice if you could pay attention to the punctuation marks. Some occasional minor problems are acceptable, but Here is a section of Chapter 36 It seems that there is no difference between you Tushan 1 and Aolai Kingdom 1, they are both 1, so insincere, that is, you say 1 that you want to help us 1, retrieve our memories, let us gain 1, the power to resist the Aolai Kingdom, but in reality 1, I don't know what you think. Punctuation marks plus numbers mean that there is no need to add punctuation marks here. This way, listening to the book will be smoother.
The simulation is well written and the timeline is displayed well, but there are no quotation marks, which makes the plot feel too alienated. There is no so-called golden elixir system, but a re-innovation based on the fox demon system, demonstrated through various arguments. The protagonist is the best in the world in his first life, his emotional line is in his second life, and his reality line reaches the Tushan Grand Theater. He does not lick Aolaiguo and directly removes his waistcoat. He does not force Bai Wang and Bai Wang to reminisce about their relationship, but looks at the memory from a third perspective to find the truth. Except for the short word count, this is a good book. Before I didn't have the strength, I was submissive. Now that I have the strength, I won't eat beef. I finally added the quotation marks. It's really fun to read, but the number of words is short and the protagonist hasn't woken up. It's not quite cool yet. I hope the protagonist doesn't lose the B-square. The third follow-up comment: Open high and go low, pull a big one
It's very nice, but there's a bit too much nonsense at the front.
I particularly like it. Finally, someone is suppressing Na Mo (only referring to the fox demon). The fox demons I watched before were either plotted by Na Mo or cooperated with Na Mo. Finally, someone wrote about Na Mo.
The author wants to write an ending that the author likes and increase the plausibility of the story, but due to insufficient writing, it may be a bit nondescript🤔. (So, if there are any points that need to be paid attention to during the story, I hope that the masters will give you more guidance and we can make progress together) In addition, due to insufficient writing, the book may be updated slowly, but it will definitely not be unfinished or discontinued. [Working on draft] In addition, for a new author who is writing a novel for the first time, is there a possibility that the author is very "ignorant". The so-called slanderous remarks must first be "knowledgeable" before being slanderous. Please don't be too self-righteous, because the author does not even understand what you are talking about. In the end, progress is always slow. The author can only take it step by step, first improving the writing style, and then after the story is finished, go back and correct the previous mistakes of insufficient writing.
How should I put it? This book is a bit similar to a narration book. The only drawback is that the writing at the beginning may not be very good, but the writing at the end is better.
It was so beautiful, but it disappeared at the most critical moment, snap, it was almost gone 😢
Not bad, just can I get the pronouns and punctuation right? That's it 😄
I really like this novel
The plot at the end is still very interesting, but there is too much analysis at the beginning. You can skip it without affecting the overall look and feel.