Isn't This Immortal Cultivation? Why Am I Bound to a Naruto System?

Personally, I feel that anyone who has the courage to write a book is worthy of praise. The author is a student, and the writing looks good so far. The characters are more vivid, the Naruto characters are more realistic, and Goldfinger is not too bad. I have the desire to read it. Come on, I hope the author can stick to it and give the story an ending.

The author doesn't want to write that the sect cannot protect his sister's body, and then the protagonist directly deceives the world and takes away the body and then defectes to attract hatred, right?

A very awesome novel, with a lot of "poison" at the beginning. After reading six chapters, I was almost poisoned. The opening was abandoned and I wrote 4 cards. What's the concept? The system has a human nature. It starts with reporting wealth, and then it becomes a mess. Well, I also use a system to describe the future plot. I can't even explain how to say it, because I frown when I think about it, and it's difficult to describe it. Features: Lots of descriptions, even the dogs on the roadside have to be described, lots of dialogues, I could chat all day long. The story is novel, the plot is special, and the blocking points are special. Of course, these are all my personal thoughts and can be understood as exaggerated descriptions. A new author wants to write a good story, but he doesn't know how to write it. It gives the impression that he can write whatever he wants, so the beginning is a lot of poison. (Personal Thoughts) There are ways to do this. Start directly from Chapter 10, or read the first 10 chapters directly and then sort out your brain. I read it again if I find it interesting. I haven't read a book that starts with a rock for a while, so I find it particularly interesting and the book is also very unique. This is just based on my opinion that I have only read 10 chapters, which shows how shocking this book is to me.

It's pretty cool. Did the author forget about the Kusanagi sword? It's been a long time since I've seen it used. Then when did you rebel against your relatives? I feel like it should be well written Here are a few suggestions 1. It is recommended that you use your free time to write an outline of important plots. 2. Can you take a look or start a poll to see if you want to write a heroine for the protagonist who can betray her relatives and leave? 3. Will the protagonist return to his original family or will he be included in the story of betrayal and separation? 4. After the male protagonist leaves, maybe we can write a relationship network where the younger sister is in the light and the older brother is in the dark? Is the character of my sister when she grows up a bit colder? (Character can be voted on) But this person who loves sweets can write about dessert [Thinking] 5.🦌Mingxuan, can you please stop writing yellow hair for sister Qingli [crying] It's okay to be dependent on the male protagonist all the time [crying] [crying] If you want to write it, can you put it in the back and open a separate chapter about the relationship between the sister and start a series with the brother [thinking] (this suggestion is purely selfish [shy]) Follow-up review coming The author is a writer who benefits people [shy] and has suggestions that everyone should kick [like] By then we will be the second generation of this book [Like] Good book🉑 Come on, author, readers, I have to go to work and start reading books first [Cool]

As a novice author, this is already very good, but the child of destiny was seconds away from birth, and the law of heaven was indifferent. He was resurrected and suffered a catastrophe. It really shocked me. Although it has a lot of poison, it is worth watching.

"Lonely George is dead." Chu Zihang, who was reading a magazine, put down the magazine, "At this time." "Lonely George?" Caesar didn't understand. "The last Pinta Island tortoise in the world, his name is George. Yuan Zhisheng once said that he is like that tortoise." Chu Zihang handed the magazine to Caesar. "It was found dead in that reserve not long ago. It seemed to want to escape from the reserve, but it died before it could reach the boundary of the reserve. He crawled very slowly. When he died, people found that his head was pointing towards Santa Cruz Island, where he was captured. Some people speculate that there is its puddle on that island." "He couldn't climb into his own puddle," Caesar said quietly. "Only one step away."

The writing is not bad, the two worlds, and the combination of multi-system settings are quite novel and attractive to me. The only drawback is that the description of the duel field settings is a bit messy and could be simplified a little. (You have to keep writing, author, just think it's for me and update the novel)

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I finally found a book about cultivating immortals and Hokage. Can the author not want to betray his relatives? I'm afraid of [petrification]

Yes, I like this Sasuke very much. Author, you can't stop updating, otherwise I'll treat you to Amaterasu.