Can't Contract a Mecha Girl? Try an Internal Combustion Engine

I still wonder, will the girl with the malfunctioning machine snatch her away in the future? Recently, I always feel that the comments I have made are not very rigorous. I will try to change them. (Stacked armor: I only listed the poisonous points when competing with Bai, because I only read this) 1. The biggest poisonous point in the book is the malfunctioning robot girl that the protagonist feels is the most suitable. When the protagonist signed a contract with a normal robot girl, it was actually OK not to sign her, and there was no problem. But there is a problem when you write about her being signed away by others and the protagonist regretting it. First of all, the part about her being signed away by others should not be written. From the reader's perspective, she is the most suitable protagonist and has been labeled as a "heroine". Now why are you saying that her being signed away is not a gift girl? Secondly, where does the protagonist have the right to regret? Why should he regret if he didn't even try? He tried the worst but didn't try the one that felt most suitable. Why should he regret it? 2. There are too many women in this book. If you don't want to accept them, then don't write so many women. Once you have developed a relationship with the protagonist and the readers like them, then who will you give them to if you don't accept them? 3. The protagonist modified his own car for a competition. He almost died during the competition, but he still saved the game for nothing. The reason the author gave me was that the modification prediction was different from the reality and he was cautious about the S machine girl? This reason is completely untenable in my opinion. First of all, the protagonist's talent turns him into a being similar to a mechanic, so he modified the car without any test driving and adjustment? The protagonist deserves to die. Secondly, the protagonist was a top professional player in his previous life, so is calmness a must-have for top professional players? The author's reasons are completely untenable. 4. Second only to the poisonous point of the malfunctioning machine girl - the protagonist forgot to take the key during the game. This plot directly overturned the setting that the protagonist was a top professional player in his previous life and even made me doubt the protagonist's IQ. The protagonist, a top player, is too hydrated and can make such low-level mistakes. Even if he was not a professional racing driver in his previous life, doesn't the system give him junior driving experience? Summary: The subject matter is good but the content is too toxic. I want to write about a girl who is a machine but I have to be close to reality. It is close to reality but I can't write about the passion of a racing driver.

The idea is very good. Driving a gasoline truck among a bunch of robot girls is very thoughtful. It breaks away from most of the robot girl themes and looks good. However, there are too many women, so the heroine seems inconspicuous, and some things are too outrageous, such as racing at speeds of over 150 kilometers per hour in urban areas and mountain roads.

In the middle, it looks good, but the update is too slow. I have to go to class, so I dare not say how fast I update, but no matter what, author, come on! ! !

Can the author tell me, what is this robot girl? Is it an omnimachine or something else? It's not mentioned in the article. I was confused when I read it. Also, how developed is this world? I have to explain the world view [face covering] I actually didn't read the comments when I watched it. This is really amazing. I was still thinking about you driving an internal combustion engine, operating at full speed, thrilling, exciting, feeling the speed and passion, but this is the result? I have no desire to continue reading [face covering]

Although the engine girl is high in competition, the internal combustion engine will always be a god (no refutation will be accepted)

The subject matter is very novel. I have written novels with similar themes before in school, but the protagonist is a boot girl. I really hope this book can survive to the end. I must work hard. Author @

To encourage you, if you have anything you don't know, you can ask AI, or you can ask readers. For example, if you want to ask Honda, I can answer part of it. I actually also like the feeling of this old antique in the future (I drive fd2 and plan to keep driving). I have thought about writing a book like this before but I don't have time. You can play Horizon and a drift game to learn about chassis and engine tuning.

Very good subject matter, give me five stars first, keep writing

At first I thought it was a story about a fighter girl, but after reading the first chapter, it turned out to be a story about a racing machine girl. It was quite unexpected, and it is a novel theme. In Chapter 7, when the protagonist was finally about to choose the sleeping machine girl, he was hesitated by the public. It was good, not annoying, not too poisonous. When the contract failed, the public was quite realistic, but after the contract failed, the protagonist was affected by the public's comments and forgot about the sleeping machine girl. The protagonist's mentality is a bit fragile, but he can accept it. Chapter 38, there is a bit of overconfidence there and not enough consideration, it is not a bad review. Chapter 40 is a little childish there. Chapter 75 is a bit irrational and not comprehensive. All in all, this book is a good book. It has a few problems, but it is still very interesting. The protagonist's character and relationship are very good. It's just that the author stopped updating, which is a pity. I'll give you a reward of 9 yuan.

I think the author can write a Dodge Hellcat for the protagonist! Because of an accident, she became a machine girl