Sequence: The Forbidden Scholar

The plot progresses very smoothly, and a male video finally does not have those uncomfortable descriptions of female sexual desire, from the beginning to the end. For this reason, I will give it a five-star rating. Currently, the game is in a suitable range (not purely invincible), and the male protagonist is also growing a little bit. The only bad thing is that there is too little content at the beginning of the book. I hope the author will update it more. [Almost crying][Almost crying][Sending my heart]

Personally, I feel that the look and feel is very good, especially in Tomato. The author should not pay too much attention to other people's bad reviews. Just stay true to yourself and write slowly according to your own ideas. The author does not look like a veteran. The writing is not too mature. Just grow up slowly. The plot and writing style They all feel pretty good, just a little bit off. The feeling of Cthulhu is there. I read that the author did have a lot of bad reviews, but the early Tomato novels were probably like this. The books that are very popular in Tomato are all better. The writing style is relatively refreshing and there are no strange descriptions. It just feels a bit inferior. The protagonist is also a growth type. He is not invincible from the beginning, because many Tomatoes are fast-food and refreshing novels... The pace is fast, and there are many people who can read it. I can't quite accept this slow pace... The writing style is also a little lacking, and the expression is a bit vague. In fact, I am also looking forward to the author's second book, because the second book is often better, but I suggest the author finish this book. Come on, don't give up, and never forget the original intention! (As a long-time Tomato reader, I would like to give the author a fair evaluation [like] [like] [like])

5 Stars, after all, the writing is really good. Give the author some suggestions. 1. After this matter is over, relax the rhythm appropriately. The overall rhythm is a bit rushed, so it would be better to leave a proper relaxation period, and don't be too tight. 2. I hope that the plot of the stage will not be too lengthy. Writing a large amount of ink in one place without ending will cause fatigue after reading for a long time. The plot can be appropriately intertwined.

This book is good. The writing and plot are quite online [like][like][like] It's getting more and more ridiculous. I don't understand what the author's brain circuit is. The plot is written. The reasons explained in the plot are all kinds of intelligence.

The protagonist's attack is very powerful but it doesn't make people feel that it is too high; The atmosphere and rhythm are very tight. For plots with many crises, I personally feel that a tighter rhythm is better. Danger does not give people a chance to breathe. It also made me nervous and immersive. In addition, I think the character of the protagonist is very normal. I see a lot of characters who have a big charisma and "revere ruthlessness". Obviously the protagonist is very humane. A capable person does not have to be ruthless and not care about anyone. He just needs to be able to distinguish the priorities; The current part is quite good, it's not boring, it's growing and developing, and it's not exaggerated to hang up (this is really the key point, the author is very good at writing, and the coordination is very good), I like it, I look forward to it.

If you are full of faintness, you must be full of faintness. The writing is concise and sophisticated, describing a crazy, dark world that needs reason in just a few words. Sorry, two stars are deducted. Compared with the major events that happened, the protagonist has not become stronger after more than 100 chapters, and has no direct combat ability. It makes people feel that there is no hope. At the same time, three major enemies have been clearly established. What we want to see is a protagonist who is not afraid of trouble, can solve problems, and has obvious extraordinary strength, rather than a protagonist who is just on the side of the road. He has to be rescued by others every time and is basically unable to save himself independently.

Forage. Compared with popular novels of the same type, the rhythm, foreshadowing, supporting characters, and environmental description are not as good as others, but there are not many poisonous points, so it is a rare resource. Just keep working hard and maintain the level. (Originally, the ending of the first chapter was quite exciting, but the pacing of the characters in the early stage was average. There was no sense of a peaceful and beautiful life and friends suddenly being wiped out, leaving the protagonist alone, unable to say what he wanted to say. Moreover, the loss of memory by the senior management was also rough in writing, and overall it felt almost meaningless. It was like copying a famous quote in an exam essay, but I couldn't bring it up. I hope this line can be written well in the later stage.) If the first chapter counts as 7 or 8 points, the second chapter of Bronze City can be regarded as the old lady's foot wrap. I don't know what she is doing. It can only reach 6 points, or 5.5.

Good-looking and good-looking, this is the Cthulhu I want. In a desperate world, there is still a glimmer of hope. Just like the Cthulhu myth, mortals can kill gods. They continue to struggle to survive in this desperate world, witness the hidden history of the past, and become the recorders and witnesses of the world. We will remember everything about them.

It's super beautiful, and it's valuable from morning to night. There is no gazing at women's perspective. Female readers really feel comfortable reading it. It doesn't have the feeling of ordinary men's stories. It is more about group portraits. It feels like the protagonist is a witness. Although there is a sense that wherever the protagonist goes, the disaster will happen. However, the disaster already exists, but the protagonist discovers or is ahead of schedule. The night watchman organization is also great, serving the people, and other His organization can also be consistent in dealing with foreign creatures. It seems that there is no backstab now. Everyone has their own small thoughts, but they are also willing to sacrifice their lives when facing strange things. He has a strong sense of the overall situation. The protagonist has experienced a big boss at the beginning and his ability cannot keep up, so he feels like a witness. In fact, the protagonist has done a lot of things later. It's very long and slow, but I really feel that the protagonist has really gone to such a world. It's very immersive, and many of the people are more real. Some of the chapters are longer, and the characters are also very complete. Many people can't accompany the protagonist, so the protagonist is the witness. Most of the time, he meets new people, and then new people. People are leaving one after another, and the protagonist is very gentle. He is not a chaotic protagonist. At first, he is doing it for himself, but after getting to know many night watchmen, he also starts to be a person. From the initial distrust to trust, there is a process. This kind of protagonist is better. On the premise of ensuring his own safety and survival, he can protect others. But it feels like the protagonist's journey has been too difficult. Can this empire still survive? We all have this question, but other organizations that work independently are also willing to fight with their lives on major issues of right and wrong, which is not found in other novels. And there are no slaps in the face, ridicule, or those plots. Villains cannot be said to be villains, that is, they all have their own ideas. Whether they are fighting for benefits or other things, they all have their own ideas and then implement them.

The writing is really good. In addition to the author's love for collecting points, the horror of the system, the bonds of teammates, and even the small conflicts between different organizations and fighting side by side in front of the enemy are all described in detail and deeply rooted in the hearts of the people. Even the supporting characters are plump, and there is no common problem with male authors portraying female characters. There are a few places where AI polishing may have been used (possibly), but overall the flaws are not hidden, and it is highly recommended. It's confirmed. Starting from Chapter 130, AI has been used extensively to write the text. Of course, it can be seen that there are drafts and then fed to AI, and then the text is revised by hand. Although there are already a lot of AI articles in this era, the first is that the paragraphs are too fragmented, which affects reading, the second is that the characters become flat and silent, and the third is that they are disrespectful to other authors and works. I usually give one or two stars to AI articles, but this one is really well written. In the Ke world, it is rare for the protagonist and his teammates to insist on justice and protection in despair. Reading a lot of people's reviews is not satisfying enough. If you're looking for cool articles, don't read Kexi, okay? This article is not a criticism of the Pique genre, but a bit of the core of the genre, in a serious style. At the same time, the protagonist actually has a lot of highlights, and it's always fun to cheat. In just six months, he has surpassed others for decades. So, don't let such a good work be ruined by AI.